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March 28th, 2008

Book Seven - Story 10, Part 2 - Glass Target

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By: Margaret Price

Posted: March 28, 2008

BOOK SEVEN
Story 10 Part 2

GLASS TARGET


Typos. )

Comments, observations, and gripes )

The Quotes )

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Side Story Two - Midnight Collector

April 7th, 2008

Book Seven - Side Story 2 - Midnight Collector

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By: Margaret Price

Posted: April 7, 2008

Notes: In this side story, we get a closer look into the Earl’s formative years and early training as a thief. This story is interesting in that Dorian and the Major never interact. The Earl goes out of his way to avoid contact so that his operation isn’t compromised. Meanwhile the Major sees curly-haired Dorian look-alikes everywhere but never the genuine article, even when he’s right under his nose!

BOOK SEVEN
Side Story 2

MIDNIGHT COLLECTOR


Typos )

Lots of comments, observations, and gripes. )

The Quotes! )

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Next - Story 11 - Seven Days In September - Part 1

April 1st, 2008

Forgotten goodies, corrections, and additions

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By: Margaret Price

Posted: April 1, 2008

Notes: As I've been doing the reviews of the stories, there are some things that I later realized I should have included. Others have made suggestions of lines to include, and our ever-helpful Japanese speakers have expanded on other information.

I've gone back and added these to the original posts. )

March 25th, 2008

Book Six - Story 10, Part 1 - Glass Target

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By: Margaret Price

Posted: March 25, 2008

Notes: I don’t think any other story underscores the love/hate relationship Eroica has with the Major better than this one. For the first time, the Major gets hit with full blown retaliation from Dorian, reciprocal retribution be damned. Their antics are like a sibling rivalry from hell. Let the war between the Major and the Earl begin!

BOOK SIX
Story 10 Part 1

GLASS TARGET


Typos...sort of )

Comments, observations, and gripes )

The Quotes ! )

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Story Ten - Glass Target - Part 2

March 16th, 2008

Book Six - Side Story One - Special Vacation Orders

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By: Margaret Price

Posted: March 16, 2008

Notes: This story is my personal favorite of all the side stories. It has nothing to do with the fact that it’s a Klaus-centric story. (Well, maybe just a little.) I love the fact that the Major seems to have turned off his Iron Klaus radar and is completely oblivious to the KGB swarming around him. Equally amusing is that the KGB interprets everything his does as cunning ploys to thwart them. It is pure crack, and I love it to pieces.


BOOK SIX
Side Story 1

SPECIAL VACATION ORDERS


Typos )

Observations, comments, and gripes )

The Quotes )

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Story Ten - Glass Target - Part 1

March 14th, 2008

Book FIve - Story 9, Part 2b - Alaskan Front

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By: Margaret Price

Posted: March 14, 2008

BOOK FIVE
Story 9 Part 2b

ALASKAN FRONT


Typos & the Royal we )

Comments, observations, and gripes )

The Quotes! )


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Side Story One - Special Vacation Orders

March 10th, 2008

Book Five - Story 9, Part 2a - Alaskan Front

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By: Margaret Price

Posted: March 10, 2008

BOOK FIVE
Story 9 Part 2a

ALASKAN FRONT


Typos and the Royal we )

Comments, observations, and gripes )

The Quotes! )

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Story Nine - Alaskan Front - Part 2b

March 2nd, 2008

Book Four - Story 9, Part 1 - Alaskan Front

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By: Margaret Price

Posted: March 2, 2008

Notes: I realize this will sound odd, but I think this is the most visual story thus far. The author seems very comfortable with the way the characters have been established and is now playing with them. The wonderful wordless images that tell us exactly what the character is thinking. The Major and his men on the plane is a great example. (page 179) She also takes full advantage of the “vastness” of Alaska. There are lots of lovely backgrounds and sweeping landscapes. (pages 181-2, 198, 199, 202,)


BOOK FOUR
Story 9 Part 1

ALASKAN FRONT

The Royal 'we' continues to annoy me. )

Quite a few observations and aside comments. )

The Quotes. )

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Story Nine - Alaskan Front - Part 2a

February 26th, 2008

Book Four - Story 8 - Veni, Vidi, Vici

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By: Margaret Price

Posted: February 26, 2008

Notes: This story has my favorite artistic rendering style for the Major. He no longer has the androgynous look of the first two books, and is more accurately proportioned to a normal human being. As is Dorian. When I think of the Major, this is the style in which I picture him.

Oh, yeah. And the cover is to die for. It isn’t the same as on the Japanese Book Four. I have no idea how the author got the Major into that leather outfit, but I would willingly fight Dorian for a chance to peel him out of it.


BOOK FOUR
Story Eight

VENI, VIDI, VICI


The typos in this story. )

Dorian and the Royal we. )

My observations and gripes. )

On with the quotes! )

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Story Nine - Alaskan Front - Part 1

February 24th, 2008

Book Three - Story Seven - Hallelujah Express

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By: Margaret Price

Posted: February 24, 2008

BOOK THREE
Story Seven

HALLELUJAH EXPRESS


I must admit, I have a bit of a soft spot for this story. )


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Story Eight - Veni, Vidi, Vici

Sooo stupid minor question : Klaus's line on CMX

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Illustrations by: Yasuko Aoike

By: Norwayblue_eyes

Posted: February 24, 2008

Notes: Thanks [info]mprice for the CMX posts.
That reminded me some parts that I've been wondering after reading CMX book.
--- Let me give a prelude, this is really, really stupidly minor thing,
maybe more like language matter to me.

From BOOK SIX --- Side story "Special Vacation Orders"

more and scanned image behind cut )

February 23rd, 2008

Book Three - Story Six - In'shallah

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By: Margaret Price

Posted: February 23, 2008

BOOK THREE
Story Six

IN'SHALLAH


--> This one seems to have the biggest variation between the fan and CMX translation. I’m not sure why. This could be why this post is quite a bit longer than the first five stories.

In'shallah - Tell me if I'm at the TL;DR point. )

February 22nd, 2008

Book Two - Story Five - Dramatic Spring

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By: Margaret Price

Posted: February 22, 2008

BOOK TWO
Story Five

DRAMATIC SPRING


Due to the nature of this cracked out story, this post is rather long. Enjoy! )


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Story Six - In'shallah

Book Two - Story Four - Love In Greece

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By: Margaret Price

Posted: February 22, 2008

--> Am I the only one who thinks the drawing of Iron Klaus in the inside cover makes him look about eighteen?

BOOK TWO
Story Four

LOVE IN GREECE


Spies, shipping tycoons, and crossdressing in Greece )


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Story Five - Dramatic Spring

February 20th, 2008

Book One - Story Three - Achilles' Last Stand

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By: Margaret Price

Posted: February 20, 2008

BOOK ONE
Story Three

ACHILLES’ LAST STAND



Last Story of Book One in which we bid a fond farewell to Caesar & Co. )


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Story Four - Love In Greece

February 19th, 2008

Book One - Story Two - Iron Klaus

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By: Margaret Price

Posted: February 19, 2008

BOOK ONE
Story Two

IRON KLAUS



--> The Major’s superior is referred to as Director in the CMX translations, and Chief in the fan translations. I prefer the latter, and use it when referencing dialogue.

The Major makes his entrance. Let the crack begin! )


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Story Three - Achilles' Last Stand

CMX Translations - So right, so wrong, so...slashy?

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By: Margaret Price

Posted: February 19, 2008

Notes: I started this on the Eroicafans.org message board last February, but had to stop because of a death in the famly. I suppose it's time I started again. I was in the process of reading all the CMX translations because I didn't really sit down and do that when I got them. There are some glaring errors (to me, anyway) and some humorous and slashy bits. That is what I'd like to share, story by story. If I missed something humorous and/or slashy, let me know.

--> First off, let my say it annoys me that everyone calls Dorian “Earl” instead of “Lord Gloria” or “my lord” or “your lordship.” Okay. Moving on...

BOOK ONE
Story One

A THOUSAND KISSES


Probably the only story that conforms in any way to 'formula' manga. )

January 3rd, 2008

Klaus vs his Dad

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Illustrations by: Yasuko Aioke

By: Norwayblue_eyes

Posted: January 3, 2007

Notes: Happy new year 2008!

*I forgot to write this....*
Hi, there, I've been watching this community and this is my first post here.

Thanks mprice and rsadelle for the fictions for the new year's Eve and days in castlegloria --- and some of them include matter of the Eberbachs's hair.
Klaus's singlehood, the relationship with his father including the matter of the Eberbachs' heir ---- it all boils down to the issue of Klaus's sexuality which is still unclear in the latest story.

For your reference, here are some panels from canon.
Let's have a look at how Klaus reacts to his father over the phones.
(Sorry some of the panels aren't good scanned and the translation is not perfect
but it must be good enough to understand stories)

*Remember to read from upper right to down left.
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1: from "Glass Target" Vol.7 P.189/CMX

This is the first scene that reveals the relationship between Klaus and his dad.
He changes his attitude the moment he realized it is his father.

1.speak to Dad

1.speak to Dad2
2A : from "The boys' Gold" Vol.31 P.114/Princess Comics/Akita-Shoten
Klaus got a call from his father a while after the butler had left to his hometown for Christmas (in 2005).
His father made sort of indirect sercastical comments about Klaus's still being single.
2.Klaus speaks to Dad, on Vol31
From the the top:
Klaus: Ah, Why, it's father?!
I am just leaving for business.
( Note: he's lying)

Father: Is the butler there?

Klaus: He's left to his hometown for his grand mother's 100th birthday.

Father: What're you talking about?
His parents and grand parents are in their graves, and
an elder brother is the only relative left.


Klaus: Oh, are they?

Father:
How many decades have you been taken into care by him being so unconcerned, bloodless clod!


Klaus:
He talks no that much about himself.

Father: Don't make excuse!
You are so heartless that you can't get married!

Klaus: ( There you go again.)


Klaus: I wonder why he has to be mendacious to return his home.

Do you happen to know something about that, Sir?


Father:

I suppose it would be his marriage talks.

It must've been difficult for him to tell that such an issue to his master who's still single at his age.

Sorry for him, he's got so much carking cares.

Klaus: ( You persistant old coot.)

....Continued to the next panel 2B.

2B : from "The boys' Gold" Vol.31 P.114/Princess Comics/Akita-Shoten
-----Continued from the 2A above.
2.Klaus speaks to Dad, on Vol31
From the upper right - hand;

Klaus: If that's ture, I'd be happy to bless him.

Father: Don't gloss over, You are behind an old man in that!

Klaus: ...Don't be so confident of your own conjecture.

Father: Who are you talking like friends to, clod!!

Klaus: Sorry, Sir.


*Knock* Knock*


Klaus: Oh, my men showed up to pick me up now.
We'll be talking about it later.

Father:
Tell him I called.

Klaus: Yes, I will.
Then Merry Christmas, Sir.

Father: Good.

(throwing the handset)

Klaus : He is so spiteful an old goat!
Why don't you write his memories forever in Switzerland!


3 : from "Good visitors in the holy night" in Dec. issue of monthly Princess Magazine /Akita shoten
Klaus got a phone call from his father at chirch with Dorian in London.
3a:
3.Klaus speaks to Dad, on Vol31

...Skipped.....


3b:
3.Klaus speaks to Dad, on Vol31

3.Klaus remembering his boyfood with his father
From the upper right -hand;
Dorian: It's a call for you.

Klaus: I know that!

Klaus: Ah----, why, is it father?!

I am so sorry that I am not able to have you in Bonn, I'm on business now.
( Note: he's lying)



I... am attending a church service right now.









...Skipped.....




on the 3b panel;


Father: Klaus, I don't have any grandchild yet.

All of your cousins are now settled, having family, becoming good parents.


Klaus: (Here you go again--!)


Klaus: I'm afraid I'm lost among the singing voice of the hymn, Sir!


Father: Then I'll speak that out again.


Klaus: You don't need to,
I'm going to hear you out next time, Sir!

Take care not to catch a cold over there.

Father: I'm not so old that you care about.

Klaus : Excuse me, Sir!


Father: Keep the faith, striving to better yourself with responsibility as
a member of society.
Merry Christmas, son.

Klaus : Merry Christmas, Father.

(blip)

Klaus : Phew..(big sigh)

4: from "Good visitors in the holy night" in Dec.07 issue of monthly Princess/Akita shoten
Klaus is remembering his boyfood looking at people going to eveing Mass in London.
(this sence happens before the 3 panel above.)
3.Klaus remembering his boyfood with his father
From the the top:

Klaus:
(looking at people going Mass)

The locals are going to the evening Mass.

My old man and the butler were used to take me to the chirch in Bonn when I was kid.


(silence)


(once holding, and throwing the cell phone)




Klaus: Nah. I'd certainly get offended.




As far as looking at canon, it looks like the later the stories go, the more Klaus became
softened to his father ( hmm, he got old?) .

In the earlier story (Glass Target), It is more like he feels really annoyed,with not a good feeling.
And in the later it is more like he feels the strain, can't oppose to dad.

And at least to me, it looks like he is not necessarily uninterested in marriage.
If he intends not to get married, he can take a clearer stance to his father.
(I love his upset face on the right of the first 3b panel thogh!)


...What do you think?

March 31st, 2007

Scanlations

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By: orpheneritus

Posted: March 31, 2007

Notes: I have recently joined the community and I thought I'd let you know I am hosting the From Eroica with Love scans which are available for direct download, no waiting for slots or expired links.

esda was amazingly generous about uploading the Erioca scans to make this a possiblity. Many thanks again.

Scans are available for download here</p>

February 5th, 2007

A Treat For The German Speakers

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Illustrations by: Yasuko Aoike

By: Margaret Price

Posted: February 5, 2007

Notes: I found this in the back of book 17. It is a scene from "Emperor Waltz" and Aoike seems to have been in a playful mood. Since the person Klaus is speaking to is Austrian, it makes sense that they would be speaking in German. So the author put these 4 pages in the back in German rather than Japanese.

If you've read "Emperor Waltz" you'll already know what's going on. If not, these might be considered spoilers. Either way, enjoy.

EDIT -- Thanks to esda, I was able to correct my typos. (I left the ones that are in the manga.) She also uploaded larger versions to make them easier to read.

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