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26 August 2007 @ 05:22 pm
Theme #5: Kinnetik - 6 of 6  
Title: Sound
Author: Xie
Beta: (yes, I had a drabble beta’d, bite me) [info]testdog65
Timeline: Hmmm, post S-5 but who knows when?
A/N: For the “Kinnetik” porn challenge. Just a few words, inspired by a bunny from [info]notreallyme10.


I’d fucked Justin in public, a hundred men watching us. I’d made him shout when I knew half a dozen people were in the next room and heard it. I’ve bitten and thrust and told him I wanted to hear him.

That night, he was leaning across my desk, fingers scrabbling for the edge, his legs shaking while I fucked him. He moaned, and it shot right through me. I felt him take in a breath. I suddenly didn’t want anyone to hear that sound but me.

I pressed my hand against his mouth, and he groaned into my palm.
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happier_bunny: b/j 110 hotel sex[info]happier_bunny on August 26th, 2007 10:53 pm (UTC)
Oh wow, you say more with 100 words than most people can with an unlimited number.

This was amazing and hit me straight in the heart...and maybe somewhere a little lower. ;)
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on August 27th, 2007 06:51 am (UTC)
singlewoman: B/J kiss by paddies[info]singlewoman on August 26th, 2007 11:00 pm (UTC)
Wow, you can really say a lot in a few words. This was great.
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on August 27th, 2007 06:51 am (UTC)
vlredreign[info]vl_redreign on August 26th, 2007 11:30 pm (UTC)
That was intense, considering it was only a hundred words. Damn good!!
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on August 27th, 2007 06:50 am (UTC)
vamphile[info]vamphile on August 26th, 2007 11:51 pm (UTC)
you do more in a hundred words than i do all day.
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on August 27th, 2007 06:50 am (UTC)
secretsolitaire: bj 311 floor sex[info]secretsolitaire on August 27th, 2007 12:20 am (UTC)
God, that last line is so intimate. This is gorgeous and very hot.
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on August 27th, 2007 06:50 am (UTC)
testdog65: cha cha close-up[info]testdog65 on August 27th, 2007 12:32 am (UTC)
I’m still in awe of how effectively this works with so few words. The heat, the love, the beautiful imagery – it’s all there in such a perfectly encapsulated moment. I love this so much.

~Ellen
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on August 27th, 2007 06:49 am (UTC)
flamencanyc[info]flamencanyc on August 27th, 2007 12:37 am (UTC)
I'm speechless. That's gorgeous.
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on August 27th, 2007 06:49 am (UTC)
brianslave68: follow you[info]brianslave68 on August 27th, 2007 01:37 am (UTC)
You're a goddess with words. Period.
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on August 27th, 2007 06:48 am (UTC)
Britin: cock au vin by paddies[info]_alicesprings on August 27th, 2007 01:43 am (UTC)
Oh. My. God. __________________________________ *dead from the love*
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on August 27th, 2007 06:48 am (UTC)
[info]catcayman on August 27th, 2007 01:49 am (UTC)
This is a phenomenal drabble. More please....:D
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on August 27th, 2007 06:48 am (UTC)
Ny: B&J your's[info]not_yet_defined on August 27th, 2007 02:01 am (UTC)
i believe my orginal words were something like fucking awesome drabble.

that doesn't really do it justice though.

100 words just don't get put to any better use than this.

thanks xie!
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on August 27th, 2007 06:47 am (UTC)
[info]celeste3028 on August 27th, 2007 02:32 am (UTC)
Oh my sweet Lord!!! That was good.
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on August 27th, 2007 06:47 am (UTC)
adorkablenerd[info]adorkablenerd on August 27th, 2007 02:53 am (UTC)
Wow, that was intense. So much said in so little words. Loved it.
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on August 27th, 2007 06:46 am (UTC)
[info]herefordroad on August 27th, 2007 03:29 am (UTC)
i think brian had a romantic moment (don't tell him!) when he pressed his hand against justin mouth...keeping all of the sounds for himself. i love this!
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on August 27th, 2007 06:45 am (UTC)
[info]plasticine_star on August 27th, 2007 04:14 am (UTC)
Wow, this was just beautiful but this line just guh!

I suddenly didn’t want anyone to hear that sound but me .
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on August 27th, 2007 06:45 am (UTC)
bodleian[info]bodleian on August 27th, 2007 08:07 am (UTC)
So few words but what is said is wonderful. Thanks for writing.
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on August 28th, 2007 05:52 am (UTC)
[info]reizaine on August 27th, 2007 12:11 pm (UTC)
oh wow that was powerful! hot like hell in the way that overwhelms you, because not only is the sex superduper, these 100 words are filled with The Love. i liked this a lot.
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on August 28th, 2007 05:52 am (UTC)
notreallyme10[info]notreallyme10 on August 27th, 2007 01:24 pm (UTC)
I’m so thrilled that you took my porny suggestion and turned it into this beautiful little drabble. Certainly not the pure porn I suggested, but so much better! Thank you!
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on August 28th, 2007 05:53 am (UTC)
[info]rosy5000.livejournal.com on August 27th, 2007 03:45 pm (UTC)
100 VERY hot words!

AAAaaaaaaaamazing! ;)
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on August 28th, 2007 05:54 am (UTC)
[info]noteverything on August 27th, 2007 10:29 pm (UTC)
I think drabbles are immensely interesting when done well and this one is superlative.

Sexy and intimate.
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on August 28th, 2007 05:54 am (UTC)
[info]claramarie12 on August 27th, 2007 11:30 pm (UTC)
Awesome-- should we expect any less at this point? You are the goddess.
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on August 28th, 2007 05:55 am (UTC)
Sidhe[info]sidhe on August 28th, 2007 12:09 am (UTC)
All I can say is is excuse the drool while I pass out. *THUD* Nothing quite like Brian being romantic in his own unique way. : )
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on August 28th, 2007 05:55 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]sidhe on August 29th, 2007 02:49 am (UTC)
firehead: Only Time[info]firehead30 on August 28th, 2007 02:20 am (UTC)
indescribable
I was about to leave feedback that was longer than the drabble. Thought that would be overkill.

Intimate, intense, intoxicatingly insightful.
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Re: indescribable - [info]xie_xie_xie on August 28th, 2007 05:55 am (UTC)
(Anonymous) on August 28th, 2007 04:03 am (UTC)
That was a most excellent drabble!

Jude
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on August 28th, 2007 05:56 am (UTC)
[info]snowmore on September 5th, 2007 01:49 am (UTC)
So few words.
So full of meaning.
So sexy.
So right.
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