18 April 2009 @ 10:18 pm
Theme #12: Without Words - Fic 4 of 5  
Title: The Best Thing about Justin

Author: Xie

Beta'd by the darling [info]testdog65 -- THANK YOU!

Timeline: S4

The best thing about Justin was the way he smelled when I was drunk and we were dancing.

I felt my heart hammering while his teeth nipped at my throat, and wondered if that's what my doctor meant when he said I could do a little light cardio. Then Justin's damp hair brushed across my mouth, and I didn't think about anything for a while.

Just music and lights, noise and the crowd, Justin's thigh hard and rough against my cock.

I kissed some E into his mouth, and after a little while the light got brighter and the music better, and Justin's skin felt hotter when I stroked it.

Maybe it was the E, but kissing Justin on that dance floor felt like flying.

We were home later, his face buried between my legs, my cock sliding past his lips into his throat, my fingers tugging at his hair. I thought maybe his mouth was the best thing about Justin. He tightened his lips around me, and I groaned, pulling, pulling on his hair.

The sheets were smooth, almost slippery under my feet. I was waiting for… something. Justin sucked harder on my cock, tongue flicking over the head, but then he stopped. He didn't even breathe.

I pressed down with my heels, hard, and lifted my hips off the bed.

He breathed and moved, and there was the shock and jolt of his spit-slick finger slipping in there, pressing against my hole, then inside me.

He'd pulled away from my cock, and his hair brushed across the skin inside of my thighs, his mouth trailing a kiss across my hip.

I resisted for a second. I didn't know why, because his finger inside my ass wasn't enough.

Then I rolled over.

His finger was gone, but came back a second later, wet with lube. I shoved my face deeper in the pillow, breathing hard and hot while he slipped a second finger inside, his knuckles bending and turning as they pulled me open.

I heard the sound of a condom wrapper tearing, just tried to breathe and not think, the pillow wrinkled under my cheek. The insides of my eyelids were black and spangled with sparks.

His finger wasn't enough but his cock was too much, too big, too thick, pressing against me, into me. I moved a little more onto my knees and he slid inside me. And I thought, maybe the best thing about Justin is his cock, tearing me open while he rides over my prostate, ripples of pain and electric pleasure tangling themselves up inside me.

Justin's making sounds against the skin of my back, his breath hot and panting. I try to listen to him breathe, try not to get lost in the fuck, but he won't let me. He moves his hips just like when we were dancing, and I feel everything lock in place again, hard cock on that sweet spot, the smell of him, his mouth kissing me, tasting my skin, my sweat…

everything tensing up, spiraling into a hot ball right where he's fucking me, over and over.

He doesn't stop after I come, thrusting into me even when it's too much. There's an ache inside me that I'm going to feel for days, and his fingers are leaving bruises.

He was gentle when he pulled out, but I didn't turn over right away. He tossed the condom and turned out the light, lying down next to me, not touching. Just watching me. Breathing.

A little while later I turned over, stretching my arms over my head, feeling the burn in my thigh muscles and the ache in my ass.

He rolled into my side when I put my arm around him. And just before I fell asleep I thought: This is the best thing about Justin.
 
 
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[info]butternutsquash on April 18th, 2009 10:05 pm (UTC)
YAY for this. So hot and it ends so sweet.
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on April 19th, 2009 01:22 am (UTC)
[info]noteverything on April 18th, 2009 10:15 pm (UTC)
I'd have to agree with Brian.

Lovely ending to a hot little fic. :-D
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on April 19th, 2009 01:23 am (UTC)
[info]pour_us_a_road on April 18th, 2009 10:34 pm (UTC)
So hot and so much love.
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on April 19th, 2009 01:23 am (UTC)
1bongo1[info]1bongo1 on April 18th, 2009 10:45 pm (UTC)
You made my wicked little fantasies come true... I love you for that!
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on April 19th, 2009 01:24 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]1bongo1 on April 19th, 2009 10:19 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on April 19th, 2009 11:09 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]1bongo1 on April 20th, 2009 12:20 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on April 20th, 2009 12:37 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]1bongo1 on April 20th, 2009 12:42 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on April 20th, 2009 12:56 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]1bongo1 on April 20th, 2009 01:06 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on April 20th, 2009 01:18 am (UTC)
[info]sjmpets on April 18th, 2009 10:57 pm (UTC)
couldn't get any better than this. hot sweet and a bit romantic.
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on April 19th, 2009 01:24 am (UTC)
frantic_quest: toppy justin[info]frantic_quest on April 18th, 2009 11:22 pm (UTC)
Mmmmmm...very sexy...and perfectly them.
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on April 19th, 2009 01:24 am (UTC)
rosy5000: Brian crawling up Justin[info]rosy5000 on April 19th, 2009 12:15 am (UTC)
*happy sighs* That was so beautiful. Love Brian's thoughts about the best thing about Justin and what he decided at the end. :)
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on April 19th, 2009 01:25 am (UTC)
ahaw9913: [info]ahaw9913 on April 19th, 2009 12:20 am (UTC)
I think maybe Brian thinks everything about Justin is the best thing about Justin.

He moves his hips just like when we were dancing, and I feel everything lock in place again, hard cock on that sweet spot, the smell of him, his mouth kissing me, tasting my skin, my sweat…

Hot + teh love = Wonderful!
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on April 19th, 2009 01:25 am (UTC)
[info]bendabrenda on April 19th, 2009 12:37 am (UTC)
Yummy! The best thing about Brian and Justin is the way they make Us want more!!!Hee hee! Thanks great Fic!
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on April 19th, 2009 01:26 am (UTC)
bodleian[info]bodleian on April 19th, 2009 02:04 am (UTC)
There's hot sex and love - what more could I ask for? As always, thanks.
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on April 19th, 2009 07:06 pm (UTC)
bluemchenkaffee: 117 neckkiss[info]bluemchenkaffee on April 19th, 2009 02:46 am (UTC)
This was hot and full of love at the same time. Loved it.
Thanks for sharing.

Susanne
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on April 19th, 2009 07:05 pm (UTC)
Michi: versatile[info]michira_70 on April 19th, 2009 03:37 am (UTC)
Sexy, hot and full of love.*sigh* Amaaazing!
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on April 19th, 2009 07:05 pm (UTC)
[info]claddagh_girl on April 19th, 2009 04:45 am (UTC)
I don't have any words, just a feeling of being all warm and fuzzy after reading that. Thank you. ♥
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on April 19th, 2009 07:04 pm (UTC)
sanami276[info]ohfreckle on April 19th, 2009 05:42 am (UTC)
So much love for this ♥♥♥
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on April 19th, 2009 07:04 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]ohfreckle on April 20th, 2009 02:33 pm (UTC)
kari: 410 is love[info]kari77 on April 19th, 2009 05:53 am (UTC)
This is all kinds of wonderful. The whole story floated so effortlessly and intense. And I think I died a little happy death when the last line came up.

I felt my heart hammering while his teeth nipped at my throat, and wondered if that's what my doctor meant when he said I could do a little light cardio.
*snorts*

Amaaaaazing! Thank you so much.
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on April 19th, 2009 07:03 pm (UTC)
[info]sandid on April 19th, 2009 07:28 am (UTC)
And another YAH for this.

Loved the title use spattered throughout the fic. After all there were so many things about Justin.

Thanks
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on April 19th, 2009 07:03 pm (UTC)
[info]jule1122 on April 19th, 2009 09:40 am (UTC)
I should be talking about how hot this was, but I'm still all AWWWW from the end.
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on April 19th, 2009 07:02 pm (UTC)
notreallyme10[info]notreallyme10 on April 19th, 2009 09:59 am (UTC)
Aww! Hot of course... but also SO SWEET! What a lovely combo :)
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on April 19th, 2009 07:02 pm (UTC)
Ny[info]not_yet_defined on April 19th, 2009 10:12 am (UTC)
*happy sigh* Hotness and teh love, what could be a better combo?
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on April 19th, 2009 07:01 pm (UTC)
sevigny7[info]sevigny7 on April 19th, 2009 01:21 pm (UTC)
Mmmmm. Sweet, hot and lovely. Just like Justin...
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on April 19th, 2009 07:01 pm (UTC)
[info]dottie_jane on April 19th, 2009 01:31 pm (UTC)
Um, yeah, GUH and stuff. Sorry, you melted my brain.

Also, my icon is a salve for that yucky one above with Brian kissing some skeletor lady.
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on April 19th, 2009 07:00 pm (UTC)
testdog65: B/J S3 reunion [info]testdog65 on April 19th, 2009 03:17 pm (UTC)
The best thing about Justin is... All of this!

I love it when you go inside Brian's head in a scene like this. The restrained intensity is a thing of beauty.

~Ellen
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on April 19th, 2009 07:00 pm (UTC)
[info]on_the_ground on April 19th, 2009 06:58 pm (UTC)
wow.. this was hot and so perfect.. just loved it - thank you! ;)
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on April 19th, 2009 07:00 pm (UTC)
secretsolitaire: toppy justin[info]secretsolitaire on April 19th, 2009 10:22 pm (UTC)
Love this. Hot, of course, and very intimate. I liked this moment especially:

Justin's making sounds against the skin of my back, his breath hot and panting. I try to listen to him breathe, try not to get lost in the fuck, but he won't let me. He moves his hips just like when we were dancing, and I feel everything lock in place again, hard cock on that sweet spot, the smell of him, his mouth kissing me, tasting my skin, my sweat…

Brian trying to maintain some sort of control and failing -- that's what Justin gives him, the ability to let go.

Was the change of tense near the end intentional? It threw me off a little bit.
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(no subject) - [info]xie_xie_xie on April 19th, 2009 11:11 pm (UTC)
outlander: *comes* toes[info]outlander on April 20th, 2009 02:44 pm (UTC)
A perfect little fic that made me laugh, pant a little (OK, a lot) and left me with happy sigh. Thank you so much!

felt my heart hammering while his teeth nipped at my throat, and wondered if that's what my doctor meant when he said I could do a little light cardio
*snort*

I try to listen to him breathe, try not to get lost in the fuck, but he won't let me. He moves his hips just like when we were dancing, and I feel everything lock in place again, hard cock on that sweet spot, the smell of him, his mouth kissing me, tasting my skin, my sweat…
Brian losing himself in Justin, so deeply we can feel it with all of our senses...Guh. I love it when you crawl in his head. ;D

And all snuggled in the last line? *melts*

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