eek!
first you killed me the picture you created in my mind. this:
My ass hit the table and I leaned back to keep my balance. My hands squished into the wet paint, which left me a little stuck because now I couldn’t put my hands in his hair, and with the whole pants around my ankles thing, I couldn’t even wipe them off on my jeans. I worried about this for approximately less than a second, and then I really couldn’t process anything beyond what he was doing to me.
was so hot and fresh and brilliant. it was the opposite of keeping balance.
And that you carried the wet paint through the action was just guh (maybe i'm weird, but it worked for me, added a new layer of texture to the scene)
and then this: I kind of wanted my pants back if this was going to be some kind of serious discussion. made me laugh out loud.
and then the end...SQUEE.
:D thank you.
THANK YOU! for the challenge.
Yeah, I decided if i was going to set in in the studio i was going to make it about fucking in the studio, so paint and brushes and you know, Teh Love because all the porn won't save you if you don't have the love.
i'm so glad and relieved that you liked it.
He stared at me for a long time, and I kind of wanted my pants back if this was going to be some kind of serious discussion. Then again, we made a lot of important decisions without pants, so I just kept waiting.
This part filled me with all kinds of glee. It's so true! The blow job was ridiculously hot, and the ending was ♥.
it is true, they're quite communicative with or without pants.
I said i didn't think i'd write a story where they stay in pittsburgh but apparantly i now have a "'verse" where that happens so it's always nice to play with this post 507 AU verse.
I was all prepared to just focus on how hot the blowjob was, then Brian asks Justin to move in because Brian loves him and proposes too... *is ded from the happy* ♥
thanks. occasionally, i write fics and in the end, without my knowing it's about to happen, Brian proposes. I'm schmoopy like that.
GUH
I'd like to offer something insightful, but umm...yeah.
Not only was it hot, but the ending? OMG!!
So I melted, then re-formed and squee-ed and then melted again.
Amazing. We all knew Brian could do romance. :)
no one's ever questioned it but him.
i'm glad you could squee, that was the purpose of the ending.
For starters, I love Personal Space and I love that this gave me a reason to read that again. And then this is just perfect. It's hot and sweet and I just love every part of it.
i really wanted, when i wrote personal space, to write the sequel and this was the perfect opportunity. it worked well for the challenge and for me.
I miss see new stuff from you, so this was a lovely, wonderful, romantical fix! Thank you...
“What?” I didn’t see that last one coming, you know, ever. And that line just made me grin like a silly fool.
&hearts I really enjoyed this!
the line you quoted... that's MY fave line in the fic. I enjoyed writing this, it just flowed, and came out schmoopier than i expected but i'm still happy with the schmoop level.
*happy sigh*
That was lovely.
I thought he knew I was way too much of a drama queen to ditch his ass without even a meaningful look before I took off.
Hee!
You'd think this was my favorite line: He did something complicated that involved his tongue, suction, the angle of his head and, well, being Brian Kinney, and I came, my body shaking a little.
But I have to admit - it's this one: He nodded again, this time as if he were confirming his own mathematical calculation before continuing. “I love you. You love me. We’re a hell of a lot better together than apart. Marry me.”
Thanks for sharing!
~JK
thanks for commenting! Lovely... great word.
This was wonderful and so perfectly them, loved every word. :D
i think it's the closest i've ever gotten to canonical which is amazing considering it's an AU.
OMG! I can't tell you how much I love this little fic!
At first it was HOT,HOT,HOT...and then:
“I love you. You love me. We’re a hell of a lot better together than apart. Marry me.”
Awww.....
♥
brian can be quite persuasive, and schmoopier than he knows.
Most excellent story ever. I'm saving it to memories.
My fav part: I didn’t see that last one coming, you know, ever.
thanks that'smy fave line too. saving to memories... you're so sweet.
*is happy to have kilt you*
“What?” I didn’t see that last one coming, you know, ever.
Perfect!
Thanks, I liked that line too.
The blowjob was OMG hot and the ending was just what I needed, wonderful. You made this girl very happy.
Oh, this was so much more than porn. Of course the porn part was hot and urgent and needy. Loved how you worked the paint into the porn - and onto both of them! But the ending left me all warm inside. So completely full of teh love. I enjoyed this one immensely!
~Ellen
Thanks. As i said, i if i was going to write Studio!sex i wanted it to fully be in the studio with all the benifits and drawbacks therein.
the schmoop is just my post 507 AU take on how i thought it might go down, and i'm happy with it.
Bonemeltingly hot, snort out loud funny and romantically filled with the love. It's the perfect fic. Thank you!
perfect? awww. thank you.
What a sweet story. You made me LOL with this bit:
...I kind of wanted my pants back if this was going to be some kind of serious discussion. Then again, we made a lot of important decisions without pants, ... When he finally spoke I stopped thinking about my pants completely.
I love Brian's proposal and logical arguments for why Justin should of course agree. And that Justin knows what a big romantic Brian really is.
and justin of course does agree... while brian continues to deny his romantic bent.
Awwww, hot and schmoopy, and now I feel all mushy and fuzzy. Perfect ♥
*squee* for romantic!surprising!brian
hey! Brian can do romance :P
That's just beyond fantastic! Oh, teh love!!
Thanks! :)
Perfectly sane reasoning:)) "He nodded again, this time as if he were confirming his own mathematical calculation before continuing. “I love you. You love me. We’re a hell of a lot better together than apart. Marry me.”" You capture both of them perfectly! |