Ellen, the way you write is SO BEAUTIFUL, it honestly makes me ache. I swear it's magic.
I loved so many lines, but there's one that really stood out to me, capturing the essence of S1 Brian in just a few perfectly chosen words.
He wills himself to lie still, empty his mind and sleep, which is why he's understandably confused when, minutes later, he's sliding the loft door shut and heading for the elevator.
Thank you for sharing this.
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NotEverything (noteverything) wrote in bj_action on June 5th, 2008 at 03:52 am