Holy mother. I need a cigarette and I don't even smoke! Brian in control (but barely hanging onto it!) is so hot. A few favorite parts:
I do everything he loves. I pinch his nipples and squeeze his balls and tease his hole and the entire time I have his cock lodged in my throat. He's completely fucking gone and he's resorted to a pillow over his face to keep Deb at bay.
And just when I can feel his orgasm coming, I stop.
He's shaking. Literally quivering.
Oh, yes please. *licks quivering Justin*
I wet my fingers with extra lube and smear it around his asshole. He whimpers. He's finally giving in and letting me have my way. His hole twitches against my fingers. I rub harder and use my other hand to pull gently on his balls.
Nnnnngh.
I wet my lips and then run them over the head of his dick. He hisses. His precome is all over my lips when I kiss him.
"I'm going to let you come now."
I pet his tight little belly to calm him but every touch just winds him up tighter. He covers his face with his hands when I take him back in my mouth. His legs spread further and I take the hint.
My fingers slide into him easily and I touch him right where he wants it.
The pressure on his prostate puts him over the edge. From the way he moves against me I can tell it was worth the wait.
*takes a cold shower*
Also, your Deb is fabulous, whether she's in the scene or not! ;-)
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secretsolitaire (secretsolitaire) wrote in bj_action on June 5th, 2008 at 03:33 am