04 June 2008 @ 08:31 pm
Theme # 9: Season One With a Twist - 5 of 6  
Title: The Cure

Author: [info]notreallyme10

Timeline: Post KOB

A/N: Thank you to my beta [info]_alicesprings





Deb is normally laid back with the rules, but Justin has a cold and she's gone all fucking mother hen. When she answers the door she immediately starts ranting and raving about how he needs his rest.



"I've got his chicken soup right here."



The hand gesture says it all.



Vic bursts out laughing and Debbie wants to yell but she's having a hard time keeping a straight face. I'm up the stairs before she has a chance to compose herself and she must decide it isn't worth it because she doesn't follow.



I find him in his bedroom.



"You look like shit."



"I don't feel so hot either asshole."



"If you weren't hot, I wouldn't be here."



My hands are on his chest, pushing him towards the bed. I yank his ridiculous pajama pants off just as he falls back.



I suck his dick hard and fast, taking him as deep as I can.



He's so loud I'm afraid Deb is going to burst in any minute screaming about his sore throat and resting his voice, so I use my hand to cover his mouth but he bats me away.



"Stop covering my mouth, I can't breath through my nose and you're fucking suffocating me."



"So I guess that means I can't fill your mouth with my dick."



He sits up and runs his hand through my hair and looks at me full of fake sincerity.



"I guess you'll just have to settle for my ass."



That ass is what lured me off the dance floor and over here to Deb's house on a fucking Friday night. And the fucker knows it. Getting up and walking out crosses my mind.



But his dick is right in front of me. Leaking. For all of his cocky bullshit he wants me so fucking bad he'll do anything to get me.



I push him down and go back to his cock.



I do everything he loves. I pinch his nipples and squeeze his balls and tease his hole and the entire time I have his cock lodged in my throat. He's completely fucking gone and he's resorted to a pillow over his face to keep Deb at bay.



And just when I can feel his orgasm coming, I stop.



He's shaking. Literally quivering.



He's sick. And beautiful. And irritating. And it makes me want to torture him endlessly. But at some point Deb's going to barge in here, most likely without knocking, and make me leave.



I figure fuck it. We all know that I can come while Deb's yelling at me. And if he can't, well then that's his problem.



Having his dick in my mouth makes me want to taste his come, but it just doesn't fit into the plan right now.



I strip my clothes off, put on a condom and push his legs up against his chest. I push into him and he tries to grab his dick. He loves the initial stretch, that tight, almost too much feeling, and he's so close he could probably come with just a few strokes. But I don't let him. I pin his arms above his head.



"Stop."



He listens. He'll go along with whatever I tell him right now.



He wants it so bad he tries another tact. He grabs the back of his thighs and pulls them even closer to his body giving me more access.



I take it.



Each thrust is deep and hard. But I go slow. Slow enough that he can't come. All he can do is push up against me and beg for more.



I can feel the slow build of my orgasm begin. His hole feels so tight on my cock and he's squeezing down on me trying to take control anywhere he can get it.



I pull out of him and lean back. His head thrashes on the pillow. He's panting heavily through his mouth but he just looks at me and pulls his legs wider.



I wet my fingers with extra lube and smear it around his asshole. He whimpers. He's finally giving in and letting me have my way. His hole twitches against my fingers. I rub harder and use my other hand to pull gently on his balls.



"I'm going to come now Justin."



I see the confusion and lust on his face when I push into him.



I fuck him the way he wants it. But it's too fast for him. My orgasm hits hard. I don't take time to pull myself together. I moaned loud enough that Deb and Vic probably heard me, which means time is running out. And he has waited long enough.



When I pull away from him this time the cockiness is gone and all that is left is desperation.



I wet my lips and then run them over the head of his dick. He hisses. His precome is all over my lips when I kiss him.



"I'm going to let you come now."



I pet his tight little belly to calm him but every touch just winds him up tighter. He covers his face with his hands when I take him back in my mouth. His legs spread further and I take the hint.



My fingers slide into him easily and I touch him right where he wants it.



The pressure on his prostate puts him over the edge. From the way he moves against me I can tell it was worth the wait. He grabs my head and fills my mouth with his come. I suck through the aftershocks until the tension leaves his body.



I try to lay down beside him, but he pulls me in even closer, almost on top of him, and kisses me. His body is limp but he kisses me long and slow.



"Feel better?"



"I think I forgot I was sick."



I snort a little laugh and then bury my face in his neck. Just for a minute. Just until Deb kicks me out.



***



Deb's smug look when I stumble downstairs in the morning is almost too much to handle. So I just ignore her and pour myself a cup of coffee.



She insists I stay for breakfast and I figure I might as well save myself a trip to the diner later.



When Justin comes down the stairs looking like his normal chipper self for the first time in days she breaks out in a huge smile.



"That must have been some fucking chicken soup."

 
 
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qafcracked: Hotel Ecstacy[info]qafcracked on June 5th, 2008 01:38 am (UTC)
Can I just say how much this amused me so? It was so clever and funny and guh, panty melting.

I'd leave quoty feedback, but there were so many great lines, I'd end up quoting the whole thing. Oh, and the covering the mouth/stuffy nose thing was hilarious. And the last line, priceless.
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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10 on June 7th, 2008 03:20 pm (UTC)
xie_xie_xie: fuck me better[info]xie_xie_xie on June 5th, 2008 01:46 am (UTC)
FUCKING CHICKEN SOUP. OMG, the brilliance of that has completely overwhelmed EVEN THE HOTNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!

What a great, great fic!
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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10 on June 7th, 2008 03:21 pm (UTC)
pendulumchanges: 110 - hotel sex Brian hovers[info]pendulumchanges on June 5th, 2008 01:47 am (UTC)
*squeee!* Loved it! Justin not being able to breathe through his nose and telling Brian he's suffocating him cracked me up. I love Deb, both in the beginning and at the end. And this is too adorable for words:

"I think I forgot I was sick."

I snort a little laugh and then bury my face in his neck. Just for a minute. Just until Deb kicks me out.


And of course, guhhhhhh... so hot! Great fic *hugs*
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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10 on June 7th, 2008 03:22 pm (UTC)
Ny[info]not_yet_defined on June 5th, 2008 01:56 am (UTC)
There are two things I wish to say to you.

1. I think i need to change my undies, and i'm sorry if that is TMI, but you did write porn, and you wrote it really fucking well, so what did you expect.

2. There were two moments that made me literally laugh out loud, and were just perfect...but i'm not leaving quotey feedback here, i'm saving it for the reposts on people's own journals, because then i have a good excuse to reread.

not that i need an excuse for this one.

so. fucking. good.
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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10 on June 7th, 2008 03:18 pm (UTC)
testdog65: B/J 104 early night[info]testdog65 on June 5th, 2008 01:58 am (UTC)
OMG, you wrote S1 hurt/comfort fic in which Brian fucks Justin all better. I so totally love you right now!

I loved the pacing of this, and Brian's control - which was really covering his total lack of control where Justin is concerned. Brilliant and hot and wonderfully written as always!

~Ellen
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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10 on June 7th, 2008 03:25 pm (UTC)
rosy5000: BJ Robe/Toga[info]rosy5000 on June 5th, 2008 03:30 am (UTC)
See!!! Brian's dick does have healing powers! ;D

"I think I forgot I was sick."

Ummm.. yeah, I think I would too. *fans self*
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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10 on June 7th, 2008 03:25 pm (UTC)
secretsolitaire: bj 311 floor sex[info]secretsolitaire on June 5th, 2008 03:33 am (UTC)
Holy mother. I need a cigarette and I don't even smoke! Brian in control (but barely hanging onto it!) is so hot. A few favorite parts:

I do everything he loves. I pinch his nipples and squeeze his balls and tease his hole and the entire time I have his cock lodged in my throat. He's completely fucking gone and he's resorted to a pillow over his face to keep Deb at bay.

And just when I can feel his orgasm coming, I stop.

He's shaking. Literally quivering.


Oh, yes please. *licks quivering Justin*

I wet my fingers with extra lube and smear it around his asshole. He whimpers. He's finally giving in and letting me have my way. His hole twitches against my fingers. I rub harder and use my other hand to pull gently on his balls.

Nnnnngh.

I wet my lips and then run them over the head of his dick. He hisses. His precome is all over my lips when I kiss him.

"I'm going to let you come now."

I pet his tight little belly to calm him but every touch just winds him up tighter. He covers his face with his hands when I take him back in my mouth. His legs spread further and I take the hint.

My fingers slide into him easily and I touch him right where he wants it.

The pressure on his prostate puts him over the edge. From the way he moves against me I can tell it was worth the wait.


*takes a cold shower*

Also, your Deb is fabulous, whether she's in the scene or not! ;-)
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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10 on June 7th, 2008 03:29 pm (UTC)
[info]merepersiflage on June 5th, 2008 03:45 am (UTC)
Hot hot hot and then awwwww! I love this challenge.
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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10 on June 7th, 2008 03:30 pm (UTC)
[info]noteverything on June 5th, 2008 03:59 am (UTC)
I *know* this is porn and I should probably comment on that, but the humor in your writing is just spot-on that it made this so much more than porn.

I figure fuck it. We all know that I can come while Deb's yelling at me.

I need details on that one. *nods seriously*

And of course the last line is perfectly Deb and perfectly...well, perfect! Thanks for sharing this.
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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10 on June 7th, 2008 03:32 pm (UTC)
brianslave68: bj nekkid in bed 116[info]brianslave68 on June 5th, 2008 04:49 am (UTC)
This fic is fantastic and that last line couldn't be more perfect! Excellent job!
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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10 on June 7th, 2008 03:35 pm (UTC)
kata_ny: 107 golden[info]kata_ny on June 5th, 2008 08:25 am (UTC)
guh.
wow.
and you were like queening out about this why???
*breaths hard,very hard*
guh.
so brilliant!!!
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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10 on June 7th, 2008 03:39 pm (UTC)
[info]claddagh_girl on June 5th, 2008 09:12 am (UTC)
That's the kind of chicken soup I love. Hmm.
Why exactly where you freaking out about writing this? It was greatness.
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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10 on June 7th, 2008 03:41 pm (UTC)
singlewoman: Need cock by brianslave68[info]singlewoman on June 5th, 2008 02:11 pm (UTC)
LOVED THIS! Fucking chicken soup indeed. Best cure I've ever read. next time I'm sick I know waht I'll be doing; reading this very hot, very funny fic.
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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10 on June 7th, 2008 04:47 pm (UTC)
Britin[info]_alicesprings on June 5th, 2008 02:17 pm (UTC)
I already told you I love this but it SO bears repeating! Totally brill. Ridiculously hot porn! And it's damn funny too!
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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10 on June 7th, 2008 04:53 pm (UTC)
[info]besamislabios on June 5th, 2008 03:40 pm (UTC)
OMG, brilliant!!! You're truly amazing. So freaking hot. :DDD
And that last line, perfect. :)
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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10 on June 7th, 2008 04:54 pm (UTC)
outlander: Love BJ[info]outlander on June 5th, 2008 05:30 pm (UTC)
I pet his tight little belly to calm him but every touch just winds him up tighter.
This line made by belly and all other parts clench in such a good good way...

Make me melt hot and funny, Brian really does have the cure for the cold...

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10 on June 7th, 2008 04:56 pm (UTC)
[info]tawanda on June 5th, 2008 05:40 pm (UTC)
I loved every bit of this. It made me feel better, and I'm not sick ;-)


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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10 on June 7th, 2008 04:56 pm (UTC)
happier_bunny: b/j 107 lust[info]happier_bunny on June 5th, 2008 06:53 pm (UTC)
OH GOD...you pulled it all together brilliantly and wrapped it up all hot and sweet. LOVED IT! Fucking chicken soup was perfection.

GUH!
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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10 on June 7th, 2008 04:58 pm (UTC)
passing_through: bj_hearts[info]passing_through on June 8th, 2008 03:18 am (UTC)
Wow, I really loved this. It was funny and then incredibly hot. You did a great job capturing s1 Justin and Brian.

"Feel better?"

"I think I forgot I was sick."


Love this line. I could picture them both saying this :)
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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10 on June 8th, 2008 04:51 pm (UTC)
sanami276: Queer as Folk / Justin likes it rough[info]ohfreckle on June 8th, 2008 08:28 pm (UTC)
BRILLIANT! I don't know what's better, the hot porn or the love or the fucking chicken soup.
Either way, it's still brilliant, and so are you ♥
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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10 on June 10th, 2008 04:35 am (UTC)
lougenessis[info]lougenessis on October 29th, 2008 01:56 pm (UTC)
I got his chicken soup right here...I loved it


Who wanna guess who's gonna be sick in a couple of days. lol
This was a winner, I loved it. Thanks!
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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10 on October 30th, 2008 09:47 am (UTC)
Fundles[info]fun_demented on December 15th, 2008 03:26 am (UTC)
This is utterly, flawlessly IC and faithful, especially to S1...and the sex, oh my God THE SEX! I am light headed, you had my heart pounding so fast! I am far more entertained and satisfied than I ever expect to be when seeking fic and as much as I hope to be. WONDERFUL!
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(no subject) - [info]fun_demented on December 15th, 2008 03:27 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10 on December 18th, 2008 07:28 pm (UTC)
(Anonymous) on April 20th, 2009 04:55 am (UTC)
"We all know that I can come while Deb's yelling at me."

[thunks head on desk]

[thumbs up]

Sy5
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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10 on April 21st, 2009 05:47 pm (UTC)
Minxie[info]florida_minxie on September 18th, 2009 05:51 pm (UTC)
*snicker* I got so caught up in the hot and amusing that is B/J the last line startled a laugh out of me. Heh.

I want that remedy next time I get sick. Yeah.
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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10 on September 22nd, 2009 02:51 am (UTC)
galeandrandy: kissbeforestick[info]galeandrandy on December 31st, 2009 05:39 am (UTC)
re The Cure
This was so great! I had asked [info]noteverything if she knew of any sex at Deb's IC fics and she pointed me to her "AGAIN", it just so happened that this was right after it and I'm so glad I clicked next.

I've been craving fics like this and I absolutely loved how Brian was so caring, but also a little devious. :) That was just fabulous. Really loved reading this!
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Re: re The Cure - [info]notreallyme10 on January 7th, 2010 03:26 pm (UTC)