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I want to live inside this feedback forever. THANK YOU!! You have made me very happy!!!
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I tried really, really hard to show and not tell with this fic, and I think I achieved it, which is probably why I do actually like this fic. Unlike most of my others!
And I'm not much of a porn writer, so I'm very pleased you found the blowjob hot. And dude, this is your new canon?? Seriously, you have made me very happy!!!
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Britin (_alicesprings) wrote in bj_action on May 15th, 2009 at 07:18 pm