firehead ([info]firehead30) wrote in [info]bj_action on January 9th, 2008 at 06:52 am
The Visibleverse fills me with happiness.

I love this story on many different levels, but I think what captures it all is this.Brian concentrated on thinning out his wardrobe because it was easier than concentrating on how much he didn’t want to. Besides, fewer black shirts and six months off with Justin vs. keeping his wardrobe intact… no contest and...That statement scared the shit out of me, because if he’s not paying attention, then who is? Right, me. So I push in and watch his body freeze and resist.

He complains when I stop, but sometimes I know his body better than he does. When he relaxes and starts to simply give up all control, my attention doubles, if that’s even possible, and now I’m pressing the third enormous flare into him. He’s whimpering, and turns his head. His body is shaking with the feelings, and it’s a strain for him just to stay up on his knees. I grab a couple of pillows and pile them on top of the clothes already bunched under his hips. He lets his body collapse completely


In the Visibleverse Brian adores Justin's sluttiness and his willingness to try anything, push boundaries. Brian is also Justin's safety net. The way the Justin gives up everything allows Brian to feel everything.

As always, the sex between them is a rich layer of how they communicate and love.

Well done.

I am feeling so nostalgic and happy...ohhhh and I love the You bet your ass reference. YAY
 
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