OMG, I loved that we got to revisit this ‘verse. Yay! Determined Justin and attentive Brian are a fantastic combination here. And wow do they generate the heat! This had an intensity to it that had me holding my breath (and squirming) as I read. Justin’s love for being filled and his transcendence to a different place came across so vividly. As did Brian’s hyperawareness and care, allowing Justin to push himself, but knowing when he’d reached his limit – it’s a thing of beauty. And it results in an incredible amount of wonderful hotness!
~Ellen
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