ok, so i haven't read anything of your's in a really long time, like probably since the first few things you've written. it's not personal, i don't rush through anyone's collection of work. my reason for telling you this is because i'm really amazed with how far you've come in your writting between then and now. this was really fucking good, like, make me want to run out and read all the stuff i haven't been reading of your's good.
i loved that you told this from both pov's. the justin part was satisfying, but then brian part just pushed it way beyond being a simply satisfying read into being an omg so good read.
thank you so very much for contributing, awesome job.
oh, i forgot the most important part of my comment.
GUH. fucking hot...i need a shower now kthnx.
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Ny (not_yet_defined) wrote in bj_action on January 9th, 2008 at 07:14 am