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tensor_mods (tensor_mods) wrote in tensor_ooc,
@ 2011-01-22 20:36:00

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application, info, mod post

Please fill in all fields, then post it to the profile of your IC journal and link below.

Player Info
Name:
Email Address:
IM/MSN Username:

Basic Info
Real Name:
Nicknames:
Affiliation: (Only include this line for adult characters)
Occupation:
Education Level: High School student? College student? Alumni?

Physical
Age/Birthdate:
Height:
Build: slender, stocky, wiry, etc.... Just to give us an idea
Hair: Color, length and style.
Eyes:
Appearance: Please give us a fairly detailed description of your character’s physical appearance including things like their physique, manner of dress and distinguishing features.
Played By:

Powers, Abilities and Stats
Powers: Please be specific and include strengths, weaknesses, and limitations.
Generation: Please specify if your character is a first, second or third generation powered human in their family. Note: Only characters who are canonically second generation or above will be allowed third generation status.
Hearing:
Eyesight:
Dexterity/Agility:
Physical Strength:
General Health:
IQ: How smart are they? Super genius? Moderately bright? Might learn to spell their name someday if someone walks them through it often enough?
Mental Health:
Skills: Anything out of the ordinary goes here.

School Life
School: Middle? High? College or Cadet? (remember being a cadet is a military obligation and comes with considerable loss of personal liberties)
Year:
Years at Xavier's: As of March 1, 2011, all new characters must be new to the school as well. No more applications for established students will be accepted.
Relatives Attending:
Dorm: House, Floor, Room Number. (To be filled in AFTER assigned.)
Roommate(s): To be filled in AFTER assigned.
Pet: refer to this post (To be filled in after pet is applied for and approved on the pet page)
School Team(s): If any.
Activities & Clubs: If any.

Background
Family: Please also list the status of family members. (Powered, Non-Powered, Alien, etc)
Religion:
History: As with powers we’d like some detail here, so that we (and other players once you’re in game) have a good sense of where your character’s coming from.
Personality: Enough to give us a good grasp of who your character is and how they’ll fit into the game, please.
Mannerisms and quirks: Accent? Nervous tick? Do they constantly clear their throat? Run a hand through their hair? Invade peoples’ personal space? Chew their nails? Put it here.
Likes:
Dislikes:

Relationships:
Friends:
Enemies:
Marital status:
Past Relationships: You must clear any relationships with other playable characters with their RPer.
Present Relationships: You must clear any relationships with other playable characters with their RPer.
Planned Relationships:
Sexual Preference:

Info at a glance: Anything you'd like other players/characters to be able to know about your character at a glance - obvious piercings, foibles, mannerisms and the like.

Sample RP
Third person past tense. Only required for first app for new players.

Links to fanfiction/other games/other journals: Established players exempt.

By submitting this application I confirm that I have read and understand the rules and that I am eighteen years of age or older.

Player Info Name: Email Address: IM/MSN Username: Basic Info Real Name: Nicknames: Affiliation: (Only include this line for adult characters) Occupation: Education Level: High School student? College student? Alumni? Physical Age/Birthdate: Height: Build: slender, stocky, wiry, etc.... Just to give us an idea Hair: Color, length and style. Eyes: Appearance: Please give us a fairly detailed description of your character’s physical appearance including things like their physique, manner of dress and distinguishing features. Played By: Powers, Abilities and Stats Powers: Please be specific and include strengths, weaknesses, and limitations. Generation: Please specify if your character is a first, second or third generation powered human in their family. Note: Only characters who are canonically second generation or above will be allowed third generation status. Hearing: Eyesight: Dexterity/Agility: Physical Strength: General Health: IQ: How smart are they? Super genius? Moderately bright? Might learn to spell their name someday if someone walks them through it often enough? Mental Health: Skills: Anything out of the ordinary goes here. School Life School: Middle? High? College or Cadet? (remember being a cadet is a military obligation and comes with considerable loss of personal liberties) Year: Years at Xavier's: As of March 1, 2011, all new characters must be new to the school as well. No more applications for established students will be accepted. Relatives Attending: Dorm: House, Floor, Room Number. (To be filled in AFTER assigned.) Roommate(s): To be filled in AFTER assigned. Pet: refer to the pets post at http://asylums.insanejournal.com/tensor_ooc/3540.html#cutid1 (To be filled in after pet is applied for and approved) School Team(s): If any. Activities & Clubs: If any. Background Family: Please also list the status of family members. (Powered, Non-Powered, Alien, etc) Religion: History: As with powers we’d like some detail here, so that we (and other players once you’re in game) have a good sense of where your character’s coming from. Personality: Enough to give us a good grasp of who your character is and how they’ll fit into the game, please. Mannerisms and quirks: Accent? Nervous tick? Do they constantly clear their throat? Run a hand through their hair? Invade peoples’ personal space? Chew their nails? Put it here. Likes: Dislikes: Relationships: Friends: Enemies: Marital status: Past Relationships: You must clear any relationships with other playable characters with their RPer. Present Relationships: You must clear any relationships with other playable characters with their RPer. Planned Relationships: Sexual Preference: Info at a glance: Anything you'd like other players/characters to be able to know about your character at a glance - obvious piercings, foibles, mannerisms and the like. Sample RP Third person past tense. Only required for first app for new players. Links to fanfiction/other games/other journals: Established players exempt. By submitting this application I confirm that I have read and understand the rules and that I am eighteen years of age or older.

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	Re: Humberto Lopez the_reptil 2011-02-16 08:20 pm UTC (link)
	Changes have been made, thanks for correcting me! (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	Re: Humberto Lopez tensor_mods 2011-02-19 11:46 pm UTC (link)
	There are still a few issues with Humberto's bio and we think it might be more productive to actually discuss them rather than go back and forth this way. Do you have an AIM name we can contact you at so we can go over what still needs work? (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	Re: Humberto Lopez the_reptil 2011-02-20 06:50 pm UTC (link)
	I dont have an IM :\ But I do have an email and IM through that? markthadj@gmail.com (Reply to this) (Parent)

	Re: Humberto Lopez the_reptil 2011-02-22 02:15 am UTC (link)
	Please let me know what problems still remain in my application. :( (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

Re: Humberto Lopez

tensor_mods
2011-02-25 06:42 am UTC (link)

Sorry for the delay, here's another try at helping you sort out what needs fixing.

You still say in Humberto's bio that the fossil triggered his mutation, as if it has some mystical power of its own. It's okay if some outside force catalyzed his mutation, but not because it had some special or magical power. Something that caused stress, pain or fear could have caused his mutation to manifest, but not some sort of external power. No glowing mystical fossil. The reason we wanted to try and discuss this with you is that you don't seem to quite grasp that in the game world there are no mystical forces like Humberto's fossil as you have it written here.

Also, you call the Academy Xavier's Academy for the 'gifted'. While it's primarily geared towards training and educating powered humans there are also unpowered students, it's simply the Charles Francis Xavier Academy.

We also missed a minor discrepancy first time through - in his build you say he's short, but in his description you say he's tall.

We'd also like to recommend that if you truly want to play at Tensor you should really consider getting an AIM address. The vast majority of player interaction, planning and plotting occurs through AIM conversations and we frequently have game-wide chats. If you can't communicate via AIM it's very likely you'll miss out on a lot of play.

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	Re: Humberto Lopez the_reptil 2011-02-25 07:03 pm UTC (link)
	All the changes have been made! :D Also, Im getting an AIM today, so I can better communicate with other players (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	Re: Humberto Lopez tensor_mods 2011-02-28 05:52 pm UTC (link)
	Sorry for the delay. If you're still interested and you've arranged for an AIM address, can you post it here so we can discuss your app? It still reads very much like you're giving the fossil credit for somehow mystically catalyzing his power and we'd like to talk it over with you in real time to see if we can work out the issue. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	Re: Humberto Lopez the_reptil 2011-03-01 06:36 am UTC (link)
	No, I do understand. The plain and simple dinosaur bone triggered his mutation. His mutation reacted to the simple fossil. There is nothing special about the fossil. (Reply to this) (Parent)

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