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Snape vs Lupin - # 8 - "Hating You"

Title: Hating You
Author: red_day_dawning
Challenge: #150 – Snape vs. Lupin
Word count: 110
Rating: G
Disclaimer: JKR & associated companies own the HP characters and settings.
Notes: a follow-on from "Had Everything Changed?".

 

"Do you still hate me?"

Severus resisted the compulsion to kill the conversation, took a breath and replied, "Hate you?  I hate the way your hair gleams gold in the sunlight, I hate the glow in your eyes, I hate the way you smile and how I can't stop thinking about it.  I hate the way I think of you before I go to sleep, and the way I'll wake still thinking of you.  When I take my last breath, I'll be thinking of how much I hate you, Remus Lupin."

Remus stared, astonished.  "Severus," he whispered, and then began kissing him, kissing him as though Severus had confessed to love. 

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[info]sweetmelodykiss

Oh gods yes! Perfect!
Posted on Apr. 6th, 2008 11:10 pm (UTC) | | Thread | Reply

[info]red_day_dawning

Thank you! Great fun to write!
Posted on Apr. 6th, 2008 11:41 pm (UTC) | | Parent | Reply

[info]nimrod_9

Well, of course, it was love, Sytherin style!! lol.
Posted on Apr. 7th, 2008 12:50 pm (UTC) | | Thread | Reply

[info]red_day_dawning

Good thing Remus has no trouble translating Snape!
Thanks.
Posted on Apr. 7th, 2008 12:56 pm (UTC) | | Parent | Reply

[info]xx_kerriann_xx

It's a good thing he understands what Severus really means by that. Go, Remus! *g*
Posted on Apr. 7th, 2008 01:37 pm (UTC) | | Thread | Reply

[info]red_day_dawning

Yeah, I suspect he's an expert at translating Snape.
Thanks so much for your comments!
Posted on Apr. 7th, 2008 01:59 pm (UTC) | | Parent | Reply

[info]cordeliadelayne

Aw, very nice. I love the last line.
Posted on Apr. 7th, 2008 04:43 pm (UTC) | | Thread | Reply

[info]red_day_dawning

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
Posted on Apr. 7th, 2008 05:01 pm (UTC) | | Parent | Reply

[info]alisanne

Mm, he did confess to love in Severus speak. :)
Nice!
Posted on Apr. 9th, 2008 02:07 am (UTC) | | Thread | Reply

[info]red_day_dawning

Yeah - it's lucky Remus can translate Snape. Thank you!
Posted on Apr. 9th, 2008 05:09 am (UTC) | | Parent | Reply