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Title: Catalog of Errors
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Severus/Remus
Challenge #139 Mistakes
Warning: Unbeta’d, mentions M-Preg
 
  
The first time they’d been together had been an incredible passionate release, but a mistake. They had fallen in love, a werewolf and a Death Eater; a huge miscalculation. Together they’d fought with the Ministry to allow their marriage, obviously a colossal blunder. They’d used the latest technology to start their family, Severus vomited for months; it could only be a lapse of titanic proportions.
 
Their sons slept peacefully, and Remus’ arms wrapped more tightly around him.
 
“You all right, love?” Remus croaked sleepily.
 
“Recalling my missteps.”
 
“Hmmm.” Remus snuggled closer.
 
Perhaps his definition of mistake needed to be changed.      
 
 
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[info]alisanne

Oh how lovely! :) *snuggles them all*
Posted on Jan. 18th, 2008 03:09 am (UTC) | | Thread | Reply

[info]nimrod_9

Thanks!! I sure they loved the snuggle!!
Posted on Jan. 18th, 2008 11:33 am (UTC) | | Parent | Reply

[info]blpaintchart

...until the bloody babies wake up and start screaming and he realises there's no way on earth that he's ever going to get his figure back, or have any quality pervy time with his wolf for at least oh, shall we say a decade?
And the high-pitched whining that small children make, and all the mess, and the smell and...
Sorry, was I ranting again? Mpreg & me probably don't mix well!
But I do like how they are so in love *goes soppy*
Posted on Jan. 18th, 2008 12:48 pm (UTC) | | Thread | Reply

[info]nimrod_9

*waves bottle of red wine* Not my only point but think fictional children!! Probably just another reason Wizards send them to boarding school at eleven...you avoid the inevitable smart teenager tell you to "get a room"! Thanks for reading and commenting tho'!!
Posted on Jan. 18th, 2008 03:30 pm (UTC) | | Parent | Reply

[info]vimeslady

You've made me smile widely and happily. This is wonderful - You've captured Snape's character so perfectly, and still let there be warmth and love.
Posted on Jan. 23rd, 2008 05:46 am (UTC) | | Thread | Reply

[info]nimrod_9

Thanks!! I'm glad you thought I kept the character!! Thanks for commenting, too!!
Posted on Jan. 23rd, 2008 11:26 am (UTC) | | Parent | Reply