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#212: Temptation Waits, PG


Title: Temptation Waits
Word Count: A hard-fought 100
Rating: PG
Challenge: #212, Temptation
Characters: Remus/Severus
Author's Notes: Set during PoA. Concrit welcomed, as well as any other comments. Extra thanks to the Lupin_Snape chat room for being so supportive and [info]xxlareinaxx for the title!


If Harry told, he was sure he could save Lupin's job while getting Snape thrown out on his arse.

Snape had been in Lupin's office again, smoking goblet in-hand. Harry had meant to visit, but he'd ended up watching as Lupin stood suddenly, moving in on Snape's face while the git stood his ground. Harry had turned away when Lupin's eyes fluttered closed, but it didn't stop the softly smacking sound from reaching his ears.

Yes, the urge to tell Dumbledore was tremendous. If only Lupin didn't look so young staring at Snape, a sweetly soft smile on his face.


love, lore

Comments

Ah, poor Harry. I love that he does pick up on how good this is for Remus, though, and that that holds him back from telling.
Oh, exactly, Firefly! Thank you so much for picking up on that! *HUGS*

love, lore
bestill my heart... Harry actually -thinking-?! XD I love how he actually does think in this... and how sweet our boys are.

*smush*
Oh, yes, my Harry thinks. It's a failing of mine. ~_^

*HUGS* Thank you so much!

love, lore
This is great - it's like a glimpse of what I imagined happened behind every PoA scene.
Yay for sensitive Harry! And Remus' eyes closing for the kiss! Sweet!!
Very nicely done. Glad Harry realized that this was what Remus needed. Just fabulous!