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snapelyhols_mod (snapelyhols_mod) wrote in snapelyholidays,
@ 2010-12-21 01:14:00

Entry tags:

2010_fic, au, ewe, fic4:r_grayjoy, frottage, snape/harry, wanking

Gift fic for r_grayjoy, Raising Severus, R

Recipient: r_grayjoy

Author: alisanne

Title: Raising Severus

Characters: Severus Snape/Harry Potter, Ron Weasley/Hermione Granger, Minerva McGonagall

Rating: R/Adult

Content Info: *AU, EWE *

Summary: After leaving the Aurors, Harry takes over as Potions master for Hogwarts, and discovers a mystery in the most unlikely place.

Disclaimer: The world of HP and its characters belongs to Rowling.

Word count: ~16,000

Author Notes: r_grayjoy, hope you enjoy this. I tried to include as many of your requests as I could. Happy Snapely Holidays!
A special thank you to my beta reader, to my writing group, and to the mods for again hosting this fabulous Snape love fest.

( Raising Severus )

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	ex_lilyseyes671 2010-12-21 09:34 am UTC (link)
	This is a brilliat story, with humor, a mystery, and lovely supporting cast. I love the desperate edge to Harry at times, the passion with which he throws himself into the mystery and the intriguing magic that solves his dilema! This was marvelous! (Reply to this) (Thread)

alisanne, 2011-01-22 09:54 pm UTC

	aeryun 2010-12-21 10:17 am UTC (link)
	Very imaginative! I am sure to reread this often! (Reply to this) (Thread)

alisanne, 2011-01-22 09:56 pm UTC

	schnuffie 2010-12-21 12:33 pm UTC (link)
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alisanne, 2011-01-22 09:56 pm UTC

vividzephyr
2010-12-21 02:15 pm UTC (link)

Ooh! This is brilliant! I love how you use the Half Blood Prince's journal and the Philosophers' Stone here. It's also wonderful to see Ron being more perceptive than Hermione and working on being a good best friend. Harry's interaction with Snape, even in book form, really built up to Snape's easy acceptance of Harry. I especially adore when they share the bed and Snape wants Harry to come back to bed with him when Harry gets up. :D The ending was just awesome. I do so love happy endings for these two~

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alisanne, 2011-01-23 12:05 am UTC

	lookfar 2010-12-21 04:49 pm UTC (link)
	This was like, Harry, Hermione and Ron are the Hardy Boys! So cute and fun! It seems like it was fun to write and get all the parts in that you wanted to. I especially liked how you kept Snape's portrait asleep but no one had wondered whether that meant something. And it was a treat to see Kreacher again. Nice work! (Reply to this) (Thread)

alisanne, 2011-01-23 12:06 am UTC

	felaine 2010-12-21 08:21 pm UTC (link)
	Here via lilyeyes' rec. Interesting mystery and magic use; love Harry wishing Snape alive. I think Hogwarts cares for them both. Good work. Felaine (Reply to this) (Thread)

alisanne, 2011-01-23 12:08 am UTC

	alchemia 2010-12-21 11:44 pm UTC (link)
	Lovely! (Reply to this) (Thread)

alisanne, 2011-01-23 12:08 am UTC

	r_grayjoy 2010-12-22 03:15 am UTC (link)
	O HAI THAR, "Mystery Author!" (::wink, nudge::) Things are a little nuts around here, so I'll be back for this as soon as I can sit down and read it properly. I know it's here and I'm not ignoring you!! (Reply to this) (Thread)

r_grayjoy, 2010-12-23 09:09 pm UTC

alisanne, 2011-01-24 07:05 pm UTC

alisanne, 2011-01-23 12:08 am UTC

ubikono
2010-12-22 06:00 pm UTC (link)

I love this story and it's premise! I enjoyed reading this so much, it was well written and the fact that the trio is together again on a quest makes it all endearing. I'm glad that Ron is mature and very perceptive, being an Auror has done wonders, he knows what his best friend likes and he accepts it. Hermione is in character and she supports her friend and wants what's best for him and I laughed at the part in which Ron states that many people though that they were in a threesome relationship, even Molly believed it.

The premise was wonderful and the use/idea of the philosophers stone was amazing, leave it to Dumbledore and his half-truths to still have the philosopher's Stone kept, it could be handy (wonder if he's a hoarder?)The idea of the Snape's potion book returning was great, after all Harry did seem to have a crush on the witty Half-Blood Prince.

Of my favorite lines in this story was: Kreacher cast a sly look his way. "Master has found his Prince."

Lovely story and great ending.

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alisanne, 2011-01-24 07:12 pm UTC

	shyfoxling 2010-12-22 10:35 pm UTC (link)
	I like your method of resurrecting Severus. Definitely haven't seen that one before. (Reply to this) (Thread)

alisanne, 2011-01-24 07:13 pm UTC

	venturous 2010-12-23 12:39 am UTC (link)
	g I just love it when Snape gets lucky. Love your resourceful Harry, solving all the puzzles, and magical connection via the Book is always cool! (Reply to this) (Thread)

alisanne, 2011-01-24 07:14 pm UTC

	keyairreem 2010-12-23 06:21 pm UTC (link)
	WOWOWOWOWOW! You could just here Sev's voice even when he was just writing in the book! But I have a question: is the writing still there? (Reply to this) (Thread)

alisanne, 2011-01-24 07:17 pm UTC

	kelly_chambliss 2010-12-23 09:30 pm UTC (link)
	I enjoyed this. I love stories that use magic so inventively, and it was fun to see all the characters so well-represented and IC. I'm glad Ron is both capable and funny (loved his line about how easy it was to find the Stone the first time /g/). Severus is wonderfully snarky, and I was quite fond of his reunion with Minerva. Very satisfying all around. (Reply to this) (Thread)

alisanne, 2011-01-24 07:19 pm UTC

	angela_snape 2010-12-23 09:33 pm UTC (link)
	I love the idea of wish magic bringing Severus back - I knew he had to have had a getaway plan in place. The Portkey and stasis room make a lot of sense. Great story! (Reply to this) (Thread)

alisanne, 2011-01-24 07:21 pm UTC

	torino10154 2010-12-23 10:27 pm UTC (link)
	Ooo lovely! So glad I made the time to read this today. I loved Harry's conversations with book!Severus, especially when he thought and Severus could hear him. I'm so glad Severus remembered all that had happened while he was interacting with Harry after he woke up. Definitely some creative uses for magic here, which was great. Well done. (Reply to this) (Thread)

alisanne, 2011-01-24 07:31 pm UTC

	fanficforensics 2010-12-24 12:00 am UTC (link)
	What a great read! Lucky, lucky them. (Reply to this) (Thread)

alisanne, 2011-01-24 07:31 pm UTC

	gingertart50 2010-12-25 09:16 pm UTC (link)
	An excellent Snarry for Christmas! I really enjoyed this fic, thank you - what an original way to bring him back. Well done. (Reply to this) (Thread)

alisanne, 2011-01-24 07:33 pm UTC

	atdelphi 2010-12-26 05:09 pm UTC (link)
	Excellent work! I really liked the inventiveness of the magic involved, and I loved your grown-up Ron. (Reply to this) (Thread)

alisanne, 2011-01-24 07:34 pm UTC

	teas_me 2010-12-26 11:47 pm UTC (link)
	What a lovely story! I liked how Harry, Hermione, and Ron all worked together on this. How Ron was very perceptive and grown up. Hermione is smart and catches on like always. Harry determined to see everything though to the end. Wonderfully written and its got it all. Great work! (Reply to this) (Thread)

alisanne, 2011-01-24 07:51 pm UTC

	leela_cat 2010-12-28 07:32 am UTC (link)
	This was a wonderfully inventive way to bring Severus back to life. Bringing back the half-blood Prince's potions book just brought a smile to my face, and then to have them communicate through it. So much fun. An excellent story. (Reply to this) (Thread)

alisanne, 2011-01-24 07:54 pm UTC

	countesszero 2010-12-28 05:16 pm UTC (link)
	this was so lovely! i liked severus being in that book! (Reply to this) (Thread)

alisanne, 2011-01-24 07:54 pm UTC

	k8bnimble 2010-12-28 11:47 pm UTC (link)
	What a terrific read. I will re-read this again and again. I just loved Harry and Severus in this as well as Ron and Hermione. A great sense of humor and a fun adventure with love at the end. Wonderful! (Reply to this) (Thread)

alisanne, 2011-01-24 07:58 pm UTC

eeyore9990
2011-01-02 06:37 am UTC (link)

Oh man, so many bits of this gave me such joy to read! I just want to copy and paste them all.... but I'll restrain myself to just a few. *weg*

Master has found his Prince. -- Oh, Kreacher, you slay me!

Hermione had also included some Christmas lights and a small tree to 'brighten up the place'. -- Awww!!

Oh! Felix felicis! *is intrigued*

Harry had the feeling that everything would be a negotiation when Snape was involved. "Do you want me to come in with you?"

"I can manage." Snape smirked. "Although I imagine you looked when you had the chance."

"I did," Harry admitted. "I hope it won't be my last opportunity to...see you." -- *Flails!!!*

"Actually, I thought you might initiate contact next time."

Harry blinked, cauldron forgotten. "You've been missing for eight years. I only found your body yesterday! You're not up to--"

"But you are." Severus smirked. "And I am in a bed. Surely that gives you ideas." -- OMG! *flails more*

Awwww! Insecure!Snape! Hee, get him where you want him and then turn on the blush. That's the way to do it!! :D

The kiss started out slow, tentative, until Harry managed to slip his tongue into Severus' mouth and then heat exploded between them. -- Mmmmm.

When he went back to the bed, Severus cracked open one eye. "She's right you know. I am a difficult man."

"How did you--?" Harry shook his head. He was a master spy, of course he can read lips. "She just worries about me." ROFL! Harry is a master spy too! He can read Snape's lips just fine... *wink*

OH! Hogwarts! You awesome thing, you!

LOL, though you totally distracted me with the felix felicis, I will forgive you, mystery author. This is a truly wondrous fic.

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alisanne, 2011-01-24 08:20 pm UTC

	unbroken_halo 2011-01-03 12:39 am UTC (link)
	Mystery author, I adore this! Well done! A lovely mystery, fun snark and romance between the men. Wonderful all around. I love the twist at the end. (Reply to this) (Thread)

alisanne, 2011-01-24 08:21 pm UTC

	szefi 2011-01-09 08:30 am UTC (link)
	This was great! I liked the unique idea of bringing Severus back, and the potion book is a nice touch. (Reply to this) (Thread)

alisanne, 2011-01-24 08:22 pm UTC

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