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xie_xie_xie (xie_xie_xie) wrote in qaf_challenges,
@ 2009-01-10 12:05:00

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small things made large, small things phase 1

Small things made large: 10-14

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10. by testdog65

The headlights projected a thin, sharp line into the rainy night. Justin turned to look out the passenger window, seeing nothing but inky blackness beyond the edge of the road.

The radio played quietly, a song that Justin didn't recognize. He glanced over at Brian, his profile hazy within the darkened interior of the car.

"Almost there." Brian's voice was low and rough, the perfect complement to the surrounding shadows. Justin shifted in his seat and almost smiled. When he looked down, he saw Brian's hand lying against his jeans, palm facing up. Justin reached over, letting their fingers intertwine.

11. by noteverything

Back Again

Debbie ushered a rain-soaked Justin into the house.

"Of course you can stay here, baby. Just let me go up and get you some towels." Deb shot a worried glance over her shoulder as she went, wondering what Brian had done this time.

Justin stood in the entry, a steady stream of water hitting the carpet below. He sighed. He'd left the loft in a rush of emotion, without thinking. Maybe coming to Deb's wasn't the best idea.

But then Deb was back, pulling him into a hug. Finally, Justin relaxed. Debbie loved him; this was where he belonged.

12. by LJ's dean1955

“Brian what are you doing?”

“If you do not know then we might have a very big problem.”

“Just now, while we were kissing you had your eyes open. Come to think of it, you do that a lot.”

“Ok, no more Mr. Vodka for you.”

“Were you staring at me while we were kissing?”

“Justin, does the word delusional mean anything to you?”

“Just answer the question.”

Justin smiles seductively and proceeds to kiss along Brian’s neck hoping to coax the answer out of him.

Brian plays coy; hoping to keep one of his biggest pleasures, and kinks a secret.

13. by notreallyme10

I'm supposed to be on my way to the airport.

But when the car pulled up in front of the loft I told the driver to take me to Babylon. I made the decision somewhere between my front door and the car and I was careful not to give myself a moment to second guess it. On the drive over I thought idly about the flight I was about to miss and not about what the fuck I was going to do once I got to Babylon.

Fuck Australia. There is something more important that I have to do here.

14. by fansee

Brian’s boot heels clicked on the bare hardwood floor as he walked past the fireplace where they had fucked…no, made love…their bodies hot in the cold house. He walked through the out-moded kitchen, never up-graded, and up the stairs to the second floor.

The second floor was as empty as the first. He paused a moment in the unfurnished master bedroom; there was nothing here to take away with him. He turned and went back downstairs.

Jennifer looked at him anxiously. “Brian, are you sure you want to do this?”

He rolled his lips inward. “Yes,” he said. “I’m sure.”

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	happier_bunny 2009-01-10 03:54 pm UTC (link)
	10. oh oh oh, awwwwwwwwwwwwwww - now someone just needs to tell us where they're going. :) 11. excellent deb- justin dynamic 12. LOL, oh that BK, so romantical 13. ahhh, no bombing or will the bombing still happen...someone should tell this with the bombing still happening! 14. noooo, don't sell it Brian! (Reply to this)

notreallyme10
2009-01-10 04:28 pm UTC (link)

10. I was thinking Britin for the first time... but then the hand holding threw me off. I'm very curious.

11. Awww, poor Justin. This opens the door for a great gap filler.

12. “Justin, does the word delusional mean anything to you?” LOL, perfect line.

13. Hmmm, interesting.

14. There are a million stories that they live in Britin that I love... but I also really like the idea of them selling. I hope someone writes a happy story for this one.

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	jule1122 2009-01-10 05:24 pm UTC (link)
	10. Beautiful 11. Interesting to see this from Justin's POV 12. Sexy! 13. So many ways this could go! 14. Again the possibilities! (Reply to this)

	secretsolitaire 2009-01-10 07:22 pm UTC (link)
	#10: Mmmmm, very intriguing. I like the quiet anticipation. #11: Debbie loved him; this was where he belonged. Oh, Justin. #12: :-D #13: I definitely want more of this one! #14: Ack, and this one too... (Reply to this)

	10-14 fansee 2009-01-10 08:02 pm UTC (link)
	Lots of good stuff here and from all over the B/J 'verse: Brian alone, Justin alone, Brian and Justin riding through the night together, Brian in a taxi, and...maybe best of all...Brian and Justin kissing. (Yum.) Many possibilities. FanSee (Reply to this)

fun_demented
2009-01-10 08:22 pm UTC (link)

10. Oh! Am intrigued! And this is masterfully written. Nice job.

11. I have said it before and I will say it again, I LOVE gapfillers. Justin, of course, it was a good idea. Debbie takes care of you and then goes and "takes care" of Brian. ;) I've wanted to read a gapfiller on this for a while, so thank you. :)

12. Justin, no one can take their eyes off of you...Especially Brian. This was cute and happy. Thank you. :)

13. Hm! Interesting idea. Great prompt!

14. Brian in boots is hot. And Brian, DO NOT SELL BRITIN! Nicely written.

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	rosy5000 2009-01-10 08:22 pm UTC (link)
	10. Oooo... a surprise for Justin? Love the handholding. :) 11. One thing I always loved about Deb, she was there no matter who needed her or when. 12. Oh, Brian. So adorable when he tries to hide how much he cares for Justin. 13. I'm torn between happiness of Brian going to the rally and the sadness of him being there for the bombing. 14. Aaahhhhh.... NOOO! :( (Reply to this)

	pendulumchanges 2009-01-10 08:39 pm UTC (link)
	10. Perfection. Absolutely wonderful drabble. 11. Oh Justin :( Nice drabble! 12. squeee! That would so be Brian's secret kink. 13. Excellent drabble. I can't wait to read the fic. Will Brian get there before the bomb goes off? 14. Very well done! (Reply to this)

	burntpyre 2009-01-10 08:48 pm UTC (link)
	#10: Oh my, Justin and Brian drove from Britin to the urban Pitts because... because somebody died?! And it's Justin's so... Jennifer?! #14: Yes it's OK Brian, sell it. It's too big. wipes off tomatoes (Reply to this)

noteverything
2009-01-10 08:48 pm UTC (link)

10. I felt like I was there, watching this happen on the show. I love the rain, I love the quiet ride and Brian's low voice and I really love their fingers tangling together. I like the drabble so much I don't even care where they're going... :D

11. LOL. I just said I love rain drabbles for #10. And I love angst, too.

12. I'd wanna stare at Justin while I was kissing him too. Of course, he be freaking out because a woman was kissing him, so I might not get the same pretty face Brian does. Cute drabble!

13. Now *this* will be a great AU. I can't wait to read what comes out of this.

14. It's deja vu!! How many times did Brian start to sell the loft? Now he's on to Britin. This could be really good. And I like the "sound" of Brian's boots, very nice touch.

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	passing_through 2009-01-10 10:06 pm UTC (link)
	10. Oh, this is lovely, I want to read more. 11. angst What happened??? 12. I have no doubt that Justin will get Brian to share his secret, lol. 13. I can't wait to see where this will go. 14. Brian selling Britin? I want to know more. (Reply to this)

	starinthesky 2009-01-10 11:40 pm UTC (link)
	10. Sweet and with so much potential for a great longer fic. 11. Oh, Justin. Excellent Deb and Justin interaction. 12. hee, sweet and sexy. Love it! 13. Yay Brian! This could go in so many interesting directions, some very happy, some very angsty. 14. I think this is great. Selling Britin can be indicative of super angst or a very happy fic. (Reply to this)

qafcracked
2009-01-11 02:05 am UTC (link)

10. I immediately think Britin, but it could be anywhere.

11. He'd left the loft in a rush of emotion, without thinking. Maybe coming to Deb's wasn't the best idea.

But then Deb was back, pulling him into a hug. Finally, Justin relaxed. Debbie loved him; this was where he belonged.

*wibbles*

12. Hehe, that's kinda silly ;)

13. O_O An AU 510? How interesting...

14. Ooo. This could go so many different directions.

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	burntpyre 2009-01-11 05:19 am UTC (link)
	#11: I'm sad. I hated it when Justin felt unloved ;_; #12: But kissing with open eyes generally doesn't mean a good thing ;_; Distrust, hesitancy, or plain sexual disinterest. But of course there are exceptions :> #13: Brian's gonna be blown up, noooo! (Reply to this)

	outlander 2009-01-11 03:10 pm UTC (link)
	10. This could go so many ways, but I love it just like this. Beautiful. 11. I would love to read Justin's POV through this...great idea. 12. happy dance I, for one, hope Brian's kinks don't remain a secret. ROTF. 13. OOOOOOOH! Great drabble and prompt. 14. wibble Why are they selling? Someone please make it for a happy reason...or a sad that is then fixed reason. OK? (Reply to this)

morgan_is_randy
2009-01-20 07:00 am UTC (link)

10. Really just sweet and fluffy. Love it.
11. *sad* Hmm... not sure that's where Justin belongs exactly but happy he did have Deb. Love their relationship.
12. Hahaha. Yeah, so coy. This was so great!
13. Love anything that has to do with Brian going to Babylon that night. There isn't enough fics written, that I've found that explore that.
14. Can't handle this one. So good, but so sad.

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	testdog65 2009-02-21 12:44 pm UTC (link)
	10. Hmmmm… 11. sniff But at least Deb was there to comfort him. 12. "Mr. Vodka" cracked me up. Love the idea of where this one could go! 13. Interesting twist! 14. Seems like a sad moment and an ending of sorts, but I could totally see this turning out really well. ~Ellen (Reply to this)

	ex_4cupcakes771 2009-03-07 07:02 am UTC (link)
	10. Pure love and warmth. I would love to see where this started and where it's going. 11. Oh, poor Justin on Deb's doorstep. 12. i love this one...funny and sexy... 13. bounces OH AN AU for the bombing maybe happening/maybe not? very cool! 14. Oh, I hope this one turns out happy...This could go all kinds of ways... (Reply to this)

	ahaw9913 2009-03-08 06:19 am UTC (link)
	10.Very visual 11.No that's not where you belong! 12.Aww, but Brian you want to tell Justin your kinks! 13.LOVE 510 What If's! 14.Your lips say you are not sure! (Reply to this)

	bellaaurora 2009-03-23 03:18 am UTC (link)
	These were great. I loved 13, and 14 kind of broke my heart. (Reply to this)