27 September 2010 @ 09:26 pm
 
Title: Silence
Pairing: Max/Tom (HAHAHAHAHAHAHA WUT? IDEK. THERE IS A BACKSTORY TO THIS.)
Rating: G?
Word Count: 640
Summary: Tom misses Ben. Max misses Tom. Ben misses all the fun.
A/N: Cracky commentfic accidentally launched by the To-Do List here, and the awesome icons by [info]vitacrudelis which can be found here. (And I'd like to say that I was pimping these two things, but I'm not - I'm actually just making excuses for the fact that this story, you know, exists. *facepalm* Also, I know NOTHING about kendo, so feel free to mock me relentlessly if something's wrong.) This is AU on like seven different levels and to think I never wrote crack before this awesomely ridic fandom swallowed my brain whole.




Max revelled in the sound as the shinai whooshed gracefully through the warm air of the ballet room. It was one of his favourite things about kendo - that the silence went unbroken save for his own breath, his own motion. He'd never had enough silence in his life; silence that he could control.

He took half a step forward, positioning his feet without thought, and raised his arms again, only to be drawn to a halt mid-way. He looked up and the previous concentration was gone, the tension in his arms and shoulders with it, and he lowered the shinai.

Tom leaned a shoulder against the doorway with a faint, familiar smile on his lips, head cocked slightly to the side, blonde curls falling easily with every movement.

Max smiled back silently, but he could see the sadness in Tom's eyes, the sadness that most people overlooked. Tom was so outwardly happy, so childlike in some ways that even his sister often failed to recognise his moods. Somehow, though, Tom had been like an open book to Max from the beginning, to the point where he knew, with utter certainty, that despite Tom's relationship with Ben, he really did love Max. And that frustrated and elated Max in almost equal measure.

"You're getting better."

Max almost started at the sound, not expecting Tom to actually say anything. Usually, he just came to the studio, sat and watched in total silence, face and expressions intent and beautiful. But it had been a long time since Tom had come - the last time was before that wedding which now seemed much longer ago than it was. Tom's smile widened a little, and Max realised that he hadn't responded.

"Thank you," was all he could think to say and Tom chuckled. "Why are you here?"

Tom's face fell, and Max almost jumped to apologise. He was beaten to it when Tom answered.

"I'm lonely," he said, accompanying laugh not quite reaching his eyes. Max took a few steps closer as he continued. "Ben's gone, with Isabelle. And besides, it's been a while."

At the last, Max smiled. "Yes, it has." He remembered that night quite well. As Tom had left, he'd moved with him to the doorway, and when Tom turned to say goodbye, Max had found himself so close. So close that he'd almost kissed him, the mixture of the adrenaline from the sport and the simple fact that this was Tom almost pressed against his front...

He felt that again tonight. That draw, pull, whatever, towards Tom, only this time from more than two feet away. He took a step closer and Tom's expression shifted subtly into one laced with confusion and question. The added vulnerability just pushed Max over the edge, and he raised his hand almost automatically, touching his fingertips to Tom's cheek. He felt the warm flush of blood that Tom's fair skin allowed so prettily.

"It will be better," he heard himself say, and Tom leaned into his hand just a fraction. He didn't appear to believe what Max was saying - and it wasn't like Max was really trying - but his smile did flicker a little brighter for just a second.

Tom took the small step forward that would bring the two of them together, and before Max could analyse anything, he felt Tom's mouth on his. His lips were unmoving, soft, but pressed hard against his own - it was desperate, this kiss, and he couldn't decide whether or not he really cared.

Blood rushed in his ears as Tom deepened the kiss and spun Max backwards into the mirror, all childishness well and truly gone. The sound of their combined breath filled the room, and Max heard the shinai hit the floor, shattering the relative silence.

He found that he didn't mind.



Uhm, okay, so I think that we all went totally stark-raving mad over the past few weeks, what with all the bizarro inter-shipping and AU-inventing and combining and bouncing-off of each other's madness. It's like one giant web of interconnected nonsense, and I heart it!
 
 
Current Mood: ridiculous
 
 
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Linda: AWZ - Keule Is Love <3[info]vitacrudelis on September 27th, 2010 01:34 pm (UTC)
YAYAYAYAYAYAAYAYAYAYAYAY YOU DID IT! \O/ *TACKLESNOGPOUNCE*

YUPP, I'M STILL LOVING THIS FIC SO MUCH. <33333333333333 WHY ARE YOU APOLOGISING, GIORGIA, WHYYYYYYYYYYY? AND LOLOL, WHY DID YOU TAKE THIS ICON?

I F*CKING LOVE THIS FANDOM! <333333333333333333
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G: YourBrain=giggleSW[info]giorgiakerr on September 27th, 2010 02:21 pm (UTC)
I AM APOLOGISING IN CASE I TRAUMATISE SOMEONE TO THE POINT WHERE THEY ARE IRREPARABLY DAMAGED AND TRY TO SUE ME OR SOMETHING. I'M JUST PROTCTING MYSELF IN ADVANCE.

ALSO, HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, I STILL CAN'T BELIEVE I WROTE THIS. AND THE WEIRDEST PART IS THAT I DON'T REGRET IT. AND I STILL DON'T THINK IT'S A WEIRD SHIP, WHEN I REALLY, REALLY SHOULD.

AND I NEEDED AN APPROPRIATE ICON FOR THIS!! I COULDN'T POST THE COMMENTFIC WITHOUT THE ICON THAT INSPIRED IT! <33333333333333333333 THIS ICON IS MINE AND MINE FOREVER AND YOU'RE NEVER GETTING IT BACK EVER.

THIS FANDOM IS TOTAL WIN, YES. *SQUISHES*

*SPRINKLES CRACKY GLITTER*
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Linda: AWZ - Call Me Insane[info]vitacrudelis on September 27th, 2010 02:54 pm (UTC)
BUT WHY WOULD ANYONE TRY TO SUE YOU BECAUSE OF TOM/MAX? I JUST CAN'T FIND THE FLAW IN THIS. *CONFUSED*

DON'T TELL ME THERE ARE PEOPLE WHO DO NOT APPROVE OF TOM/MAX. DDD: HOW IS THAT EVEN POSSIBLE? Is it wrong that I really can't see why this ship should be wrong?

ONLY IF YOU TAKE THE OTHERS, TOO. I DON'T TAKE ANY RESPONSIBILITY FOR THEM. *LALALA*

GLITTER! :D *ROLLS AROUND*
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G: lol[info]giorgiakerr on September 28th, 2010 12:20 am (UTC)
Is it wrong that I really can't see why this ship should be wrong?

Hahahahaha, well, I wouldn't expect anything less form somone married to vehement Richard/Roman shipper. I'm sure that you two will e very happy together in your inappropriate shipping!! *loves*

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Linda: AWZ - Destiny[info]vitacrudelis on September 28th, 2010 11:09 am (UTC)
Haha, that's a good point! We're not married yet, but inappropriate shipping is our DESTINY! *loves*

Also, JFYI: I'm already part of your family ([info]praderwilli once adopted me, and I'm not going anywhere without my lovely fiancée), so I expect lots of inappropriate shipping from you. *G*
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G: SnogBlog[info]giorgiakerr on September 28th, 2010 12:04 pm (UTC)
HAHAHAHA, WILLI, DARLING, WHERE ARE YOU? WE NEED TO HAVE A CHAT ABOUT THIS ADOPTION THING, MKAY? YOU CANNOT HAVE US ALL, AS MUCH AS WE LOVE YOU OR WE'LL END UP AS INCESTUOUS AS THE STEINKAMPS.

Oh, in that case, CONGRATS ON YOUR CYBERENGAGEMENT!! HERE ARE SOME RINGS FOR YOU



<3333333333333333333 I EXPECT DILDOS MUCH GAIETY AND SPARKLE ON YOUR WEDDING DAY!
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Linda: AWZ - Diana is such a pretty bride[info]vitacrudelis on September 28th, 2010 01:07 pm (UTC)
YOU WON'T GET RID OF ME, GIORGIA, SOZ! THIS INCESTUOUS FAMILY IS JUST TOO ENTICING!

WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE SHINY! :D OMG THESE ARE AWESOME! *SNOGPOUNCE* I might or might not have proposed on the interwebs. Ahem.

LIL'S OUR WEDDING PLANNER. I THINK WE ALL CAN EXPECT DILDOS A CLASSY WEDDING!

<333333333333333333333
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G: lol[info]giorgiakerr on September 28th, 2010 02:34 pm (UTC)
NOT MUCH TO SAY EXCEPT BEST PROPOSAL EVER. AND I LOVE THE FACT THAT IN YOUR RICHARD/ROMAN BANNER IT LOOKS LIKE ROMAN'S WEARING SUSPENDERS/BRACES IN A SCHOOL PLAY OR SOMETHING. <33333333333333333333333333

I CANNOT WAIT FOR THIS WEDDING. THERE NEEDS, *NEEDS* TO BE A WEDDING-POST AT SOME POINT. YOU CANNOT STAY ENGAGED FOREVER, DON'T YOU WATCH SOAPS? ONE OF YOU WILL GET ALL RESTLESS AND, "BUT YOU DON'T LOVE ME! YOU DON'T WANT TO MARRY ME ANYMORE!" AND THE OTHER'LL BE ALL, "BUT I DO, I DO!! I PROPOSED, DIDN'T I? LOOKIT! RING! ILU!!!!!!" AND THEN THE OTHER'LL BE LIKE, "YOU JUST PROPOSED ON A WHIM, DIDN'T YOU?? BECASUE YOU THOUGHT THAT WAS WHAT I WANTED!! BUT WHAT DO *YOU* WANT? WILL...WILL BEING WITH ME MAKE YOU HAPPY? ARE WE READY FOR THIS??" AND THEN THE CONVERSATION'LL END ALL, "OMG, BEBE, OF COURSE I DO, OF COURSE WE ARE! I'VE LOVED YOU SINCE THAT FIRST YT COMMENTSPAM WE SHARED. REMEMBER THAT? WE WERE INAPPROPRIATELY SHIPPING AND MAKING LEWD COMMENTS AND PUTTING DIRTY GESTURES IN ASTERISKS... IT WAS LOVE AT FIRST COMMENTSPAM!!!" AND THEN THERE'LL BE LOTS OF RAVISHING.

Uuh. That thing I said about not having much to say? I should never even have thought about that as a possiblity in the first place; I am me, after all.
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Linda: AWZ - Marc's smile makes my heart melt[info]vitacrudelis on September 28th, 2010 03:13 pm (UTC)
OMG HE DOES. I HAVE NO IDEA WHY I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING NOW. LOLOLOLOL~

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH, THAT DIALOGUE IS BRILLIANT. BRILLIANT! <333333333333333333 BUT OMG YOU WANT A WEDDING-POST? ARE YOU SURE? MY BRAIN IS DEEPLY TERRIFYING AND I HAVE TO POST THAT ENTRY, BECAUSE I'M THE ONE WHO WANTS TO GET MARRIED. WE'LL SEE, WE'LL SEE. I'LL PROBABLY GIVE IN. THE PROSPECT OF LOTS OF RAVISHING IS TOO IRRESISTIBLE.

It's this fandom. It makes you do things you'd have never thought of. *G*
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Christine: AxelTiedUp[info]spaghettitoes on September 27th, 2010 07:58 pm (UTC)
*treads in carefully*
Although oh dear I do like how you describe Tom! But I may be too into Mantonio to really appreciate Max like this!!!

OMG I want Tom/Ben from you now! I just need to comment and you will work your sparkle magic on it y/y? *waits*

I also know zippo about Kendo so I will accept terms as appropriate :) and will marvel at your dedication. Though I reserve the right to still call it Max's big stick ;)
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G: Mantonio[info]giorgiakerr on September 28th, 2010 12:09 pm (UTC)
Haha, Mantonio, I'm ACTUALLY shipping. These two? Not so much. Only a little. Only in my own cracky world and on IJ. And probably YT...

Tom/Ben?! Hahaha, oh dear. I've got Tom/Ben AND Mantonio to write. And no time to do it in. Le sigh. But I'll see if I can try on the weekend? Might be possible. I'm babysitting - once the kids are in bed, I don't really have anything else to do.

*snort* "Max's big stick" is an appropriate name. I accept this. (Orororororor, it COULD at a stretch, be a literal 'love sceptre', although I deign to think of the multiple uses of that. Hm.)
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Diana: AWZ-greasymax[info]notoriouslyuniq on September 27th, 2010 11:19 pm (UTC)
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!
*bouncebounce*

I already read it the first time but I still wanna say that I LOVE YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS!!! *covers you with smooches*

And sweetie, you know more than me about Kendo. "Shinai" is a totally new word for me. I call it "stick thingie"
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G: CheesemanIWearTheCheese[info]giorgiakerr on September 28th, 2010 12:26 am (UTC)
HAHAHAHAHAHA, I LOVE YOU TOO FOR LOVING THIS INSANITY. IDEK, I REALLY DON'T. WHAT THE HELL DOES MY BRAIN DO? HOW DO I FUNCTION ON A DAILY BASIS?! Dear self, you don't.

Ahem. I may or may not have Googled "Kendo stick"... *nervous grin*
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