18 September 2010 @ 03:48 pm
Fic: Not That Girl  
Title: Not That Girl
Pairing: Ben/Maximilian
Rating: G
Word Count: 250
Summary: "Ben supposes he should feel a bit guilty for leaving his new wife at home, alone, to come and see his previous lover."
A/N: OMG. IDEK. This is crappy comment!fic written for [info]giorgiakerr, then [info]aldiara told me to post to the asylum and I am powerless to say no to our totalitarian overlords. Also, the title is all Giorgia's fault and makes no sense without this song. (BTW, Giorgia, you are going to icon that, right? *grabby hands* <33333)



Ben leans against the doorway of the ballet room, watching Max's kendo moves intently. He can't even pretend he has a good excuse to be here tonight.

He supposes he should feel a bit guilty for leaving his new wife at home, alone, to come and see his previous lover. But all questions of loyalty leave his mind once Max catches his eye through the door. He lowers his weapon and brushes his hair back from his face as Ben enters the room.

"So. Back from your honeymoon then," Max observes. His tone is calm, conversational, but Ben knows him too well not to see the hint of hurt in his eyes.

"We arrived back today." Ben pauses. "I was going to wait until tomorrow to come to the Centre, but... I had to see you."

Max's lips curl up into a smirk. "Dissatisfied with your marriage so soon?"

Ben shakes his head and steps closer to Max, hesitantly taking his hand. "Don't be like that about it, this was your plan in the first place. Remember? And you said it wouldn't be a problem for us."

Max sighs and runs his free hand through his hair. "There is no problem, it's just..."

Ben grins. "You're jealous!"

"Marrying a Reichenbach is worth it," Max declares firmly.

"As you keep saying..." Ben lifts his other hand to Max's cheek, and his eyes glint playfully as he leans in to kiss him. "We'll just have to make the most of our moments together, then!"



Can you tell I didn't really know how to end it? *g* I assume your imaginations can fill in the porn I'm incapable of writing what happens next.
 
 
Current Mood: amused
 
 
( Post a new comment )
쉘리 I whip my hair like Bang Bang: awz - greasy max is pissed[info]sdk on September 18th, 2010 06:52 am (UTC)
AHAHAHAH OMG, PORN OR NO PORN, THIS IS AWESOME. <333333 I can actually hear Max's voice when reading it, ahaha. OH AND KENDO. There will be some possessive territorial Kendo sex (a la Lena/Max in the 300s) right after this, yes?
(Reply) (Thread) (Link)
amberbluebell: AWZbennoidea[info]amberbluebell on September 18th, 2010 07:11 am (UTC)
There will be some possessive territorial Kendo sex (a la Lena/Max in the 300s) right after this, yes?

Of course!! What else? Or maybe they'll go grocery shopping instead? IDK! SOMEONE NEEDS TO WRITE A SEQUEL!

I'M SO GLAD YOU ENJOYED IT, OMG! \o/\o/\o/ (And apparently I can write Max, after all! Who knew? :P)
(Reply) (Parent) (Thread) (Link)
쉘리 I whip my hair like Bang Bang: awz - think of the groceries katja[info]sdk on September 18th, 2010 04:15 pm (UTC)
ahahah OMG OF COURSE GROCERY SHOPPING. HOW COULD I WANT ANGSTY PORN (OR PORNY ANGST? AHAHA) WHEN THERE COULD BE GROCERY SHOPPING! CLEARLY I AM A FOOL.
(Reply) (Parent) (Link)
Aldi: AWZ: Mike haz a banana[info]aldiara on September 18th, 2010 07:13 am (UTC)
AHAHAHAHAHAH YAY YOU POSTED! *drunk on power*

I love this, hahahahah. Angry!kendo!Max and his curling smirk <333333333 And Ben being all "nawwwwwww bb, don't be like that" and "YOUR IDEA", LOL.

Also, clearly this means that sometime when Ben is home doing his husbandly duties and Max is feeling gloomy and jealous, he needs to get drunk and shag Tom. Muahahaha!
(Reply) (Thread) (Link)
amberbluebell: AWZsimone[info]amberbluebell on September 18th, 2010 07:31 am (UTC)
YOUR WISH IS MY COMMAND! <33333

he needs to get drunk and shag Tom.

YES PLEASE!!! *GRABBY HANDS* (OMG why didn't their grand plan involve a Ben/Max/Tom threesome? He's a Reichenbach, too!)
(Reply) (Parent) (Link)
[info]samedy on September 18th, 2010 07:24 am (UTC)
LOL Max's kendo moves amuses me to no end. So serious and zen. And I'm with Ben. Who doesn't like a lover who is a little jealous? Makes for good sex.

This is awesome! I loved it.
(Reply) (Thread) (Link)
amberbluebell: AWZangrykendo[info]amberbluebell on September 18th, 2010 07:41 am (UTC)
YAYAYAY!!! THANK YOU! (I love Max's kendo. Even more after reading this. "To hold in esteem human courtesy and honor. To associate with others with sincerity." Max in a nutshell, yes? *G*)
(Reply) (Parent) (Link)
Linda: AWZ - greasy!Max wants your porn[info]vitacrudelis on September 18th, 2010 03:14 pm (UTC)
OMG OMG YOU WROTE FIC AND I ALMOST MISSED IT! DDD: I NEED TO STALK YOU 24/7, Y/Y?

SO MUCH LOVE. <33333333333333333 SMIRKING KENDO!MAX? WIN. NON-IDIOTIC!BEN? WIN. JEALOUSY LEADING TO ANGRY!SEX? WIN.

OH MARISSA. <3333333333333333333333333
(Reply) (Thread) (Link)
amberbluebell: AWZalsoplotstuffhappened[info]amberbluebell on September 18th, 2010 03:56 pm (UTC)
LINDA! *SNOGPOUNCE* YOUR SEAL OF APPROVAL IS WHAT I LIVE FOR, SO YAYAYAYAYAY! <333333333333333333333333333333333

I ASSUME THE SOLE REASON THAT ALDI AND GIORGIA WANTED ME TO CROSS-POST WAS TO MAKE SURE YOU'D SEE IT. *G* STALK ME AS MUCH AS YOU WANT, BB! I WILL BE SAD IF YOU DON'T. <3333333333333333333333333

OMG. THAT ICON. I STILL LOVE IT. SORRY MAX, BUT I ALREADY SAID I CAN'T WRITE PORN. YOU'LL JUST HAVE TO SHARE THE SURVEILLANCE TAPES FROM THE CENTRE, Y/Y? EVERYONE WINS!
(Reply) (Parent) (Thread) (Link)
Linda: AWZ - Eskimo Kiss! <333[info]vitacrudelis on September 18th, 2010 04:53 pm (UTC)
MARISSA! :D *TACKLEPOUNCE* I LIVE TO SERVE! <3333333333333333333333333333333

LOLOL, OF COURSE! =P NOTHING SHALL STOP ME! YOU'LL NEVER GET RID OF ME, BB! NO NEED TO BE SAD! <333333333333333333333

IT'S OKAY, MARISSA, IT'S OKAY. THERE'S ENOUGH PORN IN MY HEAD. ;D AND BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAH, I HOPE THE VIRUS DIDN'T DELETE THE TAPES. *CROSSES FINGERS*
(Reply) (Parent) (Link)
[info]graspthethorn on September 18th, 2010 04:18 pm (UTC)
AHDJSFHUJSA;DHS;HDSCB !!!!!!!!!!
(Reply) (Link)
[info]graspthethorn on September 18th, 2010 04:20 pm (UTC)
I HAVE NO WORDS TO DESCRIBE MY LOVE FOR THIS
(Reply) (Link)
[info]graspthethorn on September 18th, 2010 04:21 pm (UTC)
JUST SO YOU KNOW
(Reply) (Link)
[info]graspthethorn on September 18th, 2010 04:21 pm (UTC)
<333333333333333333333333333
(Reply) (Thread) (Link)
amberbluebell: AWZcontractuallyobligatedkissing[info]amberbluebell on September 18th, 2010 04:56 pm (UTC)
\o/\o/\o/\o/\o/

OMG, ROSE. ILU! <33333333333333333333333333333
(Reply) (Parent) (Link)
Diana: AWZ- Tom[info]notoriouslyuniq on September 18th, 2010 04:49 pm (UTC)
I don't understand! If a Reichenbach is what they needed...
(Reply) (Thread) (Link)
amberbluebell: AWZjennynotaveragesteinkamp[info]amberbluebell on September 18th, 2010 05:01 pm (UTC)
But Tom is too busy shagging Jenny to get involved in a triangle with Ben and Max, y/y?
(Reply) (Parent) (Thread) (Link)
Diana: AWZ- TomJen[info]notoriouslyuniq on September 18th, 2010 05:49 pm (UTC)
I APPROVE OF THIS EXPLANATION! *stamps*
(Reply) (Parent) (Link)
Lilith: awz-greasy max kissyface[info]lilithilien on September 19th, 2010 08:11 pm (UTC)
YES! Oh I love this!!!! Infidelity and right after honeymoon heeeee is the best thing ever! And yes, I totally agree with the other folks who've complimented your Max voice -- it's perfect. Which means, of course, that you must write more!!!
(Reply) (Thread) (Link)
amberbluebell: AWZmaxnotthatgirl[info]amberbluebell on September 20th, 2010 06:53 am (UTC)
THANK YOU, YAY! It's awesome to hear that I got Max's voice right. Maybe I didn't need to put him on my Don't You Dare list for the fest, after all!

I feel a bit sad for poor Isabelle in this scenario, though! She has no idea she's married a man who loves a man who only wants to use her for her name/connections/whatever, and she'll be so heartbroken when the truth comes out! :CCC *cuddles her*
(Reply) (Parent) (Link)