Bill Denbrough (bill_denbrough) wrote in compass_network, @ 2019-07-06 11:01:00 |
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Entry tags: | !open, bill denbrough, john constantine, katherine lokadóttir, sophia peletier (oe) |
Hi. Could I get opinions and feedback on a story, please? I've been working on it for weeks with Mr Torrance as part of class and I want to know what people think. It's about 12,000 words or so and it's kinda creepy, sorry.
[Fake cut to Bill's story. He's clearly improved since the last story he posted on the network, and he's already started going down the Horror route. It's a story about a woman who's slowly being possessed by something. It has two narrators, the woman herself as she gradually realizes that she's being taken over and trapped in her own mind, and her boyfriend who is slower on the uptake and who eventually works out what's happening and how he has to fix it. The only "bad" part of the story is the ending, which feels slightly forced where the rest of the story flows pretty well. But Bill just wants a happy ending where the story kind of... doesn't.]