Chaos Unraveled OOC Community

Concrit teim!

If there's anything you'd like to say about Will, please, tell me!

Am I doin' it wrong?

Is there a point when he's been OOC, or my interpertation of him off CU has been off? (like, something I've said on AIM, or OOC, or something. Is there anything I can emphasize, or de-emphasize?
Do you want to see more or less of something?
Is there something I'm doing that I shouldn't be doing, or conversely, is there not something I'm doing that I should be doing?
Is there anything I can, or should change or do to make him better?

I'm bringing in Raiden pretty soon, so it would be great to know how I'm doing with Will at the moment!

Once again, thank you for your time!

Alright guys, i'll explain how, then why. It should probably go the other way around but just go with me on this. Basically if you want a character to receive constructive criticism (or praise, but you can't just ask for one or the other, it has to be both), you make a post to this thread in one of your CU accounts and note the character(s) you play.

People who want to leave constructive criticism (and/or praise) simply post a reply to the person's comment where their characters' names are listed. This can be done anonymously or on your CU account (or one of them) if you desire it.

I WILL delete inappropriate, rude comments and flames, but I don't expect to see them because the people in CU are extremely nice.

The reason why is because I think everyone should be able to give or receive constructive criticism if they desire it, and because the Shinji-player was really awesome and suggested this wonderful idea.

S-So, Sia here (Shinji, and now Okita and Rion-mun). Basically, work has been kicking my arse for the better part of this week, and so whenever I've come to actually write anything, then, well, not been particularly great. HOWEVER. Short shift today, and I actually got a decent amount of sleep (yay), so after intro'ing my new characters, I'll get around to setting up those threads that I said I would. From, uh. Last week? D: But if my quick look at next weeks hours are correct, I have more than one day off *.* I won't feel like dying :D S-Sorry Midvalley and Sal muns D: I seem to have to be making a lot of apologies >:

taichouokita, Souji Okita (western name order) is, in short, a member of the Shinsengumi, and captain of their first unit. Brilliant swordsman (no, seriously), polite, cheerful, but if it comes to training/teaching others is a strict and short-tempered teacher. Comes from a samurai family, and was brought here circa-1865 - one year after Ikedaya Affair.

apolinar, Rion Steiner. Comes from the 26th century. Has a number of psychokinetic powers (moving objects, setting them on fire, creating a limited shield) but they are kept in check by a number of PPECs (psychic power enhancement chemicals) that he's addicted to. If he doesn't take a certain one, though, and uses his powers, he shorts which is really kind of destructive and kills people who stay around him when he's shorting for more than say, 30 seconds. Unfortunately, it also kills him too xD; Introspective, a little moody, not all that impressed with humanity. The actual Rion Steiner was a boy, but he died. This one is a clone (the 14 y/o clone also died, but then he was re-created 6 years later, as a 20 year old). He was created by a mad supercomputer (called Dorothy) intent on creating a new race (Galerians) and take over the world :D But where Rion had lost his memories, he was convinced he was human until the end of the first game where he realised he was a Galerian and basically had a D: fit after defeating Dorothy.

Rion will be rooming with Dorian :D

Plotting always open, but my AIM is playing up at the moment, so comments of email :D

Okay, i'll reveal a tiny bit of information about the first trials OOCly so I can ask a question.

( A teensy bit of info on the first trial, and a request for YOUR input! )

Try not to ask me too many questions on the trials yet, because this is more me asking you for something so I can improve it for you. But i'll try to answer what I can without spoiling the trial for you all.