T-31 And Counting....Bang!

Title: Only Forever: An Underground Gallifreyan Fairy Tale
Author: Dani Meows
Fandom/Pairing: Doctor Who: 10/Rose Labyrinth: Jareth/Sarah
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance/Humor
Word Count: 5,244 (And incomplete)
Summary: After Jackie wishes a teenage Rose away, Rose gets a second childhood with the King of the Goblins, Jareth and Sarah Williams. At her second sixteenth birthday Rose meets the Doctor and the two of them connect. But Jareth doesn't approve and the Master wants revenge.
Disclaimer: I do not own Doctor Who, if I did Rose Tyler and the Doctor would be traveling through time and space forever. I also don't own the Labyrinth or Jareth and Sarah would have ended up together.
Beta: I claim every misplaced comma and awkward sentence as my own.
Notes: This story is a very late story for October's T_31 big bang deadline. I suck. I'm sorry.
It's also incomplete. I have more ideas for what I'll be writing but I finally got it to 5,000 words and I want to get it posted.
Feedback: Please! I could use some thoughts on what I should improve when I edit this and add more chapters. Also just one comment keeps me writing. *Looks cute and mostly harmless*

The last thing she expected was a man who looked like David Bowie, with wild blond spiky hair that looked like he was from the 80's, with eye glitter and wearing a pair of tights, (in which you could see either his assets or a sock)and wearing a poets shirt with frilly sleeves. Grabbing her glass she prepared to lob it at the intruder even as she screamed, "Who the hell are you and what are you doing in my house?"