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The Porn Santa (smutmas_mod) wrote in merry_smutmas,
@ 2007-12-28 08:00:00

Entry tags:

fic, harry/charlie, harry/charlie/severus, harry/severus

Merry Smutmas, florahart!

To: florahart
From: gatewaygirl

Title: Stolen, Stolen
Rating: NC-17
Pairings: Charlie/Harry, Harry/Snape, Charlie/Harry/Snape
Disclaimer: Someone else's characters on off-label use; done for fun, not payment.
Summary: While Harry is visiting Charlie, he goes looking for a thief, and finds someone unexpected.
Author's notes: Flora: I doubt the waterfall is really what you wanted, but I got two of your pairings in, and it's DH-compliant as well. I hope you like it! Thanks to my beta, who did a marvelous job on fragments and an eleventh-hour final product. You're astounding, babe!

( Stolen, Stolen )

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josan
2007-12-28 03:29 pm UTC (link)

Okay...first off...HOT!

Plot...what a great plot! I loved the fact that Charlie was so accepting of Harry, other than his hiding the poacher. Great original line on Severus and his getting away from the Shrieking Shack. Logical behaviour for Harry when he finds Snape. Love the concept that Charlie and Harry are just waiting for Gin to make up her mind...and taking care of each other until she does.

I liked the fact that Severus will not be returning to Britain, but will stay in touch once a year. Makes me wonder, however, if he won't be spending a lot of time in Romania?

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gatewaygirl, 2008-01-04 11:51 pm UTC

	snegurochka_lee 2007-12-28 04:19 pm UTC (link)
	I liked this! Anything with Charlie riding a broom starkers will have me, of course, but this was a lovely story. Charlie is just sexy as hell. :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

gatewaygirl, 2008-01-04 11:52 pm UTC

	chiralove 2007-12-28 08:05 pm UTC (link)
	Fabulous - I really loved this! What a great way of bringing Snape back, and I really enjoyed seeing Charlie as a mentor to Harry. ;) (Reply to this) (Thread)

gatewaygirl, 2008-01-04 11:54 pm UTC

florahart
2007-12-28 08:26 pm UTC (link)

Hi, Author, BRB.

Hey, so I see this is up and want to immediately reassure that certainly I have no specific expectations when I give the random prompts--so I'm sure the waterfall is fine. Also, that I'm now seeing this, which went up *checks clock* 7 hours ago, but that ack 16,000 words (oh, wait, ack? NO. YAY. But anyway) and I am in the midst of finishing fic which is WAY overdue, and the person waiting may actually come here and smite me with a big smitey stick if I don't finish that first. So. I shall return later today to read, which will be excellent incentive to behave myself and get the fic done. But I didn't want to leave you hanging all day if, like me, you are full of didshelikeitdidshelikeit?.

So. BRB, review later, yay thank you, yay big long fic to look forward to, no worries about waterfall, and also, &heart;

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florahart, 2007-12-28 08:26 pm UTC

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gatewaygirl, 2008-01-04 11:48 pm UTC

florahart, 2008-01-04 11:32 pm UTC

majmunka
2007-12-28 08:54 pm UTC (link)

It's so incredibly hot! Nice plot, great sex :D I love this Snape. He is still his snarky self but his injuries make his vulnerability more pronounced. I've melted to a puddle by that last sex scene. Just one complaint: they so much deserve something permanent... The 3 of them for ever - would be perfect. (Oh, the way Sev said "perfect" *sigh*)
What a waste to give Harry for Ginny! Bah... :D

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gatewaygirl, 2008-01-04 11:56 pm UTC

lookfar04
2007-12-29 05:42 am UTC (link)

Oh, this is fabulous. To start with, it's so completely imagined, with the dragon reserve, and Harry visiting, in part, to have sex with Charlie. Who, by the way, you've invented a great personality for. I knew guys like this, long ago -- hedonistic, responsible, unpossessive. I love how you've made him a natural teacher for Harry. And then there's the hurt/comfort angle -- and you made the need for dragon egg so believable -- and you kept Snape so nicely in character during the sex -- the desperate little martinet! Even the threesome comes up naturally. Really, Charlie is the jewel in the crown of this piece, and I'm Snape's Girl to the max, but you've made him such an interesting character. Oh, and the sex? She is hot. Great job.

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gatewaygirl, 2008-01-05 01:39 am UTC

	jennybliss 2007-12-29 06:54 am UTC (link)
	That was so HOT and I loved every minute of it. Great job!! (Reply to this) (Thread)

gatewaygirl, 2008-01-05 01:39 am UTC

	snarry_fan7 2007-12-29 08:27 am UTC (link)
	Most definitely hot and I love the development and how Harry helped Snape. Lovely work.~Sophia (Reply to this) (Thread)

gatewaygirl, 2008-01-05 01:40 am UTC

	hambares 2007-12-29 02:09 pm UTC (link)
	This was fantastic! I loved the storyline especially, but the sex was very hot too! It was odd how dissapointed I felt when Charlie said that Harry would end up with Ginny though. Too much fan fiction reading, I guess. :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

gatewaygirl, 2008-01-05 01:41 am UTC

	ariadneelda 2007-12-29 03:24 pm UTC (link)
	I loved your Charlie (so sexy!) and his easy, comfortable relationship with Harry. Very nice! And I really liked how the story both had Epilogue-compliance and an alive Snape. :-) (Reply to this) (Thread)

gatewaygirl, 2008-01-05 01:43 am UTC

	ziasudra 2007-12-29 08:22 pm UTC (link)
	I really like Charlie in this story. He's fun and very much a dragon-chaser, but there's the definite Weasley core to him -- loyal to his family, and totally no-nonsense when it comes to Harry marrying Ginny in the future. Plotty and hot, love it! (Reply to this) (Thread)

gatewaygirl, 2008-01-05 01:44 am UTC

	gin_tonic 2007-12-29 10:54 pm UTC (link)
	My God! I would never have thought to combine Snape and Charlie with Harry (individually, yes, but together?), but - damn - this was hot! I think I need more Charlie/Harry/Snape. (Reply to this) (Thread)

gatewaygirl, 2008-01-05 01:45 am UTC

	painless_j 2007-12-30 02:01 am UTC (link)
	That was wonderful! And hot! I loved the life of the reserve, the broom and dragon rides. Charlie was wonderful too, and I absolutely loved Harry. He sort of grew up :) But stayed IC. Thank you! (Reply to this) (Thread)

gatewaygirl, 2008-01-05 01:47 am UTC

	schemingreader 2007-12-30 05:40 am UTC (link)
	Wow, that was a great feat of plotting, to manage to get the three of those characters together. The sex was extremely hot. I see why Flora liked it. Great stuff! (Reply to this) (Thread)

gatewaygirl, 2008-01-05 01:48 am UTC

	vissy 2007-12-30 07:40 am UTC (link)
	Very hot! I loved just about the whole thing except that it's not for keeps (imo once a year totally insufficient g!). I loved the sex and the dragons and the banishment from Gringotts and the potion-making and the waterfall and shaky Snape and mentor Charlie and masseur Harry. In conclusion: YAY! (Reply to this) (Thread)

gatewaygirl, 2008-01-05 02:17 am UTC

no_mad_skillz
2007-12-30 07:52 am UTC (link)

Wow, I really liked this. I love Charlie and Harry together, and Snape and Harry together. Funny I never thought of the three of them together. The sex was hot; the dialogue funny and sad and real; Harry a delight, growing up and in character (so many of those lines I could totally see coming out of canon Harry's mouth. Well done, you); Snape a bitter, desperate, lonely man, angry and spiteful and Snape even while weak and racked with pain.

God, poor Snape...you know, though, I think it happened just this way. Yes. *nod*

Lalalalalala, this is my new canon.

Know what? I even liked Charlie being so sure of Harry-and-Ginny, leading us into the Epilogue of...Not Doom, really, as it seems we are all beginning to see our ways quite clearly around it. :D

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gatewaygirl, 2008-01-05 04:08 am UTC

	mcmuffins_js 2007-12-31 12:28 am UTC (link)
	I'm sure I had a lot of semi-articulate praise for this, but then "Perhaps it needed further research" drove it all away in a haze of ggggggguuuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhh. I mean, I was already incoherent from the amazingness and the hotness and the FUCKING WOW of the whole thing, but mmmmm. Incredible. (Reply to this) (Thread)

gatewaygirl, 2008-01-05 04:09 am UTC

	nahimana 2007-12-31 01:23 pm UTC (link)
	Damn, that is hot. There's nothing coherent I can say, really. It's just incredibly hot. I adored it. (Reply to this) (Thread)

gatewaygirl, 2008-01-05 04:09 am UTC

	torino10154 2008-01-01 10:33 pm UTC (link)
	Considering how very little we get of Charlie in canon you have made him real, three dimensional-hot and wild. I'm always looking for happy endings so although I would have preferred something else, this still didn't feel like a sad ending if that makes any sense. Harry was great-learning from Charlie, helping Snape. All the sex was terribly hot. Most excellent work. (Reply to this) (Thread)

gatewaygirl, 2008-01-05 04:19 am UTC

	yodels 2008-01-01 11:58 pm UTC (link)
	I thoroughly enjoyed this. I love Harry and Charlie together. (Reply to this) (Thread)

gatewaygirl, 2008-01-05 04:22 am UTC

	secretsolitaire 2008-01-02 02:44 am UTC (link)
	Wonderful! A very intriguing plot, an incredibly sexy Charlie, and believable characterizations all around. I really liked that you didn't give things a traditional happy ending -- I liked the openness of it. Nice work, mystery author! (Reply to this) (Thread)

gatewaygirl, 2008-01-05 04:21 am UTC

	(Anonymous) 2008-01-02 03:11 am UTC (link)
	Hot!!!! Smokin' Hot!! (Reply to this)

	celandineb 2008-01-02 04:36 am UTC (link)
	Oh wow, what a combination of pairings/threesome -- this was tremendously hot and I loved your dirty-talking and honest Charlie! (Reply to this) (Thread)

gatewaygirl, 2008-01-05 07:16 pm UTC

	ships_harry 2008-01-02 05:53 am UTC (link)
	fngh. HOT. Charlie ♥ . Charlie in charge. Of Harry and SNAPE. God, it just kept getting better :D. Also, Snape was great, yes, brittle, like Harry said. All edges and anger n stuff. Fantastic. (Reply to this) (Thread)

gatewaygirl, 2008-01-05 07:18 pm UTC

	gyutto.livejournal.com 2008-01-02 12:57 pm UTC (link)
	Such a hot threesome. I've honestly never read one where the initial pairing characters are in an open relationship; that makes great sense plot-wise. Plus, I'm a sucker for any Charlie-fic taking place on the dragon reserve! (Reply to this) (Thread)

gatewaygirl, 2008-01-05 07:21 pm UTC

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