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wanking_mods ([info]wanking_mods) wrote in [info]hp_wankfest,
@ 2011-05-12 10:00:00

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Entry tags:2011 fic

Fic: Severus Snape in the Forest of Dean with the Sword of Gryffindor
Title: Delivering the Sword
Author: [info]torino10154
Character: Severus Snape
Location: Forest of Dean
Prop: Sword of Gryffindor
Other Characters: References to the Chosen One
Rating: R
Warnings: Nothing beyond the fact that Severus's 'inspiration' is not yet 18.
Word Count: ~850
Disclaimer: These characters do not belong to me. No wizards have been harmed while making this fic.
Author's Notes: YAY Wankfest! Thank you most sincerely to the dynamic duo for all their help. Any mistakes that remain are entirely my doing.

Severus ran his finger along the cool Goblin-made blade. The irony of the fact that he was the person entrusted to keep the most quintessential of Gryffindor artifacts safe was not lost on him.

The fact that Professor Dumbledore still refused to tell him why Potter needed it chafed. As he pulled on his traveling cloak he thought about his own plan to get Potter the sword, and he took no small amount of pleasure not confiding that in Dumbledore.

Apparating to the Forest of Dean after he stepped outside Hogwarts' gate, Severus had little trouble finding an area of magic, surprisingly strong but quite familiar. Silently he moved through the trees, searching for the perfect location to place the sword. 'Conditions of need and valor', Dumbledore had said. Certainly Potter's reckless bravery knew no bounds….

He spotted a small pool, not quite frozen over. It was deep enough to make it a challenge for Potter to retrieve the sword, but not large enough that it would be difficult to find.

Severus then looked around and noticed a perfect point from which to watch, two trees growing close together, and Potter would never know he was there.

He tried to crush the thought that perhaps he might linger longer just to see Potter, not for the purpose of his mission. From what he'd heard after the mishap at the Ministry, Potter now truly carried himself like a man, his demeanor impressive.

A schoolboy no longer.

Severus had watched him, had protected him, but now he wanted him. Badly. He'd used his desire for the boy to his advantage with the Dark Lord, allowing him to see how much Severus wanted him. Bending him over his desk, taking him up against the cold castle walls. He hid his emotions though, never revealing how he felt, only his basest desires. The appearance of improper thoughts gave him a reputation that, while vile, worked in his favour with the Dark Lord and his band of degenerate Death Eaters.

As his pulse quickened, blood thrumming through his veins, Severus noticed the hilt of the sword was growing warm in his hand, an unexpected tingle of magic, urging him on, seeming to know what he was thinking.

He pressed his back against one of the twin trees and reached inside his robes and pulled out his cock, hissing softly at the contact of his cool fingers to his warm flesh. His eyes were slits, but never fell closed as he stroked himself, picturing the boy-turned-man that Severus's entire adult life revolved around.

He pictured the broad planes of his chest, his narrow waist, abdomen only just beginning to darken with jet black curls. Those fierce green eyes – his heart clenched. What he would give to see them look at him with something other than hatred, just once, even though he'd done everything to deserve it.

A trickle of sweat rolled down his temple as he rocked his hips forward into his fist, the sword humming in his other. Inspiration struck and he brought the cool length of the sword against his hot flesh and stroked himself against the flat of the blade.

The sword was heavy in his hand, his forearm flexing as he held it against himself, rubbing against the surface of the blade, taking his pleasure in defiling this Gryffindor as he couldn't have the living, breathing one he desired.

He pulled and stroked and dreamed of pushing Potter down to the snowy ground and fucking him, hard, hearing him cry out his name, begging for more.

"Fuck," he breathed as his balls tightened and his release exploded out of him, splattering the sword, watching as a trail ran down to the tip.

He stood panting, the cool air rushing into his lungs.

It was then that he recalled something Dumbledore had said to him, casually, as if it mattered little.

Goblin-made blades imbibe only that which strengthens them.*

He nearly laughed aloud at the absurdity of the thought. It certainly sounded like something Dumbledore would believe.

Scheming old bastard.

Severus still wasn't sure why Potter needed the sword, but in his struggle against death perhaps he needed something more personal—willingly given—from Severus as well.

Struck by the thought, he immediately smeared his come along the length of the blade.

To his utter shock, it seemed as if the blade absorbed the fluid and shone more brightly than before.

He cast a cleansing charm on himself and straightened his robes. Making his way to the pond, he cracked the ice with a well placed Reducto and lifting the sword into the air with his wand, slowly maneuvered it into place, then lowered it beneath the surface of the water. Refreezing the ice, he took a deep breath, and cast, Expecto Patronum and a brilliant doe leapt from the end of his wand then turned and approached him slowly.

"Bring Potter to the pond. Do not speak a word." She nodded her head and silently cantered off into the woods. Making sure to cover his footprints as he retreated, Severus made his way behind the two trees to wait. And watch.



*P. 304 US DH hardcover. Said by Hermione to Harry.



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[info]roozetter
2011-05-12 05:44 pm UTC (link)
I rather liked this. Desperate and cold but with a fascinating play on existing magics.

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Delivering the Sword - [info]torino10154, 2011-06-09 06:08 pm UTC

[info]vividzephyr
2011-05-12 05:52 pm UTC (link)
Wow!! This was brilliant~! I love how Snape so totally desires Harry and thinks of what he would do to him as he wanks. It's almost sadly sweet that he wants Harry so badly and desires Harry to return his feelings. I really love the use of the sword and how it absorbs Severus's come. That was so awesome.

I also really love how Severus goes behind the trees to watch. :)

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Delivering the Sword - [info]torino10154, 2011-06-09 06:09 pm UTC

[info]shyfoxling
2011-05-12 06:17 pm UTC (link)
I wonder exactly what extra "strength" Severus's semen is lending the blade...

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Delivering the Sword - [info]torino10154, 2011-06-09 06:10 pm UTC

[info]alisanne
2011-05-12 06:29 pm UTC (link)
Mmm, very hot and sexy!
And I love the unique way Severus had of 'anointing' the blade. *g*
Well done! :)

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Delivering the Sword - [info]torino10154, 2011-06-09 06:11 pm UTC

[info]ragdoll
2011-05-12 07:44 pm UTC (link)
I really loved this! Great use of existing canon and it feels like a missing scene (as if JKR would ever actually go there LOL), and fantastic use of the prompts.

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Delivering the Sword - [info]torino10154, 2011-06-09 06:12 pm UTC

[info]owlbait.livejournal.com
2011-05-13 12:15 am UTC (link)
Oh,the hotness that is unrequited-lust-fueled wankage. Extra points for, er, impregnating the sword.

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Delivering the Sword - [info]torino10154, 2011-06-09 06:13 pm UTC

[info]psyfic
2011-05-13 01:29 am UTC (link)
Mm... *thinks very naughty thoughts*

That was yummy. I love the mental image this fic made.

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Delivering the Sword - [info]torino10154, 2011-06-09 06:13 pm UTC

[info]jadzialove
2011-05-13 01:49 am UTC (link)
Whoo-hoo! Excellent. I love Snape's longing and the twist with the sword is genius. Well done!

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Delivering the Sword - [info]torino10154, 2011-06-09 06:14 pm UTC

[info]alwaysasnapefan
2011-05-13 05:11 am UTC (link)
So delightfully twisted to think this is part of canon. Mm. :-)

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Delivering the Sword - [info]torino10154, 2011-06-09 06:15 pm UTC

[info]veridari
2011-05-13 05:55 am UTC (link)
Wow, this just feels like something that could be slid right into canon and should IMO. Loved it!

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Delivering the Sword - [info]torino10154, 2011-06-09 06:16 pm UTC

[info]eriador117
2011-05-13 10:28 am UTC (link)
Loved it!

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Delivering the Sword - [info]torino10154, 2011-06-09 06:16 pm UTC

[info]centaury_squill
2011-05-13 11:56 am UTC (link)
This particular scene in Deathly Hallows has always resonated for me, and you just added an extra dimension. Love the sword drinking Severus' come.

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Delivering the Sword - [info]torino10154, 2011-06-09 06:18 pm UTC

[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2011-05-14 03:36 am UTC (link)
Oh, this is just so Severus! Loved it!

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Delivering the Sword - [info]torino10154, 2011-06-09 06:20 pm UTC

[info]atypicalsnowman
2011-05-15 02:02 pm UTC (link)
I like the idea of Severus rubbing his semen into the sword for Harry. The wanking is very hot, but somehow that act is even hotter. : )

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Delivering the Sword - [info]torino10154, 2011-06-09 06:22 pm UTC

[info]eeyore9990
2011-05-16 04:33 am UTC (link)
Okay, this is the wrong reaction to have, but as soon as I finished this I started giggling and I haven't stopped. Because, omg, I can't help picturing the look on Snape's face when he finds out RON is the one who gets the sword. *giggles more*

But omg, this was wonderful. I had a moment of "eep" when I read him sliding his cock along the blade (flat of, but still! Don't slip!!), and then the yumminess of it all caught up with me. Awesome fic, dear author!

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Delivering the Sword - [info]torino10154, 2011-06-09 06:24 pm UTC

[info]keyairreem
2011-05-16 03:53 pm UTC (link)
Wow! That was intense! I love how the sword encouraged him! The imagery! YUMMY!

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Delivering the Sword - [info]torino10154, 2011-06-09 06:24 pm UTC

[info]leela_cat
2011-05-21 01:29 am UTC (link)
Hot and sweet with just an edge of danger (wanking with a sword, FTW!). Great story.

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Delivering the Sword - [info]torino10154, 2011-06-09 06:25 pm UTC

[info]gin_tonic
2011-05-22 11:37 pm UTC (link)
Oooh, I love this! Love the desire that Severus has for Harry and - of course - the naughtiness in him wanking over the sword and having the sword absorb his semen.

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Delivering the Sword - [info]torino10154, 2011-06-09 06:25 pm UTC

[info]snapesgirl
2011-05-27 08:33 pm UTC (link)
nice and naughty.

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Delivering the Sword - [info]torino10154, 2011-06-09 06:38 pm UTC

[info]gryffindorj
2011-05-29 07:02 am UTC (link)
A little bit of Snape's dangerous side wanking with a sword. Very nice!

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Delivering the Sword - [info]torino10154, 2011-06-09 06:39 pm UTC

[info]ensnarryed
2011-05-30 05:56 pm UTC (link)
He hid his emotions though, never revealing how he felt, only his basest desires. The appearance of improper thoughts gave him a reputation that, while vile, worked in his favour with the Dark Lord and his band of degenerate Death Eaters.

and this
Severus still wasn't sure why Potter needed the sword, but in his struggle against death perhaps he needed something more personal—willingly given—from Severus as well.

and the fact that Snape does not feel *completely* alone, making this a welcome wanking fantasy...

Combine for a whole lot of LOVE!

*adds to Memories, not the least for the fact that this is SNARRY!* :3

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Delivering the Sword - [info]torino10154, 2011-06-09 07:05 pm UTC

[info]luciusmistress
2011-06-04 09:09 pm UTC (link)
Wanking with a sword = WIN! Loved how Snape gave the sword a little personal touch! ;D

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Delivering the Sword - [info]torino10154, 2011-06-09 07:03 pm UTC

[info]r_grayjoy
2011-06-09 04:34 pm UTC (link)
This? Is completely amazing, Mystery Author. Probably one of my favorites of yours that I've read so far. I had certain expectations based on the chosen prompts, and you way, way surpassed them. You could have done a simple wank in the woods with this, but instead you gave it meaning that never would have occurred to me. And in so few words!

You do a wonderful job of establishing Snape's character - sarcastic and bitter and calculating -- right from the opening lines. This entire piece has a quite aura to it that's perfect for the scene.

Oh, man. Snape's longing for Harry is palpable, and I LOVE that he twisted and used his desires to suit his purposes with Voldemort. That's so very, very like Snape -- pragmatic to the extreme, though keeping a tragic little kernel of something for himself.

picturing the boy-turned-man that Severus's entire adult life revolved around.

Those fierce green eyes – his heart clenched. What he would give to see them look at him with something other than hatred, just once, even though he'd done everything to deserve it.

Brilliant insights.

The way the sword's magic guides Severus' actions is fab. And even though Severus imagines himself to be "defiling" a Gryffindor artefact, he still does what he knows the sword wants. Then his belated recollection of Dumbledore's words and his realization that Dumbldedore's had his way even beyond death -- yes! And the way you utilized that one little line from canon -- SHEER BRILLIANCE.

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Delivering the Sword - [info]torino10154, 2011-06-09 07:11 pm UTC

[info]sra_danvers
2011-06-09 04:38 pm UTC (link)
Oh, that watching at the end... *-*

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Delivering the Sword - [info]torino10154, 2011-06-09 07:04 pm UTC

[info]demikiss
2011-06-18 04:37 am UTC (link)
Ay yi yi! Severus rubbed himself against the surface of the blade? No wonder Harry called him the bravest man he ever knew!
Love the idea of Severus seeding the Sword. Can't wait till Ron finds it & falls madly in love with him. ❤

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(no subject) - [info]torino10154, 2011-06-18 10:27 am UTC


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