#171 Kisses: The Beginning of an Endless Consumption, PG
Title: The Beginning of an Endless Consumption
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG
Challenge: #171, Kisses
Characters: Remus/Severus
Author's Notes: Concrit welcomed, as well as any other comments.
Their first kiss was more a mutual lapping of tongues, the urge to taste, to imprint the other man on his palate, overwhelming all other needs. Remus flicked out to the corner of thin lips and Severus answered with a swipe along the line of Remus' smile. They were sloppy wet by the time their mouths met, their mingled flavour unique and hunger for it unquenchable.
When the kiss ended, Severus' chin was raw from Remus' whiskers, and Remus' bottom lip fattened from Severus' gnawing. They had the tang of each other now. The devouring to follow would be utter.
love, lore
nymphospice
alisanne
nimrod_9
cordeliadelayne
red_day_dawning
lordhellebore
But so very realistic ^^
firefly124
mnemosyne_1
westernredcedar
This was like a little happy surprise, so quick and intense. My favorite detail is the whiskers. Mmm.
dianamoon
sweetmelodykiss
snapelike
Delicious.
electriclady88
Very realistic, very hot!