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Snupin100 Challenge #139 Mistakes

Title: Implacable Bonds
Author: Spidermoth
Word Count: 111
Rating: R
Challenge: #139 Mistakes
Characters: Snape, Lupin
Warnings: some BD/SM & naughty-bits refs
Beta: none
Disclaimer: Created by JK, pilfered by me.

Sort of an atmospheric glimpse (I hope!). I was feeling angsty.

The bands are tight and unforgiving…my body’s only adornment, the garb of weakness.

Arms and hands are pulled up by implacable bonds, and the futile act of reaching—a parody of penitence, of supplication.

I won’t pray to deaf gods.

Thighs bound forcibly apart are useless sentinels, so weak that trembling is their only defense against the plunder of aching, needing, genitals and anus.

Take them. I can’t offer.

Sounds dredged from my throat cause the collar to bite, punctuating the exquisite speech of surrender.

I try not to moan. I try not to beg. I try not to let him hear the need.

PleaseRemus,pleaseRemus,pleaseRemus…

…don’t let this be a mistake.

Comments

Very good. It has some really evocative imagery :D
Thanks, but I'm not sure I even like this now that I go back and read it a few days later. Isn't that funny how that can happen? The things that come out of our creative minds...
thanks. I like that kind of stuff. Drabbles are good for a quasi-poetic approach, IMO.
Mmm, I think it lends itself to however the reader reads it. I read it as very sexy. Nice job!