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snarryswapmod (snarryswapmod) wrote in snarry_swap,
@ 2009-01-24 12:00:00

Entry tags:

creation: fic, quill_lumos, rated: nc-17

Happy Daft Day, iani_ancilla!
Recipient: iani_ancilla
Title: A Culinary Seduction
Author: quill_lumos
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Food porn and liberal use of a language that I don't speak. Oh and mind where you step, broken glass and crockery can be dangerous!
Prompt/Summary: Kinks: dirty talk, drunk!Sev or Harry (not alcoholic, though), possessive!Sev, sarcasm (must count as a kink :)
(Optional) Scenario or plot device: I like fics where Harry for some reason keeps taking his love problems to Severus, and has not yet realized Sev is in love/attracted to him. But I like any kind of plot, really.
A/N: Well, I hope I got all your wishes included to your satisfaction! I thought that I would make Severus of Italian descent, just for you. Unfortunately my Italian is about as good as Harry's so many, many thanks to Cinzia (nightmindwalker) for the translation *smooches her*. Thanks too, to the charming, graceful and impossibly erudite galad222000, without whom this fic would have suffered plot-holes, bad punctuation and rabid overuse of the word 'that'.

A Culinary Seduction

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	thesewarmstars 2009-01-24 06:05 am UTC (link)
	Oh, that was ten kinds of perfect. Hot and yummy and great. I loved Snape's vacillation between the insecurity and tentativeness and self-loathing, and the smugness and forthrightness. “Do try to keep up, Potter. We are in a restaurant. My restaurant, in fact. It is seven forty-eight in the evening and this is a menu.” Bloody hilarious. Great job. (Reply to this) (Thread)

quill_lumos, 2009-01-24 06:04 pm UTC

	eriador117 2009-01-24 08:16 am UTC (link)
	That was wonderful! I loved how you brought in about Harry being starved and he saw food as affection. And the table scene, oh my, how hot was that? (Reply to this) (Thread)

quill_lumos, 2009-01-24 06:06 pm UTC

	japonicastar 2009-01-24 09:22 am UTC (link)
	Wow just gorgeous. I feel like I ate with them, and am all warm and sated now. Wonderfuly descriptive and hot and passionate. Great job and thanks for sharing. Smiles (Reply to this) (Thread)

quill_lumos, 2009-01-24 06:06 pm UTC

	ivylady 2009-01-24 10:35 am UTC (link)
	What a lovely story! I adore Snape as the proprietor of a restaurant, especially an Italian one. The attraction between the two was well done, and I love that the food brought them together. (Reply to this) (Thread)

quill_lumos, 2009-01-24 06:09 pm UTC

	centaury_squill 2009-01-24 10:41 am UTC (link)
	Your story made me want to rush out to the nearest Italian restaurant! ;) I love how Severus makes love to Harry with delicious food and sexy Italian, gradually leading up to that amazingly hot scene on the table. Brava! (Reply to this) (Thread)

quill_lumos, 2009-01-24 06:11 pm UTC

	triceybabe 2009-01-24 11:07 am UTC (link)
	it was wonderful (Reply to this) (Thread)

quill_lumos, 2009-01-24 06:11 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2009-01-24 11:44 am UTC (link)

OMG OMG OMG!!!
That was so great!!! And now I keep hearing Snape speaking in a neapolitan accent in my mind... incredible!!! Best gift ever!!! THANKS, that was awesome! And Severus's look when Harry starts commiserating himself...

Oh, there are a couple of tiny mistakes in the Italian, and in the menu, I could point them out if you want, but TRUST ME the story is perfect nontheless!!

Alas, it's not the right season for porcini, but I'll think of this fic as I cook risotto ai frutti di mare for dinner ;)

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quill_lumos, 2009-01-24 06:16 pm UTC

	torino10154 2009-01-24 12:48 pm UTC (link)
	Severus speaking Italian FTW! Lovely. I adored that Harry couldn't even get in the place until Severus decided to invite him. Harry's confusion, anger then changing to more. Severus's obvious attraction to him. The food, Cousin Luigi vbg, and the lovely table sex scene. GUH!!! Bravissima. (Reply to this) (Thread)

quill_lumos, 2009-01-24 06:18 pm UTC

	dreamingjewel 2009-01-24 03:34 pm UTC (link)
	Lovely Story. Very romantic and appealing to the senses. (Reply to this) (Thread)

quill_lumos, 2009-01-24 06:18 pm UTC

	alliekatgal 2009-01-24 04:19 pm UTC (link)
	Beautiful. Snape speaking Italian and cooking wonderful Italian food, just for Harry, all go together so perfectly!!! (Reply to this) (Thread)

quill_lumos, 2009-01-24 06:19 pm UTC

	alisanne 2009-01-24 06:17 pm UTC (link)
	Mmm, that was an utterly delicious seduction. By the end I was definitely envying Harry. Wonderful descriptions culminating in a masterful love scene. Brava! :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

quill_lumos, 2009-01-24 06:20 pm UTC

	felaine 2009-01-24 07:03 pm UTC (link)
	What a lot of effort and thought you put into this complex world. Love Harry not being able to get into the restaurant, and Snape having a family who support him. Good work. Felaine (Reply to this) (Thread)

quill_lumos, 2009-01-26 11:30 am UTC

	entrenous88 2009-01-24 07:06 pm UTC (link)
	Very fun! Italian is such a sexy language, and it was interesting to have Snape's backstory about the Italian part of his family and background. Harry associating food with care and comfort makes lots of sense, and seducing him with lovingly prepared dishes and murmured Italian phrases worked very well. (Reply to this) (Thread)

quill_lumos, 2009-01-26 11:32 am UTC

	Yummlicious! galad222000 2009-01-24 07:46 pm UTC (link)
	Wow! Turned out fabulous, my sweets. It read so well, I thought I was watching a video instead of reading a document. I could see everything so clearly. Only problem was: I couldn't eat the nummy food or partake of the yummy table sex. Loved the dynamic between Snape and Potter from the beginning to the end. Hugz the QL! Your, TCB (Reply to this) (Thread)

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quill_lumos, 2009-01-26 11:33 am UTC

	swansong33 2009-01-24 08:10 pm UTC (link)
	This was so perfect! I love chef!Snape and how vulnerable they both were in their own way. I wish I had something profound to say, but the only thing in my head right now is fangirl squeeing. So I'll just say, OMG! This was brilliant and I loved it! (Reply to this) (Thread)

quill_lumos, 2009-01-26 11:35 am UTC

jennybliss
2009-01-24 08:42 pm UTC (link)

Beautiful, Wonderful, Amazing!! I felt like I was falling in love along with Harry. The emotions were so real and intense that I was choked up many times through out the story. The second dinner had me in tears. Poor Harry was so lost in his own loneliness that he missed what Severus was trying to do. This was just so good that I really can't come up with the words to express how it has made me feel. I am just in awe at how well it is written. Now I am rambling. I just love this!!

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quill_lumos, 2009-01-26 11:37 am UTC

	teas_me 2009-01-24 08:54 pm UTC (link)
	What a delicious seduction! and all that Italian - so very hot! And Snape being so unsure about Harry wanting him back and his blushing. gah I love Harry and Severus! (Reply to this) (Thread)

quill_lumos, 2009-01-26 11:38 am UTC

	lucianwolf 2009-01-24 09:25 pm UTC (link)
	Oh God. Food and Snarry and Italian and control and ... Wow. I didn't realize food was one of my fetishes, though I certainly should have. Thank you so much. This was amazing. (Reply to this) (Thread)

quill_lumos, 2009-01-26 11:40 am UTC

LUCIE I ADORE YOU AND BOW BEFORE YOUR GREATNESS :)

roozette
2009-01-24 09:46 pm UTC (link)

Man, I LOVE you, Lucie! I have read this approx eighteen million times and it still makes me happy. Though, for the longest time, I was desperately depressed that I had neither:

1. A hot Italian of my own
2. A sexy Slytherin to cook for me
3. Two hot men going at it like rabbits in front of me.

But I am over it now. Mostly. And still love you and this amazing story.

Oodles of love and devotion,
Roo

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Re: LUCIE I ADORE YOU AND BOW BEFORE YOUR GREATNESS :) -

quill_lumos, 2009-01-26 11:43 am UTC

winoniel
2009-01-24 10:03 pm UTC (link)

OMG, what a delicious (pun intended) story! How seductive: Italian, Italian food, and a slightly snarky, slightly insecure, totally hot Severus! Everything Harry (or I :^) could want. Your writing is so marvelously descriptive and evocative that I could almost taste the food!

One point: "Sono sicuro di poterti insegniare molte parole e frasi ci concedi un tentativo Harry?” means something about being sure he can teach him many words and phrases if Harry'll let them try. Nothin' there about a bed.....

Beautiful work! iani_ancilla is very lucky.

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quill_lumos, 2009-01-26 11:46 am UTC

	katiebell_0408 2009-01-24 10:04 pm UTC (link)
	Wow, this was hot. I love clueless Harry. And Italian Snape was pure genius. I love how Sev showed his love through the food, but kept the snarkyness intact. Thanks for another great read. (Reply to this) (Thread)

quill_lumos, 2009-01-26 11:48 am UTC

	gaycrow 2009-01-25 12:05 am UTC (link)
	Mmm, this is very tasty. I love all the foody bits, and I really like your portrayal of Harry too. He's not sucked right in, but has true moments of irritation and annoyance with Snape. All power to Snape that he manages to find Harry's weaknesses. ;D (Reply to this) (Thread)

quill_lumos, 2009-01-26 11:50 am UTC

	lrodell 2009-01-25 02:13 am UTC (link)
	this was lovely and fun and I think I need to learn Italian^^ (Reply to this) (Thread)

quill_lumos, 2009-01-26 11:51 am UTC

	hambares 2009-01-25 10:13 am UTC (link)
	The story was a nice, slow hot! The italian was quite hot! And Severus seducing Harry - definately very hot! (Reply to this) (Thread)

quill_lumos, 2009-01-26 11:52 am UTC

	aeryun 2009-01-25 05:31 pm UTC (link)
	Oh...wow! I do believe I have a new kink! Severus Snape speaking more than just English...YUM! (Reply to this) (Thread)

quill_lumos, 2009-01-26 11:54 am UTC

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