While I think the military briefing side was also overwritten, that wasn't the bit I was talking about. I mean stuff like this:
"The fastest man alive was always late because he stopped and befriended the people he saved. He spent hours meticulously analyzing a crime scene so he could find justice for a victim that didn't have any. He slowed down bad rejoined the rest of us every chance he got. You're running nonstop because you're afraid it'll be taken away again."
And then three word balloons of the same back from Barry! It's having the characters tell each other stuff that should be shown rather than told…and it tries to be profound and meaningful and eloquent, but the sheer tonnage of words prevents it from achieving any of those things.