This issue was a hideous mess. I knew that I was in for a rough ride when I read the first page and saw that the artist had committed an EPIC FAILURE (if you've read the issue you know exactly what I'm talking about).
I don't know what the worst part was.
Take Hal's decision to form a new League, and Ollie going with him. It came out of nowhere, and was presented as having already happened. Hal was a colossal dick here, and Ollie was little better.
I have no idea why Dinah would approach Wally unless Barry had turned her down. That is entirely plausible, as Barry would be the first person Hal would go to when he did this, but Barry's name never even came up even though everyone knows he's back.
The bit with Clark, Diana, and Dinah was damned odd. They were far too cold to her. I understand Clark's rationale for leaving the team (New Krypton and all) but Diana... her obligations to Themyscira? Which is, as far as she currently knows, devoid of all save Hippolyta and the Circle?
Where the fuck does this even fit in the timeline?
If McDuffie is actually admitting that he's unhappy with the book, then I can just imagine what's going on behind the scenes.