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blonde bombshell ([info]erynflynn) wrote in [info]rp_tutorials,
@ 2012-04-24 16:29:00

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If I've asked this before I'm sorry. I need help on my facts which I'm changing it to public so you can look at it and give me pointers on how to make it more detailed. I'm doing this b/c I've been rejected by two different groups and thinking its b/c of my bio. HELP PLEASE!!

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[info]evaakeru
2012-04-25 06:48 pm UTC (link)
First off...did none of the mods of these games indicate what the issue was with your application? You intimate that they did not but I certainly hope that isn't the case.

Second..What you've got feels like a 'cliff notes' version of her life. You could basically stick a bullet in front of each blurb you have which would almost make it a timeline of important dates. Tell us a little story of her life/history; give a bit more insight/feeling into those moments that have shaped her up to current.

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