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notreallyme10 (notreallyme10) wrote in qaf_challenges,
@ 2009-07-12 17:28:00

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48. Drabble: Time Immaterial
Title: Time Immaterial
Author: buster_cat
Theme: Full circle
Notes: Post-513. Many thanks to Charger and Champ for the beta.

Dark shadows and distant voices swirl together in the warm, moist air. The cat blinks once as he watches from behind his curtain of night. A lone figure stands inside a pool of light, a buzzing energy detectible in his casual stance. Footsteps now, until the one who's waiting isn’t anymore, a second figure joining him within his illuminated circle. A silent stare, a reciprocated smile, a murmur of voices in like-timbered exchange. And then they're moving off, alone together and highlighted against the backdrop of the gotham citied tapestry, fingers entwined, steps in sync, and a single destination ahead.

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	outlander 2009-07-13 11:22 pm UTC (link)
	Ooooh a dark almost moody feel to this. I like that. And yes, steps in sync - single destination!! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	buster_cat 2009-07-18 01:34 am UTC (link)
	Thank you for your lovely comments. ~Buster (Reply to this) (Parent)

	ahaw9913 2009-07-14 01:46 am UTC (link)
	I love this perspective on this most-beloved scene! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	buster_cat 2009-07-18 01:34 am UTC (link)
	Thank you very much. ~Buster (Reply to this) (Parent)

	rosy5000 2009-07-14 03:54 am UTC (link)
	Oooo! That's a very different feel. Love the easy show of togetherness though. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	buster_cat 2009-07-18 01:35 am UTC (link)
	I appreciate your comments. Thank you. ~Buster (Reply to this) (Parent)

	noteverything 2009-07-14 02:28 pm UTC (link)
	Many thanks to Charger and Champ for the beta. I "know" them! This is an unusual, interesting drabble. Thanks for sharing it! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	buster_cat 2009-07-18 01:36 am UTC (link)
	And thank you for reading and commenting. ~Buster (Reply to this) (Parent)

	circadia 2009-07-14 08:36 pm UTC (link)
	I love the imagery. Nicely done :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	buster_cat 2009-07-18 01:36 am UTC (link)
	Thank you so much. ~Buster (Reply to this) (Parent)

	jule1122 2009-07-14 11:20 pm UTC (link)
	Really interesting with such strong imagery (Reply to this) (Thread)

	buster_cat 2009-07-18 01:37 am UTC (link)
	Thanks very much. ~Buster (Reply to this) (Parent)

	butternutsquash 2009-07-15 02:18 am UTC (link)
	This is my favorite QAF/Harry Potter crossover ever. Ha, just kidding. I liked seeing this from an outsider's point of view and love how this imitates BJ's first meeting. Welcome to NY, Brian! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	buster_cat 2009-07-18 01:38 am UTC (link)
	The first line of your comment made my human laugh very hard. Thank you for reading and for your comments. ~Buster (Reply to this) (Parent)

	sjmpets 2009-07-15 04:12 am UTC (link)
	loved the pov. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	buster_cat 2009-07-18 01:38 am UTC (link)
	Thank you. ~Buster (Reply to this) (Parent)

	minuet9 2009-07-17 12:36 am UTC (link)
	Loved the imagery and perspective. Ingenious :) beautifully written thank you (Reply to this) (Thread)

	buster_cat 2009-07-18 01:38 am UTC (link)
	And thank you for your comments. ~Buster (Reply to this) (Parent)

	simplystars 2009-07-21 12:33 am UTC (link)
	Wow, what lovely imagery. :) And a very cool outsider POV. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	buster_cat 2009-07-23 01:24 am UTC (link)
	Thank you. I appreciate your feedback very much. ~Buster (Reply to this) (Parent)

	notreallyme10 2009-07-31 02:41 am UTC (link)
	What a lovely and descriptive drabble! Thank you Buster! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	buster_cat 2009-08-08 11:48 pm UTC (link)
	purrs And thank you for reading and for your comments. ~Buster (Reply to this) (Parent)

	_alicesprings 2009-09-26 09:56 am UTC (link)
	This is fantastic, Buster! You're a most poetically observant kitty. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	buster_cat 2009-10-22 01:24 am UTC (link)
	Meow and thank you very much. ~Buster (Reply to this) (Parent)

	happier_bunny 2009-10-03 09:40 pm UTC (link)
	Oh Buster, we still love the feel and mood of this drabble and let's not forget it's message. It's perfect! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	buster_cat 2009-10-22 01:25 am UTC (link)
	purrs Thank you for such kind feedback. ~Buster (Reply to this) (Parent)