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notreallyme10 (notreallyme10) wrote in qaf_challenges,
@ 2009-07-12 16:46:00

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25. Drabble: Silent Vigil
Title: Silent Vigil
Author: frantic_quest
Theme: Season 4 drabble
Notes:Sincere thanks to the lovely not_everything for her skillful beta.

I knelt beside him on the bed carefully, reluctant to disturb his restless slumber.

He shivered lightly in his sleep, his sweat-covered body reminding me of better times.

Times our bodies had rutted tirelessly together; our shared sweat and semen combining in a testament to the passion that constantly consumed us.

I pulled the duvet tightly over his shoulders. He moaned quietly, and I knew that soon he would awaken, reality a kick in his remaining ball. He would pretend he was fine, and I wouldn’t argue.

I pressed my lips gently to his forehead and kept my silent vigil.

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	vl_redreign 2009-07-12 10:25 pm UTC (link)
	SOBS Beautiful, haunting, perfect. (Reply to this)

	ahaw9913 2009-07-13 02:40 am UTC (link)
	What a beautiful depiction of Justin's love and fear during this arc. Thank you! (Reply to this)

	qafmaniac 2009-07-13 08:36 am UTC (link)
	OMG BEAUTIFUL!! Sad BUT perfect! sobs a bit (Reply to this)

	outlander 2009-07-13 02:47 pm UTC (link)
	weeps and weeps and weeps My heart breaks for both them, meaning this is simply perfect. sniffs a little more (Reply to this)

	rosy5000 2009-07-13 11:43 pm UTC (link)
	Oh, that is just achingly beautiful. So easy to see Justin watching over Brian like that too. (Reply to this)

	minuet9 2009-07-14 02:23 am UTC (link)
	So sad :( Well written. I can imagine Justin not sleeping through this time, just watching. Thank you. (Reply to this)

	noteverything 2009-07-14 06:34 pm UTC (link)
	It really is a very lovely drabble! Thank you for letting me see it before everyone else. (Reply to this)

	itwaslovetome 2009-07-14 09:10 pm UTC (link)
	So understated and heartbreaking. Just beautiful. (Reply to this)

	circadia 2009-07-14 09:13 pm UTC (link)
	Beautiful. You captured the emotion so well! (Reply to this)

	sjmpets 2009-07-15 03:06 am UTC (link)
	i loved it. justin standing guard to make sure that brian is alright is so touching. (Reply to this)

	fun_demented 2009-07-15 03:42 am UTC (link)
	OUCH!!! So sad. Well done. (Reply to this)

	jule1122 2009-07-15 10:13 pm UTC (link)
	Great insight into how Justin must have felt and I love the contrasts you used (Reply to this)

	testdog65 2009-07-16 01:49 am UTC (link)
	sniff Sad but oh, so very powerful. ~Ellen (Reply to this)

	pfodge 2009-07-17 04:24 pm UTC (link)
	Sad, but Wow! Very nicely done. (Reply to this)

	bulagirl 2009-07-17 04:38 pm UTC (link)
	This is so beautiful and full of emotion. Wonderful drabble! (Reply to this)

	suze_y 2009-07-18 02:40 pm UTC (link)
	gulp This is beautiful. (Reply to this)

	notreallyme10 2009-07-26 05:33 pm UTC (link)
	This is lovely! He moaned quietly, and I knew that soon he would awaken, reality a kick in his remaining ball. Such a great line! (Reply to this)

	happier_bunny 2009-09-16 06:24 pm UTC (link)
	oh boy, this made me all mushy! (Reply to this)