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xie_xie_xie ([info]xie_xie_xie) wrote in [info]qaf_challenges,
@ 2009-03-07 11:00:00

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Entry tags:small things made large, small things phase 2

16. 4:37 am (Drabble 27)
Title: 4:37 am
Author: [info]notreallyme10
Drabble: # 27 by [info]xie_xie_xie and [info]happier_bunny


Long, slow lick down my back, between my ass cheeks, flickering over my hole. Wet and pointed, thrusting inside me, electricity shooting… everywhere.

I humped my palm, pushing against his tongue, everything building up, making me moan, say his name, beg him not to stop. He kept pressing inside me, licking, nibbling, and I exploded, rush of come onto my fingers and the bed.

I woke up, sticky and breathing hard. I reached out in the darkness for Brian next to me in the bed, but there was no one there to touch.

Pittsburgh had never seemed so far away.


“What?"

"It's obviously been too long since you last fucked me; I just had a wet dream."

"Fuck Justin, it's only been six days and it's... 4:37 in the morning."

"Yes and I'm all covered in come. I'm going to have to get up and take a shower if I have any hope of getting back to sleep."

"Just wipe off on the sheet and roll to the other side of the bed."

"There is no other side of a twin bed."

"Whose fault is that? I told you to buy an adult sized bed."

"For an adult sized bed, I would need an adult sized apartment and that I cannot afford."

"Did you seriously wake me up in the middle of the night to talk about the high cost of living in New York?"

"No, I called about the dream."

"Was it hot?"

"Very hot."

"Great, now that you've shared, can I go back to sleep?"

"I once had a dream that you fucked me while levitating."

"I'll take that as a no."

"It was really hot. I jerked off to it for weeks."

"When the hell was that? Why didn't you tell me about it?"

"We weren't together. It was right after I broke up with Ethan and I was living with Daph. I was really missing you."

"Ah yes, the stalker days, take two."

"Say what you will about being a stalker but it has proven a very successful tactic for me. Besides, that time it was Daph's idea."

"Subtlety has never been Daphne's strong suit."

"Oh and you're one to talk."

"I more than make up for my shortcomings with my charming disposition and my huge cock."

"Now we're getting somewhere, tell me more about your cock."

"How soon they forget. Let's see, it’s long and thick and it's been hard since you mentioned something about being covered in come."

"You should stroke it."

"You should suck it."

"Mmm, I should. How fast can you get here?"

"Sorry, this week is crazy. But as you might recall I'll be there this weekend."

"What are you going to do to me when you get here?"

"While I'm certain what I am about to say will earn me a number of old age jokes, I have to ask, why can't we engage in phone sex at a reasonable hour?"

"We can, and if you think back a few hours, you will remember that we did. But you have my body trained. I'm used to being woken up in the middle of the night and fucked within an inch of my life."

"Yes, but I never had to participate in witty banter for that."

"Believe me; you're not that witty at five in the morning."

"I miss the stalking days when you kissed my ass and worshipped the ground I walked on."

"Mmm, I'll kiss your ass."

"I'm not getting out of this am I?"

"Do you really want to?"

"No, but when Cynthia starts bitching at me tomorrow for throwing stuff and firing people, I'm telling her to complain to you."

"That's OK, I've got Cynthia wrapped around my little finger."

"What did you do, stalk her too?"

"That may be one of the sweetest things you've ever said to me."

"I plead exhaustion."

"I fucking miss you. I can't stand sleeping alone."

"I know, me either."

"How many days until you're here?"

"Just four more."

"Want me to let you go back to sleep?"

"Nah."



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[info]secretsolitaire
2009-03-07 07:48 pm UTC (link)
So much love for this! You've got their voices just right. ♥

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-12 11:51 pm UTC (link)
Thanks so much!

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[info]jule1122
2009-03-08 08:23 am UTC (link)
This is so fun! I could really hear them.

Just wipe off on the sheet and roll to the other side of the bed."

"There is no other side of a twin bed."

"Whose fault is that? I told you to buy an adult sized bed."

This made me laugh

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-12 11:51 pm UTC (link)
Thank you very much :)

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[info]kari77
2009-03-08 06:02 pm UTC (link)
OMG, that's the freaking most hilarious and sweet thing I've read in a long time. I love dialog-only fics when they are so funny and well written as this one, where the dialog just flows and you never want it to end.

I could quote the whole thing as my favorite part, but I'll restrain myself and just go with these lines:

"Great, now that you've shared, can I go back to sleep?"

"I once had a dream that you fucked me while levitating."

"I'll take that as a no."


"I more than make up for my shortcomings with my charming disposition and my huge cock."


"We can, and if you think back a few hours, you will remember that we did. But you have my body trained. I'm used to being woken up in the middle of the night and fucked within an inch of my life."

"Yes, but I never had to participate in witty banter for that."

"Believe me; you're not that witty at five in the morning."

"I miss the stalking days when you kissed my ass and worshipped the ground I walked on."

*bwahahahaa*

Thank you for the good laugh. :D

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-12 11:52 pm UTC (link)
Thank YOU for the wonderful feedback!

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[info]rosy5000
2009-03-09 12:50 am UTC (link)
hehe This was just too adorable. Their bantering back and forth ws too cute and funny. Especially at almost 5:00 am. :D

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-12 11:52 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]ahaw9913
2009-03-09 12:49 pm UTC (link)
This is almost perfect!
It just needs to go on for about 1,000,000 more words!

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-12 11:52 pm UTC (link)
LOL! Thanks!

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[info]ahaw9913
2009-03-13 12:00 am UTC (link)
Didn't know about any of the others, but this one I was pretty sure was yours. So, so, so loved it!

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-14 04:04 pm UTC (link)
It seems I have a habit of writing stories like this... Not sure why but I like the late night phone calls between them :)

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[info]ex_4cupcakes771
2009-03-11 03:57 pm UTC (link)
*adores*

This is going in my memories. Definitely.

The adult-sized bed line cracked me up. I love their snarky dialogue when it's so full of how much they really love each other...and this is just filled with that. Every word.

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-12 11:52 pm UTC (link)
Awww, thank you so much! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it!

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[info]morgana7266
2009-03-12 03:51 pm UTC (link)
Aaw! Now you've gone and made me all happy! It was fun and touching and sweet and it sounded just like them. And best of all, there was none of that post 513 angst that sometimes drives me up the wall. I loved it!

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-12 11:55 pm UTC (link)
Oh but there is angst! *makes serious face* Justin needs a bigger bed... and doesn't want to wait until the weekend to get fucked by Brian again ;) Thank you!

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[info]outlander
2009-03-13 09:33 am UTC (link)
This is just perfectly their voices.
The snark, the sweetness, the love just shining through.

The lines about the adult size bed and stalker days made me laugh out loud. I didn't want it to end. Thank you so much!!

"While I'm certain what I am about to say will earn me a number of old age jokes, I have to ask, why can't we engage in phone sex at a reasonable hour?"

"We can, and if you think back a few hours, you will remember that we did. But you have my body trained. I'm used to being woken up in the middle of the night and fucked within an inch of my life."

"Yes, but I never had to participate in witty banter for that."

*dies laughing again*

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-14 04:08 pm UTC (link)
This was sort of my guilty pleasure fic... I feel like I've already sort of written stuff like this before, but I just love the late night calls so much, I keep doing it :)

I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks!

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[info]itwaslovetome
2009-03-15 10:56 am UTC (link)
Wonderful.
I love when authors give us the lighthearted side of their long-distance Post-513 relationship. And their voices were so right here.
Plus, I think we can all imagine Post-513 Brian wanting Justin to have a nicer, roomier apartment, bed, etc... And that always cracks me up!

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-16 09:53 am UTC (link)
Thank you very much!

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[info]besamislabios
2009-03-17 09:20 am UTC (link)
PERFECT!!!! ♥

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-18 04:44 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]noteverything
2009-03-18 09:24 am UTC (link)
Ahhhh!!!!! I love you and all your fics for this challenge.

And this one! I *love* Brian/Justin dialogue and this is perfectly THEM.

*hugs you and this fun conversation*

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-18 04:49 pm UTC (link)
Awww, you are so sweet! Thank you!

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[info]happier_bunny
2009-03-19 06:22 pm UTC (link)
I freakin' love this! All of it..every. single. word. :D

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-19 08:37 pm UTC (link)
Thank you :) And thank you for writing this wonderful drabble!

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[info]bellaaurora
2009-03-23 03:46 am UTC (link)
Such a cute ending for a HOT drabble! I'm glad you didn't go with angsty, this had a much better tone. Plus, I love grumpy middle of the night Brian. Their voices were perfect.

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-24 10:21 am UTC (link)
Thanks so much!

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[info]dottie_jane
2009-04-05 12:44 pm UTC (link)
I love this. It was fun to read and I'm in total awe of your dialogue skills.

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-04-06 07:49 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! I have so much fun writing dialogue fics :)

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