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xie_xie_xie ([info]xie_xie_xie) wrote in [info]qaf_challenges,
@ 2009-01-10 12:09:00

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Entry tags:small things made large, small things phase 1

Small things made large: 1-4

Readers: Please leave the authors some love!
Authors: Please do not identify yourself nor reply to comments on your own drabbles.

1. by [info]vl_redreign

The upside was that Daphne lived nearby. The downside was…well, shit, the downside was a bottomless pit, now, wasn’t it?

Justin sucked various bleeding fingers into his mouth, hitching his black duffle more firmly onto his shoulder, and adjusting his messenger bag to keep it from banging against his hip. He was really getting tired of moving. He’d thought about going to Deb’s, but he really wasn’t in the mood for twenty questions and pasta.

Well, maybe pasta. Daphne was still on her health food kick.

Still, he knew that she would take him in and fuss over his hands.


2. by [info]noteverything

One More Minute

"Don't go." Justin's voice was low, almost a whisper. Brian closed his eyes against it, pretending he hadn't heard. He reached out and touched Justin's hair, waiting another minute before he got up.

"One more minute." Justin echoed Brian's thoughts.

"You know I have to, Justin."

Justin sighed imperceptibly. "I never thought it would be this hard."

Brian didn't answer. Instead he pulled Justin to him, touching his face and kissing him softly before he pushed him gently away and moved to get out of bed.

"One more second?" Justin asked quietly.

"Justin."

"I know."

Brian left without another word.


3. by [info]fansee

Gus was stabbing and killing his ravioli, one by one. Mel said, "So, Gus, didn't your pre-kindergarten go on a field trip today?"

"Yep."

"Well, tell me about it."

"I awready told Mom."

"You didn't tell me."

"It was very inneresting. We saw pigs and chickens and cows. They were milking the cows." Gus put down his fork. “Jus’ like when Daddy milked Justin.”

Two sets of appalled maternal eyes stared at him.

Lindsay broke the lengthy silence. “I’m sure there’s a perfectly reasonable explanation for….” Her voice trailed off at Mel’s sardonic expression.

“Yeah? Like what? You tell me.”

4. by [info]testdog65

Justin watched the smoke unwind in dissipating curls before it vanished in the breeze from the open window. He inhaled again and let the smoke expand in his lungs, feeling the tightening pull and burn before allowing it to escape, this time in the forced rush of his exhale.

A cacophony of noise filtered up from the street below; honking horns, distant sirens and the occasional muffled shout. All of it as much a part of the background as the buildings and the heat and the endless press of people.

Justin ignored the phone as it began to ring again.


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[info]qafcracked
2009-01-10 02:57 pm UTC (link)
Number three is just hilarious, and number four is a beautiful fragment. Number two is heartbreaking, and number one made me crack up at the pasta bit.

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[info]jule1122
2009-01-10 03:33 pm UTC (link)
1. Love the humor mixed in with the somberness of Justin's situation

2. Gorgeous and oh so sad

3. Hilarious!

4. So many possibilities and also very visual

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[info]happier_bunny
2009-01-10 03:44 pm UTC (link)
1. pets Justin...perfectly matches that mood

2. oh sweet angst, bring it on...

3. bwhahahhahahha...so very funny! I want to hear about the "milking"

4. amazing imagery.

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-01-10 04:01 pm UTC (link)
1. Oh I love this one... I can't wait to see Daphne's reaction to Justin's poor hands.

2. I can totally feel the painful fic that is going to come out of this one... and I can't wait :)

3. This cracked me up and disturbed me in equal parts. I am DYING to see the fic that this one inspires.

4. So many ways to go with this one... can't wait to be surprised!

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The Joys of Parenthood
[info]fansee
2009-03-12 09:28 pm UTC (link)
Thank you for giving us all the back story on my drabble, and doing it so humorously. Brilliant. FanSee

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Re: The Joys of Parenthood
[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-14 03:59 pm UTC (link)
Thank YOU for writing such a hilarious drabble. I was very inspired :)

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[info]secretsolitaire
2009-01-10 04:07 pm UTC (link)
#1: *hugs Justin*

#2: *sniffles* Gorgeous.

#3: Oh, no!! LOL.

#4: Ooh, I love the mood of this -- nice use of details to set the scene.

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[info]bodleian
2009-01-10 04:32 pm UTC (link)
1. Poor Justin. I could feel his pain.
2. So much sadness. These guys should not be apart.
3. Brian milking Justin. I want to hear more and I am sure that Mel and Linds feel the same.
4. The visual here is very strong. I also feel that Justin in very alone.

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Great start
[info]secretlife
2009-01-10 06:05 pm UTC (link)
1. Very intriguing. This one could go many different ways.
2. This one broke my heart. As I'm sure the ensuing fic will as well.
3. Very funny! Out of the mouth of babes...
4. Beautiful. This one is wide open for interpretation.

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[info]rosy5000
2009-01-10 07:41 pm UTC (link)
1. Awww. Poor Justin. I just want to hug him and try to help him feel better.

2. Can't we just stick Brian and Justin inside a bubble to keep them together and happy forever?

3. hehehe I have a feeling Brian's going to get a call very soon. *giggles*

4. I'm more intrigued by this one. What happened that Justin's ignoring the phone?

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[info]fun_demented
2009-01-10 07:53 pm UTC (link)
1. I love gapfillers and this is a good one

2. So sad! Their feelings would definitely be worthy of the word yearning

3. Gus was stabbing and killing his ravioli, one by one.

OUTSTANDING OPENING!

“Jus’ like when Daddy milked Justin.”

OH, LAWDY!

4. STUNNING! And intriguing!

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[info]burntpyre
2009-01-10 08:39 pm UTC (link)
#3 is horrible! Funny as hell but still horrible!XD

#4 What happened? Was the phone a really bad news or he's just tired of work and everything?

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[info]pendulumchanges
2009-01-10 08:58 pm UTC (link)
1. Gotta love Daphne :)

2. Ouch, ouch, ouch... it hurts my heart! Beautifully done.

3. *LMAO* O.M.G. Mel's going to kill Brian! And Lindsay is going to make Justin feel soooooo guilty!

4. I can hear the noise of the city. Nicely done.

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[info]noteverything
2009-01-10 09:08 pm UTC (link)
1. Nicely done. Daphne will be *happy* to see him.

2. Oh sweet angst. It's like crack to me.

3. Dear lord. I just shudder to think about Gus seeing that. And then describing it as milking. *dies*

4. I love this. It's another one that I think I might know the writer, but I'm usually wrong. Anyway, this is another of my favorites (I started from the end!). I love "dissipating" and "cacophony" and "muffled." The whole description of inhaling the smoke is beautiful. And I can't wait to see why Justin's ignoring the phone. Wonderful drabble.

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[info]passing_through
2009-01-10 09:40 pm UTC (link)
1. Poor Justin's fingers. I want to know what happened.
2. Oh, my heart hurts right now.
3. OMG, the things kids hear/see and repeat :D
4. Beautiful. It leaves me wanting to know more.

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[info]starinthesky
2009-01-10 11:17 pm UTC (link)
1. Oh poor Justin, so many possibilities for this one.

2. The angst, it hurts so good.

3. OMG lol, too funny!

4. Very nice, beautiful imagery and description. As well as the potential for it to go in so many directions.

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[info]burntpyre
2009-01-11 04:57 am UTC (link)
#1: This reminds me that Justin was like the character who moved the most during the series, while Brian didn't move at all. Nearly all important characters had moved to another house, some more than once. Heck even Chris Hobbs got himself a new house to live. I kinda wanted Brian to move at least once, as much as I loved the loft. Btw pretty Daphne was so tiny, she needed more unhealthy food.

#2: I'd be lying if I say I don't feel this. That's exactly what it feels like to be separated from the one you (I) love, even temporarily. Can't Brian just stay there? Okay he can't, but still. Make him stay!

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[info]sjmpets
2009-01-11 06:30 am UTC (link)
number 1 would love a background story, 2 heartbreaking, 3 hysterical and innocent, 4 shouted loneliness.

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[info]singlewoman
2009-01-11 10:05 am UTC (link)
1. Poor Justin, he needs his Daphne
2. Sob! Very heartbreaking
3. Hilarious! I want to read all about this milking session
4. Very visual. Could lead to several different scenarios

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[info]outlander
2009-01-11 02:35 pm UTC (link)
1. So sad, yet bittersweet funny. Twenty questions and pasta? snort.
2. *sobs* Someone fix it!!! Though I love it just as it is.
3. Oh Dear God...Dies with Laughter!!!
4. Beautiful mood and imagery. I want to see where this goes.

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[info]morgan_is_randy
2009-01-20 06:36 am UTC (link)
1. Very interesting. A lot can be done with that.
2. Makes me sad, makes me think Brian is visiting Justin in NY?
3. Uhmm... jeez! That's just about the funniest and scariest thing I've ever read!
4. Really interested in this one. I love the imagery and endless possibilities.

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[info]testdog65
2009-02-21 12:28 pm UTC (link)
1. *pets poor Justin* But what a lovely little reminder that Justin can always turn to Daphne.

2. *sniff* Sad but beautiful.

3. ROFL “I’m sure there’s a perfectly reasonable explanation for….” Well, of course there is! :D

4. Uh, oh…

~Ellen

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[info]ex_4cupcakes771
2009-03-07 06:57 am UTC (link)
1. Thank goodness for Daphne. *sighs for Justin*
2. I love this one. Very painful, but I can feel their love.
3. HILARIOUS!
4. Answer the phone!! Justin in NY? I love the imagery in this one...

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[info]ahaw9913
2009-03-08 05:52 am UTC (link)
1. What is he running from?
2. So painful!
3. Someone's in trouble!
4. Come on Justin, he's lonely too.

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[info]bellaaurora
2009-03-23 03:25 am UTC (link)
1. So sad. I feel Justin's moving pain, but I'm glad he has Daphne.

2. Ok, breaking my heart a bit too much, but wonderful.

3. Cracked me up!

4. I want to know why he's not picking up that phone!

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[info]_alicesprings
2009-04-03 09:16 pm UTC (link)
1. Great prompt!
2. Wibble.
3. Hilarious!
4. Intriguing and gorgeous! Did someone write for that? *off to look*

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