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xie_xie_xie ([info]xie_xie_xie) wrote in [info]qaf_challenges,
@ 2009-01-10 12:00:00

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Entry tags:small things made large, small things phase 1

Small things made large: 15-19

Readers: Please leave the authors some love!
Authors: Please do not identify yourself nor reply to comments on your own drabbles.

15. by [info]vl_redreign

It was wrong, and she knew it. But right then, Melanie didn’t care. Marianne was sucking so hard on her clit that Melanie would have given her all of her money right then. Some of it. Maybe.

The buzzing of the vibrator mirrored the buzzing in her brain, wiping thoughts of Lindsay and Gus and Brian right out of her head. She didn’t want to think, or argue, or even talk. What she wanted was to come, really fucking hard.

Marianne’s mouth was absolutely sinful, full lips and warm tongue, licking, invading, conquering. Mel came, and Marianne started over again.


16. by LJ's lastglances

The streets are a menace, full of dangerous temptation. Brian smokes at the window, a caged bird smoothing its ruffled feathers. It's an hour past midnight and Brian counts every second. His breath does not come easy, the smoke gathering in his lungs, a seeking poison. He exhales heavily, considers going to bed. An hour later, the shower stills and Justin emerges from clinging steam as Brian turns towards him in bed. He understands. Brian had enough to worry about without standing at the window, keeping a hawk's watch on his return. Justin sleeps with that knowledge heavy upon him.

17. by [info]burntpyre

"Michael said you sent Justin a roomful of roses."

"Yup."

"Wow, Brian. That's really sweet."

"I've asked the guy to fucking marry me and bought him a palace; surely mere flowers shouldn't be a surprise anymore."

"Yes, sure. Sorry."

"I'd like to celebrate your birthday with our cwazy family but I won't be in town tonight, so I hope this will do."

Ben stared at the thing Brian just put on the table and couldn't be more surprised if Brian suddenly screamed 'fire!' and ran.

"I… I don't know what to say. Thank you."

Brian grinned, satisfied with Ben's reaction.

18. by LJ's sfscarlet

Invitations sent, pictures mounted, gallery open. Now I wait to see if anyone shows up to view my work. My manager said, “Mount it, they will come.” In walks the first patron and soon the place is filled. Quickly red stickers are placed on many of the paintings. I'm busy talking to a patron who wants to commission me to paint a mural in her summer home. This is the third such request tonight. He walks up to me, waiting for me to finish talking and gives me a kiss.

“You're become the best homosexual.”

“Now, I can come home.”

19. by [info]testdog65

"That's the last of them, sir. Sign here, please." The deliveryman shoved a clipboard at Brian and indicated a line near the bottom of the grimy receipt.

Brian stood in the driveway and watched the truck pull away until a final curve in the road took it out of sight. He thought about not going inside, instead getting into the Corvette and letting the road take him someplace that wasn't here.

Maybe that was why he was surprised, a few minutes later, to find himself in the cavernous living room, trying not to acknowledge the presence of the paper-wrapped canvases.


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[info]notreallyme10
2009-01-10 04:34 pm UTC (link)
15. Hot and so sad... I love the combination.

16. Such interesting imagery. This really drew me in.

17. OK, what the heck did he get Ben???

18. “Mount it, they will come.” This line absolutely KILLS me!

19. So many places for this to go! I love how open ended this is.

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[info]jule1122
2009-01-10 05:29 pm UTC (link)
15. Captures that storyline perfectly

16. Very foreboding but still leaves so much room for interpretation

17. I'm so curious about Ben's gift and why such a dramatic gesture for Justin

18. The sweet taste of success

19. This feels so much like Brian's story to me. I can't wait to find out what that story is

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[info]pendulumchanges
2009-01-10 06:15 pm UTC (link)
15. Wow. Nicely done.

17. Such a great post-513 Brian! - "I've asked the guy to fucking marry me and bought him a palace; surely mere flowers shouldn't be a surprise anymore."

19. This feels so sad... I have no idea why, but to me it screams death!fic

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[info]secretsolitaire
2009-01-10 07:26 pm UTC (link)
#15: GUHHHH. I really, really hope someone writes about this one.

#16: Ooh, I really like the foreboding imagery in this one.

#17: Oh, this is lovely!

#18: Yay, successful Justin!

#19: I'm intrigued...

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[info]noteverything
2009-01-10 08:10 pm UTC (link)
15. Poor Mel. She knew it was so full of wrong, but it felt too good to pass up.

16. The bird images are interesting. And Justin's guilt is too.

17. Oh, the possibilities! I like the reminder that Justin's birthday is Ben's too.

18. I always say, all paths lead home. :D

19. Woah. So totally could be death!fic.


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15. -19.
[info]fansee
2009-01-10 08:17 pm UTC (link)
15. I always did like Marianne. I liked her better than Leda.

16. His breath does not come easy, the smoke gathering in his lungs, a seeking poison.

Love that 'seeking poison.' Makes me think perhaps the phrase would be a good metaphor to base a fic on.

17. So now somebody better go hunting through the web, looking for something sufficiently naughty for Brian's present.

18. Justin in New York; wants to be in the Pitts. Fertile ground here.

19. Hee. Looks like Justin is forcing an issue. FanSee

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[info]rosy5000
2009-01-10 08:38 pm UTC (link)
15. I think that captures how lost Mel felt then.

16. Beautiful imagery.

17. lol Ok... what's the present?

18. “Now, I can come home.” My favorite line of any post-513 fic. :)

19. I'm going to look on the happier side of this and see this as Brian trying to help Justin financially by buying his paintings without Justin knowing.

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[info]fun_demented
2009-01-10 08:52 pm UTC (link)
15. Wow! That was hot. So hot, I almost feel guilty!

16. This is moody and mysterious. I love the bird metaphor. This makes me think of the pink posse arc, but I can't be sure...which is what makes it a great prompt.

17. HA HA! GREAT PROMPT! I AM DYING TO KNOW!

18. I knew Justin would be a big success! I'd be interested to see what happens next!

19. I love this. Love the colorful phrasing. I am very intrigued. I hope to learn more!

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[info]passing_through
2009-01-10 10:19 pm UTC (link)
15. Oh My God *fans self* Wow...more please.
16. Very dark and intriguing.
17. What's on the table?????
18. Awwwww.
19. Wow, this could be a death fic but I'm not getting that vibe. I'm curious to know why Brian's avoiding the painting.

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[info]starinthesky
2009-01-10 11:51 pm UTC (link)
15. Guh, very hot! It captures Mel's mind and actions in that story line so well for 100 words!

16. This makes me think Pink Posse, but there are so many possibilities

17. Brian grinned, satisfied with Ben's reaction. lol, I love this. This so needs to be turned into a full fic :D

18. Aww, very nice.

19. It doesn't suggest what has happened at all, but the angst is palpable here.

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[info]qafcracked
2009-01-11 02:10 am UTC (link)
15. Woah. What an intense gapfiller.

16. This makes me think of the Pink Posse arc, but it could be so many other things too.

17. BUT WHAT IS IT?

18. My manager said, “Mount it, they will come.” This is such a great line.

19. Hmm, is Brian lonely?

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[info]qafcracked
2009-01-11 02:11 am UTC (link)
19. OH. *clutches chest* This is heartbreaking.

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[info]outlander
2009-01-11 03:20 pm UTC (link)
15. OMG...hot. And such a good summation of that place in time. I would like to see more of this.
16. Dark. I like that.
17. So what is it??????
18. Mount it they will come...love that!
19. I see an amazing Justin-is-calling-the-shots fic here.

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[info]morgan_is_randy
2009-01-20 07:49 am UTC (link)
15. I'm a gay man and now I plead the 5th.
16. This is very interesting and really inspiring.
17. What is it? Someone better let us find out!
18. Oh. So nice. Simple, but really begging for more.
19. Really like this one. Want to see more of this one too.

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[info]testdog65
2009-02-21 12:49 pm UTC (link)
15. Oooo, nicely hot and filled with so many possibilities!

16. Beautiful phrasing in this one.

17. Oh, I really want to know what "the thing" is! :D

18. I love successful artist Justin!

19. *sniff* Sad… or is it?

~Ellen

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[info]ex_4cupcakes771
2009-03-07 07:36 am UTC (link)
15. omg..intensely hot.
16. This one has a lot of great imagery. Definitely reminds me of the Pink posse arc...lots of possibilities here.
17. WHAT IS THE THING!! I'm so curious! I love how Ben and Justin share a birthday. It's so bookendish to me for Brian and Michael. And the roses from Brian. &hearts
18. Oh, Justin...I love you! And proud!Brian is the best!
19. This is so sad, I THINK? Very curious to see where someone could take this.

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[info]ahaw9913
2009-03-08 06:36 am UTC (link)
15.Bad, bad girls!
16.Very dark, anguished
17.WTF?
18.Interesting
19.What does he not want to see???

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