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xie_xie_xie ([info]xie_xie_xie) wrote in [info]qaf_challenges,
@ 2009-01-10 11:42:00

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Entry tags:small things made large, small things phase 1

Small things made large: 40-43

Readers: Please leave the authors some love!
Authors: Please do not identify yourself nor reply to comments on your own drabbles.

40. by [info]sdrichey

He knew he was doing the right thing. After all, he’d always said that if the kid didn’t get his needs met, he should go elsewhere. There never were any locks on the door. But as he replaced the Rage mask, Brian had never felt more exposed.

No apologies, no regrets was always his motto. But this sinking feeling in the pit of his gut as he searched for the next willing ass into which to bury his sorrows felt like something he shouldn’t be feeling. Surely Justin would realize that romantic love was bullshit and find his way home.

41. by [info]dirtylttlescret

Every lesson with Brian was two steps forward, one step back. Justin was sure he'd either be on the first plane out, or dig in his heels, playing the eternal martyr to Justin's success.

But neither of those things happened. It started with a phone call.

"I was thinking… How badly do you want to live in that house?"

"I want to be with you. Now, later, at Britin, in New York… I want to live with you."

"Then why not New York? Why not now?"

"I thought you wanted…"

"I do. And I want to be with you too."

42. by [info]vamphile

Brian smoked a cigarette slowly, still tasting Justin on his lips even after he'd finished it. He sat for a few minutes more, breathing deeply, and letting it all truly sink in.. It had happened so quickly, broken up to bomb to wedding to goodbye. He felt around the edges of Justin's leaving the way you prod at a bruise, seeing how much it's going to hurt. He stood up, his shoulders straight, his plan still now crystal clear in his mind. He lit another cigarette and nodded to himself absolutely certain that his next move was the right one.

43. by [info]fansee

Justin looked over Brian’s shoulder. Brian was staring intently at a spreadsheet.
“You know,” Justin said, “I’ve always wanted to go on a cruise.”

“Um,” Brian said.

Justin kept his voice flat and uninflected. “So I traded Tom Watkins two of my paintings for a pair of tickets on his “Cruisin’ the Bahamas” trip.”

“Uh-huh.” Brian entered a number on the spreadsheet.

“I talked to Ted and Cynthia, and they both said that after the EyeConics campaign starts, you’d have a couple of slow weeks, so we leave on the 26th. You’ll love it.”

“WHAT THE FUCK DID YOU SAY?”


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[info]notreallyme10
2009-01-10 05:36 pm UTC (link)
40. But this sinking feeling in the pit of his gut as he searched for the next willing ass into which to bury his sorrows felt like something he shouldn’t be feeling. Great line!

41. I LOVE this! I love fics where Brian goes to NYC... can't wait for this one!

42. Such a great line: He felt around the edges of Justin's leaving the way you prod at a bruise, seeing how much it's going to hurt.

43. :D Probably the best way to get Brian to go on vacation!

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[info]pendulumchanges
2009-01-10 05:38 pm UTC (link)
42. Awesome drabble :) It leaves me with a happy feeling. And I absolutely LOVE this line: He felt around the edges of Justin's leaving the way you prod at a bruise, seeing how much it's going to hurt.

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[info]jule1122
2009-01-10 05:53 pm UTC (link)
40. Oh Brian, when will you learn?

41. Every lesson with Brian was two steps forward, one step back.
Fabulous first line!

42. Like everyone else, I love this line:
He felt around the edges of Justin's leaving the way you prod at a bruise, seeing how much it's going to hurt.
But this also stands out to me:
It had happened so quickly, broken up to bomb to wedding to goodbye.

43. Let's hope this vacation actually works!

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[info]noteverything
2009-01-10 06:33 pm UTC (link)
40. Brian all conflicted is interesting!

41. I love this one a lot. Could go all sorts of ways, but it'll go with them together!

42. I'm sure it will be the right move as well, Brian. Nice drabble.

43. Ha! Sounds like this could be hilarious.

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[info]secretsolitaire
2009-01-10 07:37 pm UTC (link)
#40: Heartbreaking. I really like this: But as he replaced the Rage mask, Brian had never felt more exposed.

#41: ♥♥

#42: He felt around the edges of Justin's leaving the way you prod at a bruise, seeing how much it's going to hurt. Great description!

#43: Oh, god. I can just picture Brian on a cruise, LOL...

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40. - 42.
[info]fansee
2009-01-10 09:24 pm UTC (link)
40. Lots of opportunities for angst here. Just leave me smiling at the end, please.

41. So Brian wants to join Justin in NYC? Could there possibly be complications? Does the sun rise in the east?

42. So Brian has a plan of action. Good. Start writing.

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[info]fun_demented
2009-01-10 09:49 pm UTC (link)
40. But as he replaced the Rage mask, Brian had never felt more exposed.

It took me a long while before I could view this scene again, after my initial viewing and you encapsulated the reason very articulately right here.

41. EXCELLENT!

42. This is my favorite drabble that's been posted for this challenge! For the writing, the subject matter and its prompt potential. I hope it's not rude of me to say so!

43. LOL! This is great!

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[info]passing_through
2009-01-10 11:26 pm UTC (link)
40. Oh, breakup angst. I love it.
41. Brian going after Justin makes me happy.
42. He felt around the edges of Justin's leaving the way you prod at a bruise, seeing how much it's going to hurt.
Beautiful imagery. I want to know where he's going.
43. LOL! sneaky Justin.

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[info]rosy5000
2009-01-11 12:13 am UTC (link)
40. I always ached for Brian in that scene. I know he pushed Justin into his choice, but I still hurt for Brian more than Justin.

41. Brian following Justin to NYC... YAY! :D

42. Love seeing Brian not giving Justin up after he goes to NY. :)

43. hehehe I love plotty Justin. *giggles*

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[info]starinthesky
2009-01-11 12:42 am UTC (link)
40. Brian, so conflicted. The angst owns me.

41. Sweet, and Brian declaring his want to be with Justin makes me so happy :D

42. Lovely, there's angst but such hope in this too.

43. Hee, stealth holiday planning may be the only way those two ever actually get to go away together!

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[info]qafcracked
2009-01-11 02:31 am UTC (link)
40. But this sinking feeling in the pit of his gut as he searched for the next willing ass into which to bury his sorrows felt like something he shouldn’t be feeling. Surely Justin would realize that romantic love was bullshit and find his way home.

Surely Brian will realize he's full of BULLSHIT.

41. I wonder who is making the call? Brian *or* Justin?

42. OMG, this is fucking beautiful. Kudos to whoever wrote this drabble. Love it.

43. Lol, this has disaster and hot sex written all over it.

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[info]happier_bunny
2009-01-11 04:19 pm UTC (link)
40. sobs...yes Justin, please find your way home

41. awwwwwwwww BRIAN!

42. this one sounded familiar and I had to go back and search for why...it ended the same way as another one but that one was a season 2 break I think and this is psot 513. The description of Brian exploring his pain was genius.

43. snort

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[info]outlander
2009-01-11 04:30 pm UTC (link)
40. I ache for Brian there...get Justin home!!!
41. Yay!!!! NYC fic!!! I want to read this.
42. He felt around the edges of Justin's leaving the way you prod at a bruise, seeing how much it's going to hurt. *wow. flails* I want to see Brian get to work on his plan.
43. Just picturing Brian going through the lifeboat drill in his orange life jacket has made my day...thank you so much.

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[info]testdog65
2009-02-21 01:47 pm UTC (link)
40. But as he replaced the Rage mask, Brian had never felt more exposed.

Wonderful line. Wonderful drabble!

41. Yay! :D

42. Love the feel of this drabble, and this line:

He felt around the edges of Justin's leaving the way you prod at a bruise, seeing how much it's going to hurt.

43. LOL at the idea of Brian on a cruise! :D

~Ellen

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[info]ex_4cupcakes771
2009-03-07 09:04 am UTC (link)
40. Oh Brian. I love this POV and view into Brian that night at the Rage party.
41. &hearts &hearts &hearts This is one of my favorite post-513 scenarios...I hope someone writes this one so bad.
42. Fabulous.
43. LMAO...Brian at the Midnight Buffet. I can picture it now!

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[info]ahaw9913
2009-03-08 08:02 am UTC (link)
40.Ugly, sad time...
41.I LOVE when Justin is surprised by Brian being mature.
42.Yes, go get him!
43.LOL, freaking LOVED this. Perfect on it's own, but would be great expanded.

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[info]bellaaurora
2009-03-27 10:41 am UTC (link)
40. Broke my heart. Poor Brian!

41. Aww, I love them moving in together, no matter where they are.

42. He felt around the edges of Justin's leaving the way you prod at a bruise, seeing how much it's going to hurt. This line was amazing. So evocative!

43. HAHA! Love devious!Justin!

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