My favorite lines: Brian opened up the email. An invitation appeared on the screen. He could feel a smile pulling on the corner of his lips but he checked it, poking his tongue into his cheek, and rolling his eyes back towards Justin instead.
"May 13th isn't a Saturday, Sunshine."
Justin bit his thumbnail and his eyes flickered back to his screen, "Typo. Should say the 23rd."
I find that *perfectly* IC...I can picture it so perfectly in my mind. Thank you!