Tweak

InsaneJournal

Tweak says, "i'll get you my pretty"

Username: 
Password:    
Remember Me
  • Create Account
  • IJ Login
  • OpenID Login
Search by : 
  • View
    • Create Account
    • IJ Login
    • OpenID Login
  • Journal
    • Post
    • Edit Entries
    • Customize Journal
    • Comment Settings
    • Recent Comments
    • Manage Tags
  • Account
    • Manage Account
    • Viewing Options
    • Manage Profile
    • Manage Notifications
    • Manage Pictures
    • Manage Schools
    • Account Status
  • Friends
    • Edit Friends
    • Edit Custom Groups
    • Friends Filter
    • Nudge Friends
    • Invite
    • Create RSS Feed
  • Asylums
    • Post
    • Asylum Invitations
    • Manage Asylums
    • Create Asylum
  • Site
    • Support
    • Upgrade Account
    • FAQs
    • Search By Location
    • Search By Interest
    • Search Randomly

xie_xie_xie ([info]xie_xie_xie) wrote in [info]qaf_challenges,
@ 2008-05-17 01:43:00

Previous Entry  Add to memories!  Tell a Friend!  Next Entry
Entry tags:challenge in two parts

Graphic Number 14: "Countertop or Floor?"
Title: Countertop or Floor?
Author: [info]not_yet_defined
Timeline: Post Series
Rating: PG-13 for language
Author's notes: Thank you, [info]tweedygal, for the beta. And thank you to the artist. I adored this graphic.
Graphic: #14 by [info]cam_a




Brian lifted his eyebrows, looking across the island to where Justin was sitting, muttering curses at his laptop. Justin didn't so much as glance in his direction. Brian thought his powers of mind control must be fading. He turned back to his own computer, ignoring the frantic emails that were coming from Theodore approximately every 3 minutes, and continued to browse through the glass dildos. It seemed Theodore didn't understand what Brian meant when he said he was taking the day off.

"Fuck!"

"On the countertop or the floor?"

Justin looked up long enough to glare at him, then went back to whatever the fuck it was he was doing. Apparently Justin didn't understand what you were supposed to do on your day off either.

Brian found one he liked, or rather, one Justin would like, and added it to his shopping cart, along with a case of his favorite condoms and Justin's favorite lube, then a case of cheaper lube, in handy little one time use packets, for when Justin wasn't around. Or maybe for when he was around, but completely fucking ignoring him, like right now. Was it too early to go to Babylon?

Brian looked over at Justin again; he wasn't cursing any longer, but he was still completely focused on his project. His hair was sticking up in odd directions. He had on one of Brian's white t-shirts and a pair of plaid cotton pajama bottoms. Brian sighed, it was definitely too early for Babylon. He scratched his bare foot on a rung of his stool and clicked "remove from cart" next the little lube packets. He still had at least half a case left, he didn't really need them yet.

He went back to his email, answering Theodore's one by one, with a level of patience for which he really deserved an award. He added a "Fuck off. It's my day off. This is what I fucking pay you for," to the last one. He was about to shut down his laptop and drag Justin away from his, when an email from j.taylor appeared in his inbox. He glanced up. Justin was staring back. Brian raised his eyebrow, but Justin just shrugged, and kept his face blank.

Brian opened up the email. An invitation appeared on the screen. He could feel a smile pulling on the corner of his lips but he checked it, poking his tongue into his cheek, and rolling his eyes back towards Justin instead.

"May 13th isn't a Saturday, Sunshine."

Justin bit his thumbnail and his eyes flickered back to his screen, "Typo. Should say the 23rd."

Brian closed his screen and stood up. "And you found out about this when?"

Justin couldn't help himself now, a smile edged its way onto his face, and danced through his eyes. "Yesterday morning."

Brian advanced around the island toward him, "And you got here when?"

"Yesterday afternoon." He shut his laptop too and spun on his stool towards Brian. "But you kept me very busy and it slipped my mind."

Brian didn't answer that, instead he slipped between Justin's knees, snaked a hand behind his head, and kissed the shit out of him. When they broke apart Justin was smiling like he'd just won the lottery. In way, Brian guessed he had. Justin was talented, and brilliant, it was true, but so were a lot of other artists who didn't get solo shows. In New York Fucking City. At age 27. Brian might have been smiling too.

"We should celebrate."

"Countertop or floor?"



Page 1 of 2
<<[1] [2] >>

(Post a new comment)


[info]gmta_nz
2008-05-17 04:31 am UTC (link)
I love this. Clever, funny and a perfect story for the beautiful graphic that inspired it.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-05-22 05:07 pm UTC

[info]ex_pinkfrict656
2008-05-17 04:43 am UTC (link)
Very nice :D

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-05-22 05:07 pm UTC

[info]outlander
2008-05-17 10:25 am UTC (link)
Your Brian is so perfectly perfectly Brian. And harassing Ted? That is just icing on the cake, I so love that! I smiled the whole way through this. Thank you so much!

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-05-22 05:08 pm UTC

[info]secretsolitaire
2008-05-17 11:45 am UTC (link)
This totally made me smile! Loved Brian harassing Ted (or is it vice versa?), and Justin with bed head, and the whole ending. ♥♥

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-05-22 05:12 pm UTC

[info]testdog65
2008-05-17 08:15 pm UTC (link)
Loved this!!! The e-mails from Ted, Brian's musings on dildos, condoms and Babylon and the way Justin revealed his good news all made for a truly fun and really well done story. Fantastic interpretation of an excellent graphic!

~Ellen

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-05-22 05:13 pm UTC

[info]_alicesprings
2008-05-17 08:42 pm UTC (link)
I love this graphic, and I love this fic!

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-05-22 05:13 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2008-05-17 11:41 pm UTC (link)
One of my favorite graphics of the challenge.

AND...a wonderfully done ficlet to go with it.

My favorite lines:
Brian opened up the email. An invitation appeared on the screen. He could feel a smile pulling on the corner of his lips but he checked it, poking his tongue into his cheek, and rolling his eyes back towards Justin instead.

"May 13th isn't a Saturday, Sunshine."

Justin bit his thumbnail and his eyes flickered back to his screen, "Typo. Should say the 23rd."


I find that *perfectly* IC...I can picture it so perfectly in my mind. Thank you!

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]noteverything, 2008-05-17 11:42 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-05-22 05:14 pm UTC

[info]hannasch
2008-05-18 08:15 am UTC (link)
Short. On the point. Sweet. Funny. What more can one ask in a fic. Thank You.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-05-22 05:14 pm UTC

[info]besamislabios
2008-05-18 08:34 am UTC (link)
*smiles* :D I loved this very much. Everything's perfect, very funny and very clever. &hearts

Thank you. ;)

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-05-22 05:15 pm UTC

[info]vamphile
2008-05-18 10:41 am UTC (link)
what's wrong with countertop and THEN floor? :P

I liked this, like, a lot. I liked poor, taking the day off and still not getting laid, brian... and his bitching at ted, not at justin, and well, all of it.

thanks for the smile.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-05-22 04:00 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]vamphile, 2008-05-22 04:20 pm UTC

[info]singlewoman
2008-05-18 11:58 am UTC (link)
This whole fic really made me smile. Everything from Brian being frustrated because Justin was ignoring him, Ted's continuous sttream of emailing, to Brian browsing for glass didlos that Justin would like.

Nicely done.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-05-22 05:15 pm UTC

[info]firehead30
2008-05-18 03:25 pm UTC (link)
Ahhh so very clever. Love in unused lube packets. Perfect Brian voice in this. *snorts* at poor Theodore and his lack of understanding of a day off....shopping for glass dildos for Justin's ass, best use of time ever.

Well done.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-05-22 05:17 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]firehead30, 2008-05-22 05:19 pm UTC
Countertop or Floor
(Anonymous)
2008-05-18 09:35 pm UTC (link)
Awww! The story was as cute as the title. Loved it. FanSee

(Reply to this) (Thread)

Re: Countertop or Floor - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-05-22 05:17 pm UTC

[info]flashfly
2008-05-19 02:05 am UTC (link)
Love this to bits! Very clever and Justin biting his thumb over the typo was my favorite. :)

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-05-22 05:18 pm UTC

[info]minuet9
2008-05-19 05:26 pm UTC (link)
This had me grinning from the first 'fuck'. Definitely cute ;)

And this
"May 13th isn't a Saturday, Sunshine."

Justin bit his thumbnail and his eyes flickered back to his screen, "Typo. Should say the 23rd."
made me LOL.
Thank you. Thanks also to the very inspiring graphic.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-05-22 05:19 pm UTC

[info]happier_bunny
2008-05-19 05:50 pm UTC (link)
I love this invite...it's awesome!

And this fic was fun fun fun...it made me smile. :)

Kudos to author and maker. :)

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-05-22 05:19 pm UTC

[info]jule1122
2008-05-20 03:45 pm UTC (link)
I loved this look at them in the future. I can't stop smiling. And I love the repetition of "Countertop or floor." Perfect!

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-05-22 05:20 pm UTC

[info]rosy5000
2008-05-20 09:00 pm UTC (link)
lol Brian's online shopping and e-mails from Ted made me chuckle. Some people just don't understand what it means to take a day off. lol

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-05-22 05:21 pm UTC

[info]kata_ny
2008-05-21 03:20 am UTC (link)
i really loved this.the graphic was beautiful and the story goes perfectly with it!

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-05-22 05:21 pm UTC

[info]herefordroad
2008-05-21 09:38 pm UTC (link)
this graphic is incredible...it's perfectly justin and definitely calls for a celebration...countertop and floor!!

brian appreciates accomplishment:

"Justin was talented, and brilliant, it was true, but so were a lot of other artists who didn't get solo shows. In New York Fucking City. At age 27. Brian might have been smiling too."

wonderful fic.

jeannie

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-05-22 05:52 pm UTC

[info]brianslave68
2008-05-21 10:41 pm UTC (link)
And yet another great fic! I feel like I'm repeating myself on all of my comments. Wonderfully in character and a great take on the graphic chosen. Well done!

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-05-22 05:53 pm UTC

[info]notreallyme10
2008-05-21 10:44 pm UTC (link)
This just made me smile... endlessly :) I couldn't ask for more!

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-05-22 05:54 pm UTC

[info]nyxa
2008-05-22 08:44 am UTC (link)
Amazing graphic and this fic had me smiling the whole way through. Clever and so very *them*.

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-05-22 05:54 pm UTC

[info]qafcracked
2008-05-22 01:40 pm UTC (link)
This is so funny and I love it when Justin gets all happy when Brian is proud of him. It's all about teh love!

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-05-22 05:54 pm UTC

[info]cam_a
2008-05-22 03:02 pm UTC (link)
Okay, this fic had me smiling and laughing all the way through. Brian shopping for glass dildos for Justin. Hot! Poor Brian feeling like he is being ignored by Justin. Awww. Ted, and Brian I suppose, harassing eachother - so brilliant! I am so happy you found inspiration in the graphic I made. Thank you!!!

(Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-05-22 05:05 pm UTC

Page 1 of 2
<<[1] [2] >>


Home | Site Map | Manage Account | TOS | Privacy | Support | FAQs