Oh, this is just lovely! AND TOTALLY CANON, JUST SO YOU KNOW! (yeah, yeah, I am forever declaring fanfic canon, but it's just because right now it's so much gorram BETTER than actual canon, lol). But yeah, like Shelly said, this is exactly how I imagine Max/Simone. And they're always so damn CLOSE to this with their inappropriate chemistry and loaded looks and hot sparkage that this scene is just a tiny step beyond that, and I can SO SEE IT HAPPENING ON SCREEN.
Beautifully teased out, MA, and I concur with those who said that the use of scent is brill. <3333
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