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The Porn Santa ([info]smutmas_mod) wrote in [info]merry_smutmas,
@ 2007-12-05 00:00:00

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Entry tags:fic, harry/draco, severus/harry

Merry Smutmas, [info]celandineb!

To: [info]celandineb
From: [info]joanwilder



Title: Occam's Razor
Rating: NC-17
Pairings: Harry/ Draco, Harry/Severus
Disclaimer: All things Harry Potter belong to J.K.Rowling and her book and film companies.
Summary: Two years after the end of the war, only desperation could make Harry seek out the help of a one-time enemy.
Warnings: Sex toys, rimming, bondage
Author's notes: For [info]celandineb, wrapped up in a pouffy bow: bondage, voyeurism, masturbation, toys, delayed orgasm, rimming, dirty talk, frottage, desperate!sex, shower!sex, spanking (implied), UST and a plot, oh my! Hope this makes your holiday a happy one! Also, a word of gratitude to my beta reader for her sharp eyes and 'devil's advocate' par excellence skills.

A thank you to [info]gmth, whose years of hard work (read: countless hours of matching up participants, cracking the deadline whip, arranging pinch-hitters, smoothing ruffled feathers, recipient of much-deserved praise—and, it must be noted, a few piles of virtual shit—formatting and posting, in addition to—god only knows how she does it—reading every single fic) have enriched us beyond measure. All 'O's, full marks, and an award for 'Special Services' to the fandom for you!

( Occam's Razor )


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Re: SIGH!!!!!!
[info]josan
2007-12-06 12:25 pm UTC (link)
Finally!

Okay. Just loved this. I found it interesting that the sex between Harry and Draco (just sex!) was nicely detailed on the physical, while that of the sex between Severus and Harry (love) was more emotional than physical.

I felt sorry for Draco (who, I felt, would have fallen in love with Harry with just a gentle nudge from Harry) but Harry was right. There will be someone out there for Draco, who, after Harry, will be ready to love as fully as Harry loves Severus.

I enjoyed the original manner in which you dealt with the age issue. Oh, and as a lover of epilogues, I enjoyed that as well.

I'm glad that I printed this out, as I shall be reading it over and over again.

Celandineb is one lucky recipient.

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Re: SIGH!!!!!!
[info]joanwilder
2008-01-11 04:03 am UTC (link)
It's gratifying to see that you caught the symbolism of the explicit vs non-graphic sexual description. That's exactly what I was trying to underline--the difference between the two relationships.

You know, I've thought about Harry and Draco, and in a way, I don't think they'd have been good together permanently, almost as if they were a 'transitional' relationship for each other. And too, Draco knew weeks before they brought him back, that Severus and Harry were on a collision course. But I think that Harry gave something very valuable to Draco--a belief that he was worthy of being loved, that people, especially himself, weren't chained to the past, and could change.

I'm pleased you enjoyed the story--thanks so much for your thoughtful comment--it's appreciated.

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