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The Porn Santa ([info]smutmas_mod) wrote in [info]merry_smutmas,
@ 2007-12-03 00:00:00

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Entry tags:fic, harry/draco

Merry Smutmas, Elucreh!

To: [info]elucreh
From: [info]sansa1970




Title: Draco, the Magic Dragon
Rating: NC17
Pairing: HP/DM
Disclaimer: Harry Potter, Draco Malfoy, and all associated characters from the Harry Potter universe are the property of J.K. Rowling and those to whom she has licensed her creations, including without limitation Bloomsbury Books, Scholastic Books, Raincoast Books, and Warner Bros., Inc. No copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: Come to the fair! Draco's granting wishes, Harry's investigating a mystery, and Luna's giving away pants. Crystal balls and kissing, dirty talk and candy floss – and that's just the beginning.
A/N: Merry Smutmas, Elucreh! I had a wonderful time being your Secret Santa, and I hope you enjoy your gift. Endless thanks to my betas – you made this story ten times better. This fic is canon compliant through DH (except the epilogue).

( Draco, the Magic Dragon )



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[info]r_grayjoy
2007-12-03 07:15 am UTC (link)
Oh, this is fantastic. The perfect combination of hilarious, plotty, and hot, with an ending that manages to be sweet without being saccharine.

Draco really does have the appropriate sense of dramatics for this line of work, I must say. And it would take some humbling circumstances to turn him into a better sort of person. His POV here is great; he's lost a lot of his egotism, but he's still proud and sarcastic, and has gained a bit of perseverance out of necessity.

The wand from Wicca Weekly made me giggle madly, as did the Luna cameos. Luna's great -- older, a bit more together, but still very much Luna at the core. I really liked Marguerite, also; you put an extraordinary amount of presence into a character who's only on screen for a very short amount of time.

Dirty-talking Draco; gnnnuh. And the rushed sex scene, with the customer just on the other side of the tent wall -- abjkefuh! I was absolutely on the edge of my seat with the tension through that scene. Awesome.

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[info]sansa1970
2008-01-05 09:15 pm UTC (link)
Thank you, Ro! There's nothing to make my day brighter than getting such a glowing comment from another writer I admire. Thanks for the detailed feedback, and for giving this your valuable time. I know things have been crazy for you recently. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. *hugs*

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