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The Porn Santa ([info]smutmas_mod) wrote in [info]merry_smutmas,
@ 2007-12-09 08:00:00

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Entry tags:fenrir/harry/draco, fic, harry/lucius

Merry Smutmas, [info]son_of_darkness!


To: [info]son_of_darkness
From: [info]kennahijja



Title: The Practice of Walking in Darkness
Pairings: Fenrir/Harry/Draco, Harry/Lucius, Harry/other Death Eaters
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Non-con, coercion, violence, darkficness
Summary: "Potter. There is no one I'd rather have seen stumbling into our little trap. You have a lot to pay for, boy."
Notes: Most humble thanks to Those Who Cannot Be Named for beta and advice way beyond the call of duty. I love you! The title comes from U A Fanthorpe's Descent. Everything else is JKR's. [info]son_of_darkness, I hope you'll enjoy this despite me doing quite a bit of 'cheating the system' as well when picking from your wish list. And thanks for allowing me to slip in that one un-asked-for character!

( The Practice of Walking in Darkness )

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[info]son_of_darkness
2007-12-10 08:12 pm UTC (link)
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRGGHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111

:O!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was..... AMAZING!!!!!!! This was absolutely everything I could have possibly asked for in a gift fic!!! All wrapped up so beautifully, with such gorgeous, intense descriptions and imagery.... GOD!!! I finished it about 3 hours ago and have been sitting here staring at the screen, just.... trying so hard to pull myself together. It totally FLOORED me!!! SRSLY!!!! :O!!!!

Ok, firstly, Harry??? PERFECT!!! Oh GOD, was he perfect!!! I nearly came in my pants just from how amazingly you wrote him!!! GUH!!!! *melts* And, of course, I absolutely adored the fight he put up, mentally and physically, against his captors. You really took my "no broken!Harry" into consideration, which I ADORE!!!! It was gorgeous. :D

Secondly... Oh my fucking GOD!!! The torture??? It was brutal, it was intense, it was merciless, it almost started verging on sickening at certain points, and I make no apologies when I say I absolutely and utterly LOVED it!!! ALL of it!!! I was lapping it up so smugly, like a cat with the last of the cream, lol. I squirmed in my seat in a VERY good way. ;)

Some specific things I loved:

The unapologetic brutality of the rapes and the torture. No kidgloves, no pulling any punches... just hardcore violence and sex. *bites fist and whimpers*

Like I mentioned above, just the sheer level of beautiful, vivid imagery you used. I could picture ever single thing you described so perfectly. It was almost like I was watching a movie... I was hardly even conscious of the fact I was reading. That is the mark or a truly gifted writer, in my opinion. :D

Rabastan plied him with licks, kisses, clamps and his riding crop while an enchanted plug hummed deep in Harry's arse, mixing pain and need and pleasure into something so potent that Harry feared he would drown in it.

GUH!!! That image just about killed me. Not only could I see it, but I could practically feel it. It felt good. ;)


Apparently Death Eater morals forbade molesting one's nephew by marriage, but handing him over to be raped and mauled by a werewolf was all right.

LMFAO!!! Brilliant!!! xD!!


Unmoved by his glare, Greyback stroked his cheek with the knuckles he'd just withdrawn from Malfoy, leaving a stripe of blood and the sharp lubrication grease he was so fond of using, before kissing the corner of Harry's silenced mouth as if to heap insult on injury.

OMFG!!! YOU AWESOME, AMAZING PERSON, YOU!!! I can't even put into words how excited and squeeful I was when I read that bit. I nearly peed myself with happiness!!! :D


But he was breathing after all, he found, and he still hurt, although for the moment, it had almost ceased to matter. His hands spread, stroking the carpet under his palm, inexplicably happy. He could feel his face twist, and wondered whether he was smiling.

Mmmmmmmmmm.... I can feel that. *purrs* >:)


God... just... everything about this fic is wonderful. I wish I could shower you with hugs and kisses and candy canes and cookies and various other sweet Christmassy treats. Damn this internet thing, lol.

Oh, my amazing, wonderful, gorgeous smutty santa... you have made my entire Christmas.

THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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[info]kennahijja
2008-01-05 07:56 pm UTC (link)
You have *no* idea how happy your comment made me! I'm so absolutely, ecstatically glad that you liked it!

And thanks for the challenging prompt! I did bite my nails at the level of scary details in your kinks, but can't thank you enough for giving me a reason/challenge to write Fenrir who'd always terrified me, especially in smutfic. It turned out to be way easier than expected. :)

I was *so* lucky with Smutmas assignments!

And yeah, I'm *really* happy you liked it, and for the brilliant rec, too! :)

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