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Tweak says, "put anotha shrimp on tha barbi"

MarinaNova Mods (marinanova_mod) wrote in marinanova_ooc,
@ 2013-04-01 22:46:00

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mod: hmd, mod: plotting

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blue_eyed
2013-04-05 07:00 pm UTC (link)

ricaaaa. you know that i love you and yours a pretty obnoxious amount so whoops i can only really comment on things you're doing well with and need to keep doing! and in keeping with my usual habit of tl;dring at you (as well as the fact that i missed my last chance), you get a rather teal deer today.

for one, i love reid. just. reid. help. i am having problems conveying this. i am not big on cm for reasons, but now i can't help but watch it sometimes because of reid and our amazing cm cast and i literally just sit there marveling because you guys are all so good at your characters. you always put this wonderful amount of thought into reid and his voice is crystal clear and it makes him so, so interesting and enjoyable to thread with.

as for aidan, i think you handled his update well! it's nicely paced and i think you did provide enough information to go by. with spike, i haven't noticed any too-niceness, but. that's probably because most of my experience with him comes from murderbro activities ahaha. a thing i do want to comment about with him though is his accent! i think you're doing it really well; it has subtle little quirks that you throw in that make it really tangible while not making a reader overthink the accent or anything. oh! and conscienti: i love both of the wardens and i've always loved the juxtaposition between them. they're rad. you're rad. NOTHIN BUT GOOD STUFF HERE. ♥

(piter's icons make writing comments like this kind of difficult because there are all of maybe two icons i could use that don't have rude keywords or aren't just creepy or something piter no)

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	chipswiththat 2013-04-06 03:08 pm UTC (link)
	aaaaah you always give me so many nice words! I'm really happy about what you said about Spike's accent since accents are hard when it's not even your own culture you're pretending to be in. I fear that if I let the teal deers lose again we'll never get anything done so here, have a cookie instead. (Reply to this) (Parent)

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