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Tweak says, "You didn't return them?"

MarinaNova Mods (marinanova_mod) wrote in marinanova_ooc,
@ 2013-04-01 22:46:00

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mod: hmd, mod: plotting

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punching_bag
2013-04-02 12:48 am UTC (link)

Player name: Parsnip
Character(s):

Bak Chang | D.Grayman |

punching_bag | ☑
Hei | Darker than BLACK |

bottomless_pit | ☑
Peggy Carter | MCU:Captain America |

pure_confidence | ☑

Private HMD: Available on all journals with ip logging off and anon enabled! I honestly don't mind if you keep comments here or take it there.

General Comments: As I recently stated on plurk, after having time to actually focus on a handful of characters rather than a legion, I've started to notice that Bak's prose could use some vast improvement especially when I flip flop back and forth between overt comedic relief and serious business. I could also stand to be a little more subtle with his insecurities as he does have a lot of confidence even if he tends to over compensate in some areas. Other things of note is that I've been drawing a lot of Peggy's general interactions from old black and white films that I used to watch ages ago on AMC when used to be what TCM is now. Also, I'm actually a bit more pleased with Hei's prose/voice when I've been struggling recently but I still have a ways to go to getting him back on track as well.

So, basically, any thoughts would be awesome and as the above states, I think Bak could use the most improvement out of my three. And honestly, right now is probably the best time for me to try correcting any voice issues I may or may not be noticing. Thanks!

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	deal_with_it 2013-04-02 02:07 pm UTC (link)
	We have not threaded enough together for me to be helpful in any way -- A CRIME AND A SHAME AND MUST BE FIXED -- but I'm really enjoying Bak and Korra. I love lulz and their thread is full of it. I would love for them to get each other into trouble. :D (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	punching_bag 2013-04-07 03:31 am UTC (link)
	That does sound like a perfect recipe for disaster. Which should plot how to get the them to sabotage each others work. Korra still has her bending, doesn't she? Or is it completely gone? (clearly I need to rewatch this show if I must ask that) (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	deal_with_it 2013-04-07 03:33 am UTC (link)
	REWATCH YES. And yes, she has her full Avatar powers at this canon point. :3 /bounces excitedly (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	punching_bag 2013-04-07 03:37 am UTC (link)
	fufufu... in that case, I'd say just let him get fried somehow or have water dumped on an experiment. It shouldn't take much to get him riled and in an argument! (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	deal_with_it 2013-04-07 04:52 am UTC (link)
	MWAHAHAHAHHAHAA (Reply to this) (Parent)

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