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Tweak says, "poke"

MarinaNova Mods (marinanova_mod) wrote in marinanova_ooc,
@ 2012-09-01 10:50:00

Entry tags:

mod: hmd, mod: plotting

Game-wide HMD/Plotting!
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goddessofwar
2012-09-01 04:08 pm UTC (link)

Player name: AC

Sasha (Athena) | Saint Seiya: The Lost Canvas |

goddessofwar | ☑ | HMD
Kohran Li | Sakura Taisen / Sakura Wars |

koubu_mama | ☑ | HMD
Reki | Haibane Renmei |

cast_a_pebble | ☑ | HMD

Comments: First off, thank you for all the CR! I'm aware that I've been generally slow on things and that I need to catch up with regards to tagging out, and have my characters meet new people. |Da I really want to play with everyone of you and get back to doing that again, time and energy permitting. Otherwise, do hit me up if you have any questions, or if there's anything about my playing that got you headscratching and stuff!

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	vikingly 2012-09-01 04:22 pm UTC (link)
	I've said this before but I don't know your canons, however I always enjoy playing off Reki and Sasha a lot. I know we've got ideas for Sasha and Buffy. I'm looking forward to that and a lot more CR (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	goddessofwar 2012-09-01 05:22 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you! Know that I have great fun with your girls! /o/ Sasha up and got herself hurt but I hope to get her ready to poke around pool tables with Buffy very soon! I also need to have my kids poke more at yours, specially with your new guy! (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	vikingly 2012-09-01 05:28 pm UTC (link)
	Yes! And I'm always good with putting things off until it works for you. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	goddessofwar 2012-09-01 05:31 pm UTC (link)
	OTL I'm so sorry for making you wait! (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	vikingly 2012-09-01 05:33 pm UTC (link)
	No worries (Reply to this) (Parent)

	kitty_has_claws 2012-09-01 04:24 pm UTC (link)
	More plotting than HMD because I love your characters, but don't know their canons! We need to do something with Sam and Sasha. I've been so bad at that lately. And I'd suggest a cute date thing, but she just got hurt, didn't she? So, angsty hospital times then? (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	goddessofwar 2012-09-01 05:26 pm UTC (link)
	I've been shy in approaching you for Sam/Sasha things and I feel bad for having them bond over Sasha getting injured XD;; But yes! Healing bonding times will happen! Otherwise I also want for them to have a PEACEFUL date sometime! ( '-')a (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	kitty_has_claws 2012-09-01 09:36 pm UTC (link)
	aww! /holds you close. No need to be shy! I should approach you more too! This all sounds good! (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	goddessofwar 2012-09-02 01:21 am UTC (link)
	I'd like them to get "lost" in the hedge maze sometime (ninja) ~ (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	kitty_has_claws 2012-09-02 01:23 am UTC (link)
	Cute! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	needmymp3 2012-09-01 05:11 pm UTC (link)
	Tyki needs to set up a new baaar, and reel his cooklady back in. Also, Rebecca is curious about this angel Cross seems to (want to) feel up. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	goddessofwar 2012-09-01 05:29 pm UTC (link)
	Tyki will do well to do so and Sasha will help! Hopefully cooking for him again would get her out of the usual trouble she gets herself into! Reki meeting Rebecca would be grand! Reki will be assisting Soubi in his art class (post for which should be up soon), which they'll be holding outdoors! /o/ (Reply to this) (Parent)

	matter 2012-09-01 10:24 pm UTC (link)
	i'd love to tag with you! i don't think elena's been tossed at any of yours! she's pretty close with sam, so i know she'd love to meet sasha. even though she's unaware sam has a ~beau. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	goddessofwar 2012-09-02 01:18 am UTC (link)
	I've been gender fail in tagging out, so I've missed opportunities to tag Elena sooner! And to say that they both love books! I'd really love for them to meet and I'll toss Sasha Elena's way the next.chance I get! /o/ (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	matter 2012-09-02 01:34 am UTC (link)
	ohhh they do? then they'll have plenty to talk about. with both of us looking for a way to make a thread happen, i'm sure it will soon enough! \o/ (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	/still AC wysinwyg 2012-09-07 10:25 am UTC (link)
	FIVE DAYS LATER I SEE MY RIDICULOUS AUTOCORRECT TYPO /HEADDESK "gender fail" -- I don't know what other word I wanted to use but I wanted to express how fail I was. I'm so sorry. '''orz (Reply to this) (Parent)

thisiscalm
2012-09-02 07:51 pm UTC (link)

I need more Sasha in my life. This is the only real crit I have right now.

The only one of your muses that I'm really canon-familiar with is Reki and it's been a good few years since I saw Haibane Renmei, but it feels like you really got her down. She just feels right to me, you know? I keep trying to think of some advice since I know it's not the most popular canon out there, but I'm drawing major blanks! She's pretty great and I'd love to do more with her at some point!

Kohran and Aidan will always give me happy fuzzy feelings. I think she might be the one to finally ease his discomfort around technology, which would be a great feat indeed! Overall you're just fun to play with and I'm forever amazed at how distinct the different voices of your girls are!

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goddessofwar
2012-09-03 01:51 pm UTC (link)

eeee~ ask and ye shall receive! /o/ All of your kids, Sasha and I will welcome with open arms!

Thank you very much for giving me feedback on Reki! You people who know Haibane Renmei sure are ninja X3;; There are times I'm afraid I take too much liberties with her, but I'm glad that she comes out right for you.

If that is what Kohran's doing -- and will do! -- for Aidan, then I'll take it that I'm doing an okay job with her since that's one of the dreams she has in canon: machines and people, working together.

Again, many thanks for the kind words Rica! I look forward to playing more with you!

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bluemoondog
2012-09-03 06:12 pm UTC (link)

I'm pretty useless for crit here but I really enjoy your muses. I loved Sasha from the beginning, how she was the first to really be kind and giving to Helix. I'd love to see them interact again now that the boy has changed and adjusted a little more to living in Marina.

Kohran is quirky and loveable and she's fantastic. I like that she and Aidan have kind of ganged up on getting Helix involved in theater too.

Then you have Reki, and though they only talked that once, I like how she's kind of laid back and sort of contrasting the other two ladies in your line-up.

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goddessofwar
2012-09-04 06:19 am UTC (link)

/holds Bren and Helix!

I'm doing my best to catch up or at least touch base with Sasha's CR (she has an unfortunate open post for this dayweek!) as I slowly (but surely) get out of my failzone since my long hiatus. I so enjoy bouncing my kids off of Helix so I'll make sure to toss them his way the next chance that comes up!

I'm thinking Kohran probably pisses Helix off with her chipper. It's only a matter of time 'til Helix performs in public AND HE WILL LIKE IT. >D

If Helix wants someone who's chill and keeps her concern to herself, just call on Reki~!

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