The Lupin/Snape Lurve Community

Hi all, I've got my SnuSa nearly finished, I'm still being me and obsessing over some bits, but it is all written out and I really need someone to go over it with a fine-toothed comb for everything from SpaG to character consistency and coherency. I would be ecstatic if I could get several volunteers, please don't feel you aren't needed if someone has already offered! My story is in the R/nc-17 range, though only very briefly, so underage people should steer clear. I don't think there is anything squick worthy in it, so this should be a pretty user friendly story. It isn't dark or overly angsty, though the boys do butt heads a bit. Please reply below and I will send you a copy. Thank you, thank you, thank you! :D

love, azure_rosa