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Mods of Kiseki RPG (kiseki_mods) wrote in kiseki_rpg,
@ 2009-04-07 16:14:00

Current mood:	bored
Entry tags:	concrit meme, meme, mod post, ooc

Concrit meme - Take 10!
Attention please~

We're having a concrit meme again! The rules are the same as last time:

Comment to this post with a list of your characters.

Then reply ANONYMOUSLY to the other players, giving concrit on how they're playing/their characterization/their interactions/etc. Or ask them stuff, like why did chara A did this or say that or w/e.

Flame anyone, and I'll kill you in the face. I'm looking for something that can be positive to the game and can help us ALL improve. Not for someone to go 'OMG YOU SUCK' at someone else. Not that I expect that to happen, but I'm just making sure.

You can just praise a character, if you can't find anything wrong with what they do. If you can elaborate on WHY you like that character, it'd be better, but hey, I won't mind if you can't do anything but keyboard smash at someone's awesome.

This is semi-mandatory! If you really, really can't take concrit, then go ahead and don't participate, but I'd rather everyone did.

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	mimamotteiru 2009-04-08 06:31 pm UTC (link)
	ucanthascookies mimamotteiru (Reply to this) (Thread)

(Anonymous)
2009-04-08 09:36 pm UTC (link)

Your characters are great! I'm glad that you didn't leave the game completely! <3

Nadeshiko is so great, but I'm not really familiar with her character so I can't really say anything productive.

But for Kendappa, this isn't a crit so much as a suggestion but maybe make her entries more approachable? Sometimes, I want to go and reply to her, but I find it really hard to think of something to comment with. I don't know if it's only me, though; I'll work harder in the future!

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	(Anonymous) 2009-04-08 11:04 pm UTC (link)
	Seconding what the first anon said about the entries, and adding that I think Nadeshiko's absolutely perfect! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	(Anonymous) 2009-04-09 07:28 am UTC (link)
	With a minor character like Nadeshiko it's hard judging whether or not something's really IC or not, but all I can say is that from the way I see her character, your portrayal of her is great (actually, that goes for your Kendappa as well). (Reply to this) (Parent)

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