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hdcup_mod ([info]hdcup_mod) wrote in [info]hd_worldcup,
@ 2008-04-17 00:05:00

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Entry tags:fic, nc-17, prompt: the tower, round i, team fanon

Precious Things -- Team Fanon
Title: Precious Things
Team: Fanon
Author: [info]charlotteschaos
Prompt: The Tower
Wordcount: 15,200
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None.
Summary: Scorpius Malfoy has been kidnapped and only one boy man hero can save the day.
Author's Note Thanks to my betas L and A. This story is based on the four elements of the Tower card according to Wikipedia: chaos/sudden change, crisis/revelation, disillusionment and downfall/ego blow.


Precious Things


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[info]lilithilien
2008-04-17 05:38 pm UTC (link)
I liked so much about this story! Wonderful little details (Scorpius as the bratty young Malfoy was especially good, tormenting peacocks and Goyle equally) and you had some fantastic lines that had me giggling (Draco knowing how to take care of a cock stands out). Very well written.

My only complaint was the leap from "I'm not gay" to "I'm being buggered and liking it." It felt a bit jarring, which distracted me from an otherwise amazing story. I think my preference would have been to introduce Draco to gay sex through something less extreme.

But aside from that, I thought you did a great job with this. And I don't think I've ever liked Theodore Nott as much as I did here!

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