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quill_lumos ([info]quill_lumos) wrote in [info]severus_sighs,
@ 2009-10-02 21:06:00

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Entry tags:challenge, drabble, event: anniversary 2009, member: quill_lumos, rating: g

Marking the Past
Title: Marking the Past.
Author: [info]quill_lumos
Pairing: Severus and Harry.
Rating: G
Word Count: 3 x 100
Warnings: Totally safe for Torinas
Summary: Anniversaries can be hard, except when they’re not

Disclaimer: These characters do not belong to me, they are the property of JK Rowling, Warner bros, Bloomsbury and Scholastic and a bunch of other folk. I’m just playing in the sandbox, k?

A/N: Many thanks to my darling Trufflesmom, thanks for betaing, darling. What would Truffle and I do without you? Sorry [info]whitecotton, I tried writing these drabbles without contractions, , but it didn’t quite look right, so I put ‘em back. Finally, here they are, three drabbles, with four contractions and no hyphenations whatsoever.

Have just read all of the anniversary drabbles, and commented on every single one! Loved them, peeps.





Severus


Severus hated anniversaries: he counted them, tragedy by tragedy, in his mind.

His mother died when he was fifteen; that had been at Christmas.

His father died at Easter beneath the wand of his fellow Death Eaters, ‘doing Severus a favour by removing his Muggle past’; at the behest of the Dark Lord, of course.

Lily died at Halloween.

Dumbledore was kinder; his death wasn’t linked to any festival. Severus could grieve for him at any time he wished.

But he’s sick of grieving, sick of sorrow.

He just wants to move on and forget everything that has gone before.


Harry



Harry’s always disliked anniversaries; they punctuate his life with so much loss.

Other people in Harry’s life celebrate birthdays, but Harry’s never really got in the way of them. He never saw the point really.

Oh, there was a while, a short while, when he tried on Christmas, to see if such happiness was for him, but now it just brings memories of Sirius and the paternal relationship that never was.

The spring makes him think of the final battle… of Remus and of Tonks and of Fred.

Summer reminds him of Cedric, whom hardly anyone remembers anymore.

Anniversaries hurt.



The First Time



It’s the first time for both of them.

Their first proper anniversary. In fact, everything else they’ve shared this year has been a first: their first Christmas; Severus’ first birthday when he was truly loved; Harry’s first party, that he could remember anyway; the first year that nobody died.

Tomorrow will be a whole year since they kissed for the first time, since the first time they made love. They’re an unlikely couple, but they’ve been together for twelve months now.

Severus sighs and kisses the very tip of Harry’s nose.

Maybe sometimes, just sometimes, anniversaries can be good?



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[info]accioslash
2009-10-02 08:26 pm UTC (link)
Maybe sometimes, just sometimes, anniversaries can be good?

*Applauds* Oh, this was perfect. So very much in-character for both of them. Thank you for giving them such a happy ending. *sniffle*

♥♥♥

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[info]quill_lumos
2009-10-02 10:07 pm UTC (link)
perfect eh? *grins happily*

Thank you for a perfect comment.

Glad you liked it.

*hugs*

Lucie xx

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[info]shoeboxes4all
2009-10-02 08:36 pm UTC (link)

What is it about the tips of noses. Lovely.

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[info]quill_lumos
2009-10-02 10:08 pm UTC (link)
*g*

I think Harry's is particularly kissable.

*hugs*

Lucie x

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[info]alisanne
2009-10-02 08:38 pm UTC (link)
Awwww. Lovely and very satisfying. ♥

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[info]quill_lumos
2009-10-02 10:09 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much, dear lady.

*huggles and snogs*

Lucie xx

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[info]gingertart50
2009-10-02 09:09 pm UTC (link)
These are lovely - the line Severus could grieve for him at any time he wished made me sniffle. So true! And they're happy at last, which is of course the only way it can possibly end. *nods*

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[info]quill_lumos
2009-10-02 10:10 pm UTC (link)
*grins*

Thank you. So glad you liked them. Of course they had to have a happy ending.

*hugs*

lucie xx

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[info]aeryun
2009-10-02 11:34 pm UTC (link)
Aw. So sad, and then such a good ending. And really...perfect all around!

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[info]quill_lumos
2009-10-03 04:14 pm UTC (link)
Thank you hon.

*snuggles*

Lucie xx

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[info]atypicalsnowman
2009-10-02 11:49 pm UTC (link)
Oh, Lucie! This is just so lovely. It's just wonderfully written first of all. You just took me right there with them, especially for poor Severus.

And the last one hundred words just made everything wonderful. It was as though I was watching them, then suddenly was right up close for Severus kissing the tip of Harry's nose.

*sigh*

Really, really enjoyed that. Just beautiful, darling.

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[info]quill_lumos
2009-10-03 04:16 pm UTC (link)
Thank you sweetheart,

It was a great fest to be a part of. ou guys all wrote sooo much! Am off to read those that i missed last night now. Hopefully you've had a quite day, clearing up the party mess and taking the bottles to the bottle bank?

Hope the hangover's improved.

*hugs*

Lucie xx

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[info]torino10154
2009-10-03 02:42 am UTC (link)
So beautiful. That's just how I imagine them-finally able to have a bit of happiness. Well done.

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[info]quill_lumos
2009-10-03 04:19 pm UTC (link)
Thank you

I do loke to see them together. The snarry world is such a nice place to be sometimes isn't it? Far better than that nasty canon place.

*hugs*

Lucie xx

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[info]fancypantsdylan
2009-10-03 08:27 am UTC (link)
*sniff* that was lovely, lets hope they have lots more *first times*

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[info]quill_lumos
2009-10-03 04:19 pm UTC (link)
*nods eagerly*

Let's hope so.

*hugs*

Lucie xx

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[info]whitecotton
2009-10-03 05:46 pm UTC (link)
Oh, darling. Severus' *sighs* grief for Dumbles was so beautifully expressed here. Quite touching.

Lovely story, and thank goodness for giving them a happy ending -- which we all know is only right and proper!

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[info]snafu07
2009-10-03 09:17 pm UTC (link)
Ooo! They just make everything better for each other! I love it :)

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[info]lemondropseven
2009-10-04 03:58 am UTC (link)
Lucie,

This is beautiful. I could feel it as I was reading: loss, grief, and hope. I love your happy ending. :)

*hugs*
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