Re: i came back to squee a bit i'm also a big fan of this paragraph. And Tweak, frequently says, "YELLOW" and everytime he does i think, "your hand slides between his legs and they open for you, jut like always." which might be one reason why i don't mind tweak that much.
you are genius! and i totally concur about the hotness of this fic! I swear i have the sex memorized in my brain.